帮忙把这段话修改一下```谢啦这是一篇关于介绍如何戒烟的文章的结尾段.个人感觉写的太少了,希望各位能再帮我加两句话或者修改一下,让结尾更好些````谢啦After reading the essay,have you built up

帮忙把这段话修改一下```谢啦这是一篇关于介绍如何戒烟的文章的结尾段.个人感觉写的太少了,希望各位能再帮我加两句话或者修改一下,让结尾更好些````谢啦After reading the essay,have you built up
帮忙把这段话修改一下```谢啦
这是一篇关于介绍如何戒烟的文章的结尾段.个人感觉写的太少了,希望各位能再帮我加两句话或者修改一下,让结尾更好些````谢啦
After reading the essay,have you built up a big confidence about stopping smoking successfully?Would you want to live a healthier life in the future?Just try to quit smoking whatever obstacles you meet,just tell yourself I can do it!Just remember “nobody ever died from giving up smoking."

帮忙把这段话修改一下```谢啦这是一篇关于介绍如何戒烟的文章的结尾段.个人感觉写的太少了,希望各位能再帮我加两句话或者修改一下,让结尾更好些````谢啦After reading the essay,have you built up
After reading this passage,and as a high school student,I,togetther my
friends volunteered on a campaign to discourage public smoking by
persuacling people in public places to extinguish their cigarettes
and put their cigarettes ends into our mental boxes."no smoking" is
just a slogan .we must put it into practice.have you built up a big
confidence about stopping smoking successfully?would you want to live
a healthier life in the future just try quit smoking whatever obstacles you meet,just tell yourself i can do it !and we return give them a memorial sticker bearing patterns and words spreading the spirit of the "no smoking".

according to the above analysis,it is obvious that smoking, which would do nothing good to our own healths,should by all means be quited. So for those people who really cherish their lives, the best i...

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according to the above analysis,it is obvious that smoking, which would do nothing good to our own healths,should by all means be quited. So for those people who really cherish their lives, the best idea for them is to leave the cigarette away no matter how much diffiuclties ought to be conquered.
Just remember"nobody ever died from giving up smoking"
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