英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误Dear ,Good morning!I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful c

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英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误Dear ,Good morning!I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful c
英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误
Dear ,
Good morning!
I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful clothes made by 100% cotton for your children sometime if you like.
I have been very thankful for your good care for my children.You are always welcomed to contact me.
Your Sincerely,

英语邮件 谁能帮我看看有没有错误Dear ,Good morning!I feel that there is much predestined relationship between us.You are just like the mother of my two kids in America.I am a manager in a fashion company.I will send you some beautiful c
邮件基本没有错误,表达得很清晰.
唯一一处：I have been very thankful...不必用完成时,直接说 I'm very thankful...就可以了
另外,落款处应为 Yours Sincerely,
祝一切顺利!

我也觉得你的表达很流畅，不过我还是建议可以在much前面加个a，因为relationship是可数的。
至于thankful那句话我觉得你这么说也是可以的。

正文开头不是要空4个字母的位置

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