来位大神帮忙做一篇英语改错!The earth is on the fire and it's getting hotter and hotter .Global warming trend is very several at present .People aroud the world may feel that the climate have been getting steadily warmer and warmer in rec

来位大神帮忙做一篇英语改错!The earth is on the fire and it's getting hotter and hotter .Global warming trend is very several at present .People aroud the world may feel that the climate have been getting steadily warmer and warmer in rec
来位大神帮忙做一篇英语改错!
The earth is on the fire and it's getting hotter and hotter .Global warming trend is very several at present .People aroud the world may feel that the climate have been getting steadily warmer and warmer in recent years.It's side effects are alarming.a warmer glodal climate melts the ice caps ,raised sea levels ,Moreover ,Is disturbed weather patterns,Causing droughts,Severe storms and hurricanes .people suffer a lot disasters relevant to global warming.to stop global warming we should make immediate or continual efforts.you hope the situation will soon change .global warming catches and holds our concern for it affects us and will affect our late generations.we cannot wait any longer .do it right now.
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来位大神帮忙做一篇英语改错!The earth is on the fire and it's getting hotter and hotter .Global warming trend is very several at present .People aroud the world may feel that the climate have been getting steadily warmer and warmer in rec
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The earth is on the【去掉】 fire and it's getting hotter and hotter.Global warming trend is very several【severe】 at present .People aroud【around】 the world may feel that the climate have【has】 been getting steadily warmer and warmer in recent years.It's side effects are alarming.a warmerglodal 【global】climate melts the icecaps ,raised【raising】 sea levels ,Moreover ,It disturbed【disturbs】 weather patterns,Causing droughts,Severe storms and hurricanes.people suffer【from】 a lot 【of】disasters relevant toglobal warming.to stop global warming we should make immediate or【and】 continual efforts.you 【We】hope the situation willsoon change .global warming catches and holds our concern for it affects us and will affect our late【next】 generations.we cannot wait any longer .do itright now.

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