帮看下语法对吗?i trying to be a positive person,but i was saw something i shoudn't see ,it make me just wanna sneer.yes,if you want,i can don't care anything.i love you,so i try a lot of things what i don't wanna do.Don't say anything ,it's en

帮看下语法对吗?i trying to be a positive person,but i was saw something i shoudn't see ,it make me just wanna sneer.yes,if you want,i can don't care anything.i love you,so i try a lot of things what i don't wanna do.Don't say anything ,it's en
帮看下语法对吗?
i trying to be a positive person,but i was saw something i shoudn't see ,it make me just wanna sneer.
yes,if you want,i can don't care anything.i love you,so i try a lot of things what i don't wanna do.Don't say anything ,it's enough..i'll come back to myself.
i'm not you,i can't know what you think about.
i'm not you,i can't feel what you feel.
yes,i'm wrong.i'm stupid.i'm fool.
帮看下语法正确不?》3Q

帮看下语法对吗?i trying to be a positive person,but i was saw something i shoudn't see ,it make me just wanna sneer.yes,if you want,i can don't care anything.i love you,so i try a lot of things what i don't wanna do.Don't say anything ,it's en
i am trying to be a positive person,but i saw something i shoudn't see ,it makes me just wanna sneer.
yes,if you want,i won't care anything.i love you,so i try a lot of things what i don't wanna do.Don't say anything ,it's enough..i'll come back to myself.
i'm not you,i can't know what you think about.
i'm not you,i can't feel what you feel.
yes,i'm wrong.i'm stupid.i'm fool
三个语法错误点,最主要的问题是很中国式英语,以后请要多注意

I tried to be a positive man,but i saw something i shouldn't see ,it just made me wanna sneer.
yes,if you want,i will care nothing. i love you,so i tried a lot of things what i didn't wanna do. ...

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I tried to be a positive man,but i saw something i shouldn't see ,it just made me wanna sneer.
yes,if you want,i will care nothing. i love you,so i tried a lot of things what i didn't wanna do. Don't say anything ,it's enough..i'll be myself.
i'm not you,i can't know what you are thinking about.
i'm not you,i can't feel what you feel.
yes,i'm wrong. i'm stupid. i'm fool.
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I am trying to be a positive person,but i saw something i shoudn't see ,it made me just wanna sneer.
yes,if you want,i don't care anything. i love you,so i try to do a lot of things what i don't w...

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I am trying to be a positive person,but i saw something i shoudn't see ,it made me just wanna sneer.
yes,if you want,i don't care anything. i love you,so i try to do a lot of things what i don't wanna do. Don't say anything ,it's enough..i'll come back to myself.
i'm not you,i can't know what you are thinking about.
i'm not you,i can't feel what you are feeling.
yes,i'm wrong. i'm stupid. i'm a fool.

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