这篇英语作业语法错误,求修改My class went to Xiaoyaojin Park last Sunday.I met my classmates at the school gate and went to the park at 9 am.We went to the park by bus.we went boating.We had picnic.We took pictures and we also went to the

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这篇英语作业语法错误,求修改My class went to Xiaoyaojin Park last Sunday.I met my classmates at the school gate and went to the park at 9 am.We went to the park by bus.we went boating.We had picnic.We took pictures and we also went to the
这篇英语作业语法错误,求修改
My class went to Xiaoyaojin Park last Sunday.I met my classmates at the school gate and went to the park at 9 am.We went to the park by bus.we went boating.We had picnic.We took pictures and we also went to the zoo.We came back at 3 pm last Sunday.I had a good time that day.

这篇英语作业语法错误,求修改My class went to Xiaoyaojin Park last Sunday.I met my classmates at the school gate and went to the park at 9 am.We went to the park by bus.we went boating.We had picnic.We took pictures and we also went to the
My class went to Xiaoyaojin Park last Sunday.I met my classmates at the school gate and went to the park at 9 am.We went to the park by bus.we went boating、 had picnic、took pictures and also went to the zoo.We came back at 3 pm last Sunday.I had a good time that day.

没有发现错误

虽未发现错误,但在作文里最好来些承接词汇,不要平铺直述。

I went to the park at 9 am .改为 We strarted at 9 am . 为避免和前面的重复。 We went to the park by bus .改为 We took a bus to the park . We had picnic .改为 We had a picnic .

had a picnic. 其他没问题。

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