作业帮麻烦各位大师看看我写的这篇英语短文语法和外国人使用习惯对不对I love myselfHello everyone,my name is Huang,Jeff Huang ,Chinese name is xxx,I’m 13 years old,height 165 cm,weight unknown.I got some pimples on my face recen
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麻烦各位大师看看我写的这篇英语短文语法和外国人使用习惯对不对I love myselfHello everyone,my name is Huang,Jeff Huang ,Chinese name is xxx,I’m 13 years old,height 165 cm,weight unknown.I got some pimples on my face recen
麻烦各位大师看看我写的这篇英语短文语法和外国人使用习惯对不对
I love myself
Hello everyone,my name is Huang,Jeff Huang ,Chinese name is xxx,I’m 13 years old,height 165 cm,weight unknown.I got some pimples on my face recently.Even so,I still think I’m handsome.I like PE very much,In all my favorite in thesport of basketball.I can play it verywell,I usually use shot medium,and I like “Houston Rockets” and player James Harden very much.I like listen to Classical music,I like Mozart very much.I also like listento English songs very much.My favourite singing star is Elton John ,I likehis song 《Can You Feel The Love Tonight》very much.My favorite subject is Maths.Because itcan makes a man clever.I like reading Dale Carnegie and Verne's book verymuch.I want to make steady progress,make good progress in Middle School.
麻烦各位大师看看我写的这篇英语短文语法和外国人使用习惯对不对I love myselfHello everyone,my name is Huang,Jeff Huang ,Chinese name is xxx,I’m 13 years old,height 165 cm,weight unknown.I got some pimples on my face recen
In all my favorite in thesport of basketball.这句应该改成I like basketball most in all my favorite sport events.
I usually use shot medium.既然用了use,后面要用个名词.或者你改成I usually shot in middle-distance.推荐一个词,jump shoot（名词）
player James Harden 可以加个it's 在player之前.
其他都没什么不对的.
有什么疑惑的可以再问我,我尽量给你解答.
小建议哈。。very much用的太苹繁了。。还有啊i like 也是。。多换几种说法么。。总得来说有点生硬啦。。