作业帮英语好的同学进来看一下这篇文章有哪些错误 为什么写一下原因.一行差不多1-2个错误I was only six that he held his handout to me.I took it and we walked.Then Iask him,"Grandpa,how come you haveso much lines on your hands
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英语好的同学进来看一下这篇文章有哪些错误 为什么写一下原因.一行差不多1-2个错误I was only six that he held his handout to me.I took it and we walked.Then Iask him,"Grandpa,how come you haveso much lines on your hands
英语好的同学进来看一下这篇文章有哪些错误 为什么写一下原因.一行差不多1-2个错误
I was only six that he held his hand
out to me.I took it and we walked.Then I
ask him,"Grandpa,how come you have
so much lines on your hands "He was silent for
a moment and said,"Each these lines stands for a
trouble in my life."I looked at his other hands."But
what do you have more lines on that one?" "Because
there are more the honors and joys in my life."
英语好的同学进来看一下这篇文章有哪些错误 为什么写一下原因.一行差不多1-2个错误I was only six that he held his handout to me.I took it and we walked.Then Iask him,"Grandpa,how come you haveso much lines on your hands
that→when when引导时间状语从句
it后面少了in mine（应该是你少打进去In me吧,这篇应该是高中短文改错,貌似很像某年的高考原题） 表示我握住了他的手,握手得两只收,所以用mine=my hand
ask→asked 整片文章都在叙述过去,所以要用过去时态
much→many lines为不可数名词复数,要用many.much修饰不可数
each后加of each不能单独加名词复数或代词
hands改为hand 人就两手,看完了一只就剩一只了
what改为why 这里应该是表示疑问的
去掉the honors and joys前面已经有more修饰了
that -----when
out 不要
ask---asked
much---many
each 后 加 of
other---another hand
what---why
the 去掉
that 改成when
应该是正确的
ask 改成asked 应该是过去时
much 改成many 因为line是可数名词 hands 改成hand 由下文判断此时是一只手
Each 和 these 之间加of
other 改成another hands 改成hand
what 改成 why
more 和 honors 之间的the 删除
that 变成when 因为后面句子完整 定语从句
没看出来……
ask 变成asked 全文过去时
hand 变成hands 后文有另一只手
each 后加of 固定搭配
hands 的s 去掉 另一只手
what 变成why 看翻译
the 去掉