求英语高手来指出作文中的错误Many student are inclined to talk with their penfriends.They seldom take care of their parents.In their opinion,their parents always don't like them to do this or that.They believe that only their penfriens c

求英语高手来指出作文中的错误Many student are inclined to talk with their penfriends.They seldom take care of their parents.In their opinion,their parents always don't like them to do this or that.They believe that only their penfriens c
求英语高手来指出作文中的错误
Many student are inclined to talk with their penfriends.They seldom take care of their parents.In their opinion,their parents always don't like them to do this or that.They believe that only their penfriens can understand them.But l think it is wrong.l suggest that students should spend more time with their parents and friends.
First of all,we should talk about our daily life with our parents to share our happiness.Next,when parents look worried,we should ask them what we can do to help them.Parents will be happy to hear this.After that,when the weather is changable,we should suggest them to wear more clothes or less.Finally,when you make a decision,you can ask them for advice.They must be happy to help you.
Of course,when your friend is in trouble,you should give him a hand.For a man who is worried,it is very important.
In a short,Let's take more care for others.The love we give away is the only love we keep.
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求英语高手来指出作文中的错误Many student are inclined to talk with their penfriends.They seldom take care of their parents.In their opinion,their parents always don't like them to do this or that.They believe that only their penfriens c
1.Many students 复数
2.changable是可变化的意思,这里是换季的意思,最好写成changing
3.总之是in short
4.最后一段 Let's take more care of others.不该用for,take care of 固定搭配.
5.For a man who is worried,it is very important.for 表示因为不能放句首,改成As 更合适,worried about 是定的man,有宾语,所以要有about
基本就这么多,文章总体写的不错,加油!
spend with 是可以的,spend time on sb/sth只是其中一种用法

Many student are inclined to talk with their penfriends.
incline to think
They seldom take care of their parents. In their opinion, their parents always don't like them to do this or that.

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Many student are inclined to talk with their penfriends.
incline to think
They seldom take care of their parents. In their opinion, their parents always don't like them to do this or that.
don't like them doing this or that
They believe that only their penfriens can understand them. But l think it is wrong.l suggest that students should spend more time with their parents and friends.
spend time on sb/sth是固定句型，所以这里把介词with改为on
First of all, we should talk about our daily life with our parents to share our happiness.Next,when parents look worried, we should ask them what we can do to help them.Parents will be happy to hear this. After that, when the weather is changable, we should suggest them to wear more clothes or less.
suggest them should wear
Finally,when you make a decision,you can ask them for advice.They must be happy to help you.
Of course, when your friend is in trouble, you should give him a hand. For a man who is worried, it is very important.
In a short, Let's take more care for others.The love we give away is the only love we keep.
take care of 是固定的句型 上文出现过，take more care for others 应该改为 take more care of others
In a short 错误 应该是 In short 总之，简而言之

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1.Many students
2.their parents always don't allow them to do this or that