有语法错误吗?part1:Will E-books replace traditional books?我写的一小段文章,大家看看有语法错误吗?题目是Will E-books replace traditional books?The development of information technology ,especially the update of internet,peopl

有语法错误吗?part1:Will E-books replace traditional books?我写的一小段文章,大家看看有语法错误吗?题目是Will E-books replace traditional books?The development of information technology ,especially the update of internet,peopl
有语法错误吗?part1:Will E-books replace traditional books?
我写的一小段文章,大家看看有语法错误吗?题目是Will E-books replace traditional books?
The development of information technology ,especially the update of internet,people gradually come into contact with more and more E-books of different kinds.Someone regards that E-books will replace the traditional books finally,because E-books are more portable,transferable,and the most important is the lowest price.

有语法错误吗?part1:Will E-books replace traditional books?我写的一小段文章,大家看看有语法错误吗?题目是Will E-books replace traditional books?The development of information technology ,especially the update of internet,peopl
【加上介词去掉句子独立性 Due to 】the development of information technology , especially the 【update 改成 updating】 of internet, people gradually come into contact with more and more E-books of different kinds. Someone regards that E-books will replace the traditional books finally, because E-books are more portable, transferable, and the most important is the lowest price.

整体语法还好，就是连词用的不是很好，体现不出来句子之间的前因后果。我稍微作了一点小改动：
Along with the development of information technology, especially the upgrade use of internet, people gradually get contact with more and more E-books o...

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整体语法还好，就是连词用的不是很好，体现不出来句子之间的前因后果。我稍微作了一点小改动：
Along with the development of information technology, especially the upgrade use of internet, people gradually get contact with more and more E-books of different kinds. Someone believes that E-books will replace the traditional books evetually, because E-books are more portable, transferable, and the most important is its comparable price.

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Someone regards that E-books will replace the traditional books in the future.Because E-books are more portable, transferable, after all they are much cheaper.