请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句等,Good morning,everybody!It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself .My English nane is Alice.I'm an out-going girl

请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句等,Good morning,everybody!It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself .My English nane is Alice.I'm an out-going girl
请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句等,
Good morning,everybody!It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself .My English nane is Alice.I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure .Ii's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.My favorite sport is swimming.It' very helpful to lose weight.When l'm tired,l like to piay the zither,this is a great way to relax .How is your way to relax yourself Can you tell me I hope that we can be friends.Thank you!

请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句等,Good morning,everybody!It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself .My English nane is Alice.I'm an out-going girl
错误1、第一行的倒数第二个,应该是name.
2、When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure Ii's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.如果你是高中毕业了,应该是过去式,不过要把最后一句去掉.但你应该是刚上高中,所以不要用when,或者前面加个I think.还有,seinor school应该是senior high school
3、第二行最后,a little只能修饰比较级,可以改成harder或者换个词（如very,so）
4、My favorite sport is swimming 这一句中不能用swimming,直接用swim就可以了.
5、It' very helpful to lose weight 少了个s应该是It's
6、.How is your way to relax yourself 这一句中应该改成to relaxing,how应该改成what.

Good morning,everybody! It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself . My English nane is Alice. I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure . It's a lit...

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Good morning,everybody! It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself . My English nane is Alice. I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure . It's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.My favorite sport is swimming.It's very helpful to lose weight.When l'm tired,l like to play the zither,this is a great way to relax .How is your way to relax yourself ? Can you tell me ? I hope that we can be friends. Thank you!
我只改了几个单词，你有错误，但不多，仔细看我改的文章吧！

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It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself. My English name is Alice. Although it's a little hard for me to study and i believe i can study well.

it's my.....my English name is....When I was in my seinor school I was under pressure.后面的It's的形式也是，还有play ，时态有些要用过去式

我自己写的--高一自我介绍。请帮忙修改修改。有语法错误或者语病的帮我指最后一段I made a joke, but he was angry.有点接不上，应该说I made