求修改语病 强者可以分为天才型与努力型,我虽然算不上强者,但我属于勤奋的努力型,我一直都想证明：努力是能够超越天才的!The strong can be divided into type talent and effort.Although I not strong,but I b

求修改语病 强者可以分为天才型与努力型,我虽然算不上强者,但我属于勤奋的努力型,我一直都想证明：努力是能够超越天才的!The strong can be divided into type talent and effort.Although I not strong,but I b
求修改语病
强者可以分为天才型与努力型,我虽然算不上强者,但我属于勤奋的努力型,我一直都想证明：努力是能够超越天才的!The strong can be divided into type talent and effort.Although I not strong,but I belong to the type of hard work.I always want to prove:efforts genius is the ability to go beyond!
无法承认自我的人,终究会失败Unable to recognize themselves who will eventually fail
并不是成为领导者的人就会被大家所认可,而是被大家所认可的人才能成为领导者Not become the leader of the people will be recognized,but recognized by all people can become a leader
虽然违反规定的人会被称为废物,但是,不珍惜同伴的人连废物都不如Although the violators will be referred to as waste,however,do not cherish the people even waste as companion
一个人只有能够认清自己,他才能够找到自己的缺点,他才能真正知道自己想要的Only one person can recognize themselves,he was able to find their own shortcomings,he can really know what you want
凭借武力是无法获得别人尊重的,若想要他人能够真正的尊重你,就要凭实力去争取Force is unable to get others to respect,if you want to be really respect you,then with the strength to fight
虽然规定很重要,但与同伴的性命相比,他根本不值一提.只有同伴之间相互帮助,才能取得最后的成功
Although very important,but with his life,he is not worth mentioning.Help each other only between partners,to achieve the final success
虽然他并不聪明,但是他有着其他人难以相比的毅力,这种毅力足以使他超越任何人Although he is not clever,but he had other people to compare the perseverance,perseverance is enough to make him more than any people

求修改语病 强者可以分为天才型与努力型,我虽然算不上强者,但我属于勤奋的努力型,我一直都想证明：努力是能够超越天才的!The strong can be divided into type talent and effort.Although I not strong,but I b
强者可以分为天才型与努力型,我虽然算不上强者,但我属于勤奋的努力型,我一直都想证明：努力是能够超越天才的!The strong can be divided into type talent and effort.Although I not strong, but I belong to the type of hard work.I always want to prove: efforts genius is the ability to go beyond!
改：the strong can be divided into those who possess talent and those who puts effort. Though i am not strong, i work hard, and i always have a thirst to prove that the one with effort can surpass the one with natural talents.
无法承认自我的人,终究会失败Unable to recognize themselves who will eventually fail
改： people who are unable to recognise and admit themselves for who they are will eventually fail.
并不是成为领导者的人就会被大家所认可,而是被大家所认可的人才能成为领导者Not become the leader of the people will be recognized, but recognized by all people can become a leader
改： becoming a leader can not make the people recognise and admit your thoughts, but if people recognize your thoughts you posess the aptitude and ability to become a leader.
虽然违反规定的人会被称为废物,但是,不珍惜同伴的人连废物都不如Although the violators will be referred to as waste, however, do not cherish the people even waste as companion
改：though the people who violate laws will be referred as trash, people who do not cherish their friends are even worse than trash.
一个人只有能够认清自己,他才能够找到自己的缺点,他才能真正知道自己想要的Only one person can recognize themselves, he was able to find their own shortcomings, he can really know what you want
改：A person can only find his flaws when he recognize himself for who he is. Then he can know what he reaally wants.
凭借武力是无法获得别人尊重的,若想要他人能够真正的尊重你,就要凭实力去争取Force is unable to get others to respect, if you want to be really respect you, then with the strength to fight
改： you can not gain respect by force, so if you want people to truely respect you, then use your own power to gain it.
虽然规定很重要,但与同伴的性命相比,他根本不值一提.只有同伴之间相互帮助,才能取得最后的成功
Although very important, but with his life, he is not worth mentioning. Help each other only between partners, to achieve the final success
改: though rules are important, it is not even worth mentioning compared with your friend's life. You can only attain success through the help of your partner.
虽然他并不聪明,但是他有着其他人难以相比的毅力,这种毅力足以使他超越任何人Although he is not clever, but he had other people to compare the perseverance, perseverance is enough to make him more than any people
改：though he is not clever, he has preseverance that none other posesses, this kind of preseverance is enough to make him surpass the rest of them.
我可以担保没有任何语法错误.而且这些都是我自己翻译的.