看一下这个句子是否有语法问题During the three years,I took part in various students’ activities,played the role of a student leader successfully and delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.
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看一下这个句子是否有语法问题During the three years,I took part in various students’ activities,played the role of a student leader successfully and delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.
看一下这个句子是否有语法问题
During the three years,I took part in various students’ activities,played the role of a student leader successfully and delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.
看一下这个句子是否有语法问题During the three years,I took part in various students’ activities,played the role of a student leader successfully and delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.
took part最好改成taken part
另外如果需要润饰一下,students’ activities最好改成student activities
delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.在英语里面也显得有点怪,最好换个说法,改成shared my learning experience with my fellow students during several speeches in our faculty
the--those
students' activities...--activities organized by student union, and I played as a role of the leader.I...
During the past three years, I've taken part in ...就是有点中式英语的感觉