英语检查,改正下错误就行!hello everyonetoday I will give a presentation about men's makeup.I would like to ask the men here about some questions ,'1.have you ever worn makeup?2.if you haven't ,in the future u think u will accept to wear mak

英语检查,改正下错误就行!hello everyonetoday I will give a presentation about men's makeup.I would like to ask the men here about some questions ,'1.have you ever worn makeup?2.if you haven't ,in the future u think u will accept to wear mak
英语检查,改正下错误就行!
hello everyone
today I will give a presentation about men's makeup.
I would like to ask the men here about some questions ,'
1.have you ever worn makeup?
2.if you haven't ,in the future u think u will accept to wear makeup?
3.Generally how many kinds of basic tolitery kit for women's makeup are there .i 'm very glad to look forward the man's answer.who can tell me?
有男的知道一般对于女人来说最基本的化妆KIT有哪些
if you can tell me just 4kinds ,i will give u a giorgio armani's new perfume.
in nowadays.more and more men's skin care and makeup products come out and sell well in the market
现在出来了越来越多的专门为男士的护肤品和化妆品）
you just do as me like this~i think its so easy to u
有错误或者写的很别扭的地方都帮我改下,

英语检查,改正下错误就行!hello everyonetoday I will give a presentation about men's makeup.I would like to ask the men here about some questions ,'1.have you ever worn makeup?2.if you haven't ,in the future u think u will accept to wear mak
有些中国式英文的痕迹,我来改写一下,供参考(考虑到你要自己说出来,应该口语化强一些）:
Hello everyone,
Today I'm gonna present you with something on men's makeup and demonstrate how to use them.
I would like to ask you,all the gentlemen here:(pause,then say)
1.have you ever put up any makeup?
2.if you haven't,do you think you will accept the idea of wearing makeup?and do you think you will put up something in the future?
3.Any idea on how many kinds of basic cosmetic kits for ladies there are?I will be very happy if a man answers these questons.Any one please?
If you can tell me 4 kinds,i will give u a gift -- giorgio armani's new perfume.
Nowadays,more and more skin care and makeup products come into the market for men and they sell really well.
Makeup for men is not hard at all.I will show you how easy it is if you just follow me on what I will be doing here.

today I will give a presentation FOR (instead of " about") men's makeup.
I would like to ask the male presented today (no 'about') some questions.
2. If you haven't, Do you think you will acce...

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today I will give a presentation FOR (instead of " about") men's makeup.
I would like to ask the male presented today (no 'about') some questions.
2. If you haven't, Do you think you will accept the idea of wearing makeup in the future.
I'm very INTERESTED in the men's answers. Who could tell me PLEASE?
(No 'in') Nowadays, increasing amount of men's skin care and makeup products are coming into the market, and sell well.

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*basically it's ok, here are just some small corrections:
hello everyone
today I'm here to give a presentation about men's makeup
I would like to ask the men here some questions, here the...

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*basically it's ok, here are just some small corrections:
hello everyone
today I'm here to give a presentation about men's makeup
I would like to ask the men here some questions, here they are:

1.have you ever worn makeup?
2.if you haven't, do you think you would accept to wear makeup in the future?
3.Actually how many kinds of basic toilette kits for women's makeup are there ? I'm looking forward to hear a masculine response to this question. Anyone?
Nowadays, more and more men's skin-care and makeup products come out and sell well in the market
Just watch me do it, then do like I do, It's easy

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hello everyone
today I am going to show a presentation about men's makeup.
I would like to ask a gentlemen here some questions ,'
1.have you ever used makeup?
2.if you haven't ,in the ...

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hello everyone
today I am going to show a presentation about men's makeup.
I would like to ask a gentlemen here some questions ,'
1.have you ever used makeup?
2.if you haven't ,in the future， do u think u will accept to use makeup?
3.Generally how many kinds of basic cosmetic kit for women's makeup are there .i 'm very glad to see a man can answer it。
If anyone can tell me at least 4kinds of cosmetic kit ,he will get a prize！It is a Giorgio Armani's new perfume。
Nowadays，more and more men's skin care and makeup are produced and they are sold very well in the market。

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