短文改错One day the sun was very strong,Jim was so tired to walk.There was no trees near the road ,so he restedunder a big rock.After drinking some water ,he took hisshirt,lay down on the ground and fall asleep at once.he was very tired that he d

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短文改错One day the sun was very strong,Jim was so tired to walk.There was no trees near the road ,so he restedunder a big rock.After drinking some water ,he took hisshirt,lay down on the ground and fall asleep at once.he was very tired that he d
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One day the sun was very strong,Jim was so tired
to walk.There was no trees near the road ,so he rested
under a big rock.After drinking some water ,he took his
shirt,lay down on the ground and fall asleep at once.
he was very tired that he didn't wake up until the evening.
he was just about to jump while he felt something moving
near his feet.He looked up and saw a long black snake.
Jim was so frightening that he didn't dare to move .The
snake began to crawl across his legs.It crawled on and
on until it was disappeared under the rocks,Jim jumped
to his feet,picked up his shirt and ran down the road.

短文改错One day the sun was very strong,Jim was so tired to walk.There was no trees near the road ,so he restedunder a big rock.After drinking some water ,he took hisshirt,lay down on the ground and fall asleep at once.he was very tired that he d
不是十行吗?怎么变成十一行了?
1.so → too
2.was → were
3.took和his中间加入off
4.fall → fell
5.very → so
6.while → when
7.up → down
8.frightening → frightened
9.正确
10.去掉was
11.正确

阳光强烈的一天，吉姆疲劳的走在路上。这条路边没有一棵树，因此他在一个大岩石下休息。再喝过一些水后，他脱下他的衬衫，躺在地上一会就睡着了。他太累了，以至于直到晚上他也没有醒。当他感觉到有东西在他的脚上动，他差一点跳起来。她睁大眼睛看到一条黑色的长蛇。吉姆太害怕了他不敢移动。蛇开始在他的腿上爬。它不停向前爬，直到它消失在岩石下，吉姆跳了起来，拿起他的衬衫，跑开了这条路。...

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