英语达人来看下这些句子对不对这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of areas drown.(make+n.+adj.) 2.We had lost 437 million from now on,with thousands of people homeless and roads destroyed.(with+n.+过去分

英语达人来看下这些句子对不对这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of areas drown.(make+n.+adj.) 2.We had lost 437 million from now on,with thousands of people homeless and roads destroyed.(with+n.+过去分
英语达人来看下这些句子对不对
这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of areas drown.(make+n.+adj.) 2.We had lost 437 million from now on,with thousands of people homeless and roads destroyed.(with+n.+过去分词) 3.Therer are some classmates who have bad eating habits.(会不会不大native?）4.For example,some classmates don"t eat breakfast,some like eating snacks,some are particular about dood and others eat too much food.(可以这样表达吗?)5.It is a good eating habit that is important because it is good for our health.(这样写强调句对吗?) 如果写对了,请跟我说下,如果错了,请讲下为什么顺便改正!

英语达人来看下这些句子对不对这些句子是我自己造的(摘取)：1.A heavy rain made a lot of areas drown.(make+n.+adj.) 2.We had lost 437 million from now on,with thousands of people homeless and roads destroyed.(with+n.+过去分
我先说一下总体感觉.句子一看就是为了用结构而造出来的,怪怪的.不过用于练习可以.有问题的句子是：
2.With thousands of homeless people and roads destroyed,we have lost 427 million so far.
homeless是形容词,放在名词前面；from now on和过去完成时不搭.
3.There are some students with bad eating habits.不知道你是不是必须用定语从句,英语简洁一点更好,原句classmate换成students更好些,或者my classmate比较好.
4.The bad habits include picky eating,overeating,not having breakfast,and eating too much snacks.你那个表达肯定是不对的.英语是讲求逻辑的.句子与句子间必须有连词来表示逻辑关系.你的句子是并列关系,一般用and.由于句式类似,我觉得用名词更为简洁.长一些的名字结构往后放.
5.Good eating habits is extremly important because it is good for our health.这句我一时没想到怎么用强调句改.我用中文也找不出你要强调什么……

嗯，大部分都正确，至于地道不，我也不好说呢。在第二句中，million是复数，要加上s。根据句意，应是迄今为止，我们已损失了4.37亿了，from now on意为从现在起，不合语态语意，应换做up to now.在第五句中，你的意思应该是：拥有一个好的饮食习惯很重要。表达即：It is important to keep a good eating habits....

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嗯，大部分都正确，至于地道不，我也不好说呢。在第二句中，million是复数，要加上s。根据句意，应是迄今为止，我们已损失了4.37亿了，from now on意为从现在起，不合语态语意，应换做up to now.在第五句中，你的意思应该是：拥有一个好的饮食习惯很重要。表达即：It is important to keep a good eating habits.

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