这段英语文字有没有语法或单词方面的错误A Day to RememberIt was Monday of April last year.My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital.That day was a memorable day for me.You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible:“I will i

这段英语文字有没有语法或单词方面的错误A Day to RememberIt was Monday of April last year.My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital.That day was a memorable day for me.You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible:“I will i
这段英语文字有没有语法或单词方面的错误
A Day to Remember
It was Monday of April last year.My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital.That day was a memorable day for me.
You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible:“I will increase your troubles in pregnancy and pain in giving birth”.I know the travail of giving birth to a child.After hours' labor pains,I labored a girl.I wept tears when I heard a loud cry of my baby.My husband said to me:“You are working hard,honey!Thank you!” He told me that my baby was very lovely and healthy.I feel very happy because I became mother in that day.

这段英语文字有没有语法或单词方面的错误A Day to RememberIt was Monday of April last year.My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital.That day was a memorable day for me.You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible:“I will i
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It was Monday in April last year. My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital. That day was a memorable day for me.
You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible: “I will increase your trou...

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It was Monday in April last year. My daughter was born in Shanghai East Hospital. That day was a memorable day for me.
You will find the passage somewhere in the Bible: “I will increase your troubles in pregnancy and pain in giving birth”. I know the travail of giving birth to a child. After hours' labor pains, I labored a girl. I wept out tears when I heard a loud cry of my baby. My husband said to me: “You are working hard, honey! Thank you!” He told me that my baby was very lovely and healthy. I feel very happy because I became mother in that day.

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