英语语法问题(下面一篇文章有语法错误吗?）Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .What is love?In fact,love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not eas

英语语法问题(下面一篇文章有语法错误吗?）Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .What is love?In fact,love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not eas
英语语法问题(下面一篇文章有语法错误吗?）
Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .
What is love?
In fact,love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not easy to give a one sentence definition.
Love is the rain in spring that can moisten everything.Love is the breeze in summer that can make us feel cool.Love is the fruits in fall that can let us feel the joy of the harvest.And love is the sun in winter that can keep us warm.Love is as beautiful as flowers,love is as wide as the sky.
In the earthquake in Yushu.Some people lost their lives.And some people lost their home.They were helpless.This time,people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help people in Yushu.Isn't this explain the love is extensive?
Actually,Love is around us all the time.It will appear with different types.We should make good cherish it.
My speech is over,thanks.

英语语法问题(下面一篇文章有语法错误吗?）Dear teachers and schoolmates,I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .What is love?In fact,love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not eas
整体来讲不错,但还是有一些地方可以修改.
1.I can make a speech here is my pleasure,the topic of my speech is "what is love" .
这句有错.
改为：
It's my pleasure to make a speech here,and the topic is "What Is Love".
2.love is the eternal topic for all human beings,and not easy to give a one sentence definition.
这句后半句语法有错,改为：
love is the eternal topic for human beings,and it's not easy to give it a one sentence definition.
3.This time,people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help people in Yushu.
两个句子之间需要用连词连接,如果不用连词的话,就写成两个句子而不是用逗号隔开哦.
改为：
This time when people around the world heard this,they donated money and tried their best to help people in Yushu.
4.Isn't this explain the love is extensive?
改为：
Isn't this explaining the love is extensive?
5.We should make good cherish it.
改为：
We should well cherish it.

it is my pleasure to make a speech here
one-sentence 最好有连字符，当然读的时候没所谓
yushu后句号改逗号
help people in yushu的people前最好加the
isn’t this explain the love is extensive?改为does this explain that l...

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it is my pleasure to make a speech here
one-sentence 最好有连字符，当然读的时候没所谓
yushu后句号改逗号
help people in yushu的people前最好加the
isn’t this explain the love is extensive?改为does this explain that love is extensive?
we should那一句有问题，但是我不明白你要表达什么句意，所以没法改。

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