帮忙看看这篇英语自我介绍有什么问题!good afternoon,teachers.my name is xxx.i am a fun boy.i am twelve.my school is xxxx.i am a little fat,but i am clever.i good at math.my favorite class is English and math.beause they are too fun.i l

帮忙看看这篇英语自我介绍有什么问题!good afternoon,teachers.my name is xxx.i am a fun boy.i am twelve.my school is xxxx.i am a little fat,but i am clever.i good at math.my favorite class is English and math.beause they are too fun.i l
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good afternoon,teachers.my name is xxx.i am a fun boy.i am twelve.my school is xxxx.i am a little fat,but i am clever.i good at math.my favorite class is English and math.beause they are too fun.i like gym class ,too.beausei can play my favorite sport,table tennis in the gym class.i can play table tennis very well.after school,i like to play computer games and read books.i have read a lot of books.my favorite season is spring,the climate is very pleasant.ti is often windy in March.i can fly me kite.it is always warm in April and May.ican have picnic.and the days are long,but the nights aer short.i can do lots of things.my favorite singer are 羽泉.their song are nice.i have a lot of friends.they come from all coners of the land.i like them,they like me,too.
that is all.thank for yourn listening.

帮忙看看这篇英语自我介绍有什么问题!good afternoon,teachers.my name is xxx.i am a fun boy.i am twelve.my school is xxxx.i am a little fat,but i am clever.i good at math.my favorite class is English and math.beause they are too fun.i l
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good afternoon,teachers.my name is xxx.i am a humurous boy.i am twelve.my school is xxxx.i am a little fat,but i am clever.i am good at math and my favorite subjects are English and math.because they ...

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good afternoon,teachers.my name is xxx.i am a humurous boy.i am twelve.my school is xxxx.i am a little fat,but i am clever.i am good at math and my favorite subjects are English and math.because they are east for me.I also like sport lesson .because at there I can play my favorite sport,table tennis in the sport lesson.i can play table tennis very well.after school,i like to play computer games and read books.i read a lot of books.my favorite season is spring,the climate is very pleasant.it is often windy in March.i can fly my kite.it is always warm in April and May.i can have picnic.At the moment, the days becomes long,but the nights are short.i can do lots of things.my favorite singer are YUQUAN.their songs are nice.i also have a lot of friends.they come from all around the world.i like them,they like me,too.
that is all.thank for your listening.

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12岁可以这样写是不错了!继续努力!