请指出一段英文信的错误之处(包括格式)Department of PhilosophyNanjing UniversityNanjing 210093P.R.ChinaTel:+86-25-83590000 April 3,2008 Professor Bush.Clinton,Editor The Johns Hopkins University Press701 W.40th St.,Suite 275Baltimore,M

请指出一段英文信的错误之处(包括格式)Department of PhilosophyNanjing UniversityNanjing 210093P.R.ChinaTel:+86-25-83590000 April 3,2008 Professor Bush.Clinton,Editor The Johns Hopkins University Press701 W.40th St.,Suite 275Baltimore,M
请指出一段英文信的错误之处(包括格式)
Department of Philosophy
Nanjing University
Nanjing 210093
P.R.China
Tel:+86-25-83590000
April 3,2008
Professor Bush.Clinton,Editor
The Johns Hopkins University Press
701 W.40th St.,Suite 275
Baltimore,Maryland 21211
U.S.A
Dear Prof.Bush:
I am an associate professor of Nanjing University,I’m now submitting a paper titled How to do Things with Texts which was delivered at the “International Symposium on Literary Criticism” hold at Oxford University in December 8-9,2007.I hope it is acceptable to your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.
BTW,I cited something from the book listed in the references of your paper which published in Journal of Contemporary Philosophy (Vol.19,2006).The book is listed as follow:"Bush.Johnson,et al.The Doctrine of Virtue.New York:Macmillan,2004." Do you happen to know any information about Prof.Bush and Professor Johnson?I am appreciated if you could give me a list of their publications.
Please feel free to give me a reply as soon as possible.
sincerely yours,
Li Xiaoping,PhD candidate

请指出一段英文信的错误之处(包括格式)Department of PhilosophyNanjing UniversityNanjing 210093P.R.ChinaTel:+86-25-83590000 April 3,2008 Professor Bush.Clinton,Editor The Johns Hopkins University Press701 W.40th St.,Suite 275Baltimore,M
Dear Prof. Bush:
I am an associate professor of Nanjing University. (用句号来断句,不是逗号“,”） I’m now submitting a paper titled “How to do Things with Texts”（去掉which was） delivered at the International Symposium on Literary Criticism （冒号放错了）(去掉hold） in (不用at) Oxford University in December 8-9,2007.
I hope it is acceptable to your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.
改： I look forward to my gaining acceptance by your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.
BTW, I cited a publication (what "something"?) from the book listed in the references of your paper (去掉which,多余） published in Journal of Contemporary Philosophy (Vol. 19, 2006). The book is (as follow后面必须加s,as follows这是惯用式) :"Bush. Johnson, et al. The Doctrine of Virtue. New York: Macmillan, 2004." Do you happen to have (不用know） any information about Prof. Bush and Professor Johnson? I appreciate (use active voice - you are not to be entertained - "am appreciated"if you are to entertained) if you could give me a list of their publications.
Please (get rid of "feel free"!) give me a reply as soon as possible.
Or change to:
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
sincerely yours,