作业帮请老师为这篇first aid短文纠错,【First aid】 In our life,we always face some accidental harm.Usually these harms can't influence our normal life.But,sometime,one,having suffered from a serious harm,is very dangerious,even losing one
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请老师为这篇first aid短文纠错,【First aid】 In our life,we always face some accidental harm.Usually these harms can't influence our normal life.But,sometime,one,having suffered from a serious harm,is very dangerious,even losing one
请老师为这篇first aid短文纠错,
【First aid】
In our life,we always face some accidental harm.Usually these harms can't influence our normal life.But,sometime,one,having suffered from a serious harm,is very dangerious,even losing one's life.To be sure,it is necessary that we should master some method of first aid in order to prevent from more harm. If we face serious harm,for example,one's carotid is punctured by sharp objects,we should let patient lay without moving,and use towel to wrap the wound preventing from excessively bleeding.then,we should resort to the hospital.Because,in normal situation,other a carotid can maintain blood for 30minutes.For other example,if one suffers from a accident,we should firstly bound his injured position,same,keep patient without moving until doctors are coming. So,mastering a right method of first aid is of great benefit to us
请问第二篇（图）5分的情况下,上面这一片几分?
请老师为这篇first aid短文纠错,【First aid】 In our life,we always face some accidental harm.Usually these harms can't influence our normal life.But,sometime,one,having suffered from a serious harm,is very dangerious,even losing one
harms；
sometime加s；
losing one’s 改 lose his；
method 加s；
face改过去式（虚拟语气 if one suffers ）；
other a carotid can maintain blood for 30minutes感觉有问题.
same加lly；
最后一句of去了
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