作业帮英语很好的同志拜托帮我看下下面文章对不对,帮我修改下,谢谢了I am so glad to stand here. First of all, I will introduce myselfMy name is Kang Jie. I am 22 years old. And I graduated from Shanghai Fudan University majoring in
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英语很好的同志拜托帮我看下下面文章对不对,帮我修改下,谢谢了I am so glad to stand here. First of all, I will introduce myselfMy name is Kang Jie. I am 22 years old. And I graduated from Shanghai Fudan University majoring in
英语很好的同志拜托帮我看下下面文章对不对,帮我修改下,谢谢了
I am so glad to stand here. First of all, I will introduce myself
My name is Kang Jie. I am 22 years old. And I graduated from Shanghai Fudan University majoring in international commerce at the nest year. I like to get on internet and read interesting books. I have a bright and cheerful disposition,liverly,actibely.
I have the strong secse of responsibility,andaptability and learning ability. I believe that I can do it very good for your give me the work. So I hope that you can give me the chance. Last,thank you for giving me an opportunity to be here.
帮忙下,看看这么自我介绍对吗?帮我修改下,谢谢
PS: 我对工作充满热情,这句英语怎么说?
PS:明年毕业语法对吗?感觉有点怪... "我将在明年毕业于..."这句话时间应该怎么写?
谢谢Gemini小猪的回答, ..关于责任感中的"感"是我打时太快打错了，谢谢你的纠正
英语很好的同志拜托帮我看下下面文章对不对,帮我修改下,谢谢了I am so glad to stand here. First of all, I will introduce myselfMy name is Kang Jie. I am 22 years old. And I graduated from Shanghai Fudan University majoring in
我对工作充满热情:I'm enthusiastic for my work.
第二段建议把Shanghai去掉
这一句中的"nest year"不知您是想表达什么意思,如果是说您去年毕业的话,应该去掉前面的"at the",把nest year改为last year
第三段责任感强的“感”拼写错了,应该是sense
“适应性”拼写错了,应该是adaptability
学习能力建议你用learning skills
下一句建议你改成do it very "well" "if" you give the "job"
补充一下下~
我将在明年毕业应该是：I will graduate from Fudan University next year~My major is and I like to