谁帮我看看语句通不通顺4My good friendHis name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together.

谁帮我看看语句通不通顺4My good friendHis name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together. 谁帮我看看语句通不通顺4My good friendHis name is YangZiQiang,he is 13 years old.He is fat,eyes are small.He likes his bicycle and likes to play ping-pong with me together.格式呢？开头是不是空两格？还有My Chinese name is Liu 谁帮我看看语句通不通顺3My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13(thirteen) years old.There are 4(four) persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.I love my family.I like playing with my 谁帮我看看语句通不通顺2My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,and I don't have an English name.I am 13 years old.There are 4 persons in my family,my father,my mother,my younger brother and I.I love my family.I like playing with my younger brother,w 谁帮我看看语句通不通顺My Chinese name is Liu Yu Kun,I am 13 years old.I don't have English name.My house includes the 4 people person,they are my father,mother,younger brother with me.I love them.I like to play with my younger brother toge you are ever in my effection帮我翻译一下,要语句通顺并且连贯的 英语翻译i dont know,hi name is longjun ,hi is my uncle,i dont think want to him,so hi is younger than me ,my ma mi not agree急,顺便帮我看看语句有没有不通顺或错误的地方,速度者大大的积分追送```` 帮我看下这句话语句是通顺的吗? 大家来帮我看看这句话通顺么? when you have good friends you really feel special and want to share in the spirit of friendship.同志们来帮我翻译一下啊.语句要通顺! good lost my 看到一句话good lost my love~觉得应该不通顺~求正解,有这句话吗?不会翻译成亲爱的,我好失落吧~ 帮我看看一下,句子通不通顺,求助高手我抓不住沙漠的沙,沙漠的沙穿过我的手缝隙,我的梦想碎裂了.哦，请教我怎么改句子 谁帮我看看, 初中英语作文,帮我看看有没有错的语句 来帮我看看我的英语语句有没有语法错误!To known magento core code is hard for me that not good at english! 求英语高手帮我检查下这段简介有没有问题.偶正在写毕业论文,简介非要用英语的,可是偶学日语多年英语已经掉了,写完以后拿不准有没有错,看看标点格式有没有错,或者把不通顺的语句理顺. 帮我看看这句话通顺不?如不通顺怎么改?**园区距离地铁*号线**站车程2分钟,36分钟可抵达中心线路**站,沿途可与8条轨道交通线实现换乘. 我是中学生,如果改得好我会加悬赏的!帮我看看有没有不通顺,或者语法错误,我英文不好,但我会努力的.I would like to talk about three point of my book report.The first point,I would like to talk about the relationshi