修改英语文章,初二水平.嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.谢谢大家.对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起... The disadvantage of computersAt the moment，more and more students

修改英语文章,初二水平.嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.谢谢大家.对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起... The disadvantage of computersAt the moment，more and more students
修改英语文章,初二水平.
嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.
谢谢大家.
对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起...
The disadvantage of computers
At the moment，more and more students are keen on surfing the Internet,that’s bad for they health.
In facts,some information can prove surfing the Internet is harmful.For example, there’s a game very well-known in a recent, just ‘steal vegetables’. This game leads some students get up in 3 am to surfing the Internet.They check the e-mails everyday many times and spent a lot of time to talk with net friends that forget time.
For these reasons,they lose interest in study, and the health worse and worse.
I think they are so stupid.They don’t know the importance to sleep?They are making joke to life!
Teenager,we should protect our life，treasure time.so,away the Internet temptation!

修改英语文章,初二水平.嗯,就帮忙看看有木有语法错误,最好说一下我错哪了.谢谢大家.对也....我真是太迷糊了..对不起... The disadvantage of computersAt the moment，more and more students
The disadvantage of computers
At the moment,more and more students are keen on surfing the Internet,that’s bad for THEIR health.
In FACT,some information can prove surfing the Internet is harmful.For example,there’s a game very well-known RECENTLY,just ‘steal vegetables’.This game leads some students TO get up AT 3 am to SURF the Internet.They check the e-mails everyday many times and SPEND a lot of time TALKING with net friends that THEY forget THE time.
For these reasons,they lose interest in study,and the health IS GETTING worse and worse.
I think they are so stupid.They don’t know the importance OF sleep?They are making FUN OF life!
Teenager,we should protect our life,treasure time.so,away the Internet temptation!

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