求一篇英语作文,150词左右.题目是“The disadvantage of personal investigation”.语法高级点.写的好加分.不要复制的.

求一篇英语作文,150词左右.题目是“The disadvantage of personal investigation”.语法高级点.写的好加分.不要复制的.
求一篇英语作文,150词左右.题目是“The disadvantage of personal investigation”.语法高级点.
写的好加分.不要复制的.

求一篇英语作文,150词左右.题目是“The disadvantage of personal investigation”.语法高级点.写的好加分.不要复制的.
It is an obvious fact that detectives become a common career in nowadays society.They not only help the police to find out the evidence,but investigate someone by spying as well.In the meantime,whether it is a acceptable or not has sparked a heated debate.As far as I am concerned,personal investigation should no longer exist.
Despite detectives sacrifice themselves sometimes in order to find out the truth,the result they got will never help to solve the problems in most cases.There is nothing worse than share the privacy to a stranger.The kind of imformation lost could cause some series crime,for example,threats,kidnaps and thefts.It is a shame that the spying has been legalized in a democracy world.
In conclusion,personal investigation arises lots of problems,not just because it steals privacy from others,but also because it increases the crime rate.这是答案

It is an obvious fact that detectives become a common career in nowadays society. They not only help the police to find out the evidence, but investigate someone by spying as well. In the meantime, ...

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It is an obvious fact that detectives become a common career in nowadays society. They not only help the police to find out the evidence, but investigate someone by spying as well. In the meantime, whether it is a acceptable or not has sparked a heated debate. As far as I am concerned, personal investigation should no longer exist.
Despite detectives sacrifice themselves sometimes in order to find out the truth, the result they got will never help to solve the problems in most cases. There is nothing worse than share the privacy to a stranger. The kind of imformation lost could cause some series crime, for example, threats, kidnaps and thefts. It is a shame that the spying has been legalized in a democracy world.
In conclusion, personal investigation arises lots of problems, not just because it steals privacy from others, but also because it increases the crime rate. 自己写的！！！

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1, 语法高级应该不是问题. 问题是什麼叫做"personal investigation"阿 ???????? 难道又是中式英语?
2. 英语不好不是罪, 但你好歹也先把自己的意见用中文先表答出来, 再让我们帮忙转成英文吧!!!!!!!!
算了, 帮穷不帮急, 帮笨不帮懒. 88