一小段话,求修改Accoding to the planning,the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide bicycle lanes and 7-

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一小段话,求修改Accoding to the planning,the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide bicycle lanes and 7-
一小段话,求修改
Accoding to the planning,the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide bicycle lanes and 7-meters-wide sidewalks.
For the eastern part,the width is 40 meters with nothing different from the western execpt for the greenbelt's width,being 4 meters.
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一小段话,求修改Accoding to the planning,the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide bicycle lanes and 7-
Accoding to the planning(用plan就行了), the western part of the South Circular Road is 42 meters wide including a 6-meters-wide(meters改成meter) greenbelt in the middle of the road and lying on the both sides of the road are 11-meters-wide(meters改成meter) bicycle lanes and 7-meters-wide(同上) sidewalks.
For the eastern part, the width is 40 meters with nothing different from the western(加上part) execpt for the greenbelt's width, being 4 meters.

6-meters-wide 改 6-meter-wide 有连字符就不要s。 11-meters-wide同理
11-meters-wide前面用is,因为主语是lying。
For the eastern part其实可以直接说in the east
the width of the road is 40 and the width of greenbelt is 4 meters. Besides, there is noting different from the western part.

第一段中的meters要改为单数meter
第二段最后改为execpt for the width of the greenbelt, which are 4 meters.

execpt for the greenbelt's width ,as 4 meters.