请给出修改意见并打分.Topic:It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sports or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports perso

请给出修改意见并打分.Topic:It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sports or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports perso
请给出修改意见并打分.
Topic:It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sports or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays,under the fast booming society,more and more parents tend to expose their children to various early learning skills to develop their potential.The eagerness of high expectations from parenthood can be understood.However,some people suggest that talented human beings are innate.Others suggest they are taught and trained to be.
For the first opinion holder,I don't totally agree with.Although there remains a different gap among natural human being,talented people could arrive no where without necessary training and practice.They may find themselves easier and faster to grab expertise within their interested field than others.But that doesn't mean they will follow the right track if they give up learning halfway.Thus education is crucial for everybody regardless they are talented or not.
For the second opinion holder,I still disagree.There remains huge discrepancy among society members.Everyone is different.There's no universal standard which can be granted to foster a person's ability.Not everyone in this world can be taught to be a sportsman or musician.The diversity constructs the different allocation of human resources,which allows individual makes contributions to the society according to their interest and ability.
I believe everyone is a masterpiece of mother nature.Anyone born in this world is talented somehow.No universal standard of training shall be imposed on different individual.Everyone needs the proper training and practice to achieve their full potential.No matter how talented a person is,one still needs hard work and diligence to make achievements really happen.

请给出修改意见并打分.Topic:It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sports or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports perso
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