有没有人可以看看我英文作文有什么问题.Hello!How are you?I am sorry to hear that you are going for a job interview but you are so nervous,because of that,I share my interview experience with you and holp that can help solving your ner

有没有人可以看看我英文作文有什么问题.Hello!How are you?I am sorry to hear that you are going for a job interview but you are so nervous,because of that,I share my interview experience with you and holp that can help solving your ner
有没有人可以看看我英文作文有什么问题.
Hello!How are you?I am sorry to hear that you are going for a job interview but you are so nervous,because of that,I share my interview experience with you and holp that can help solving your nervous feeling.
In fact,my interview experience is like ordinary interview experience.Here are some detail you must to prepare in your interview.
First,you should to bring all about your document,such as information about educational attainment,your interviewer always ask you whether the results is good or bad for your document.If you are not ready to there,the interviewer will be you result is bad for your document.
Then,your appearance must be correct,for instance,in your clothes you should wear decent.You can make-up,let the interviewer feel you are mature and competent.
Never forget prepare why you go to this company for an interview about your document,because the interviewer must ask you why you going him company for a job interview.Make a different interview for the interview are feeling.
You said that your interview was group interview,because of that.I think I can give you some advice and I think it can help you defeat your opponent.
You should have a good image.For example,eye-contect,listen to your opponent say something and make a smile to group interview.Then you should speak more important details or speak more other things.Catch the interviewer eyes and let him feel you are professional and you are so outgoing.
Never make a mistake——do dominate.Althougt you have a lot of information can say,but also can not monopolize pronunciation.Your attitude,not your aptitude,will determine your altitude.So you should keep a modest attitude into your group information.
I hope my advice can help you to solve all about your interview nervous problems and I hope you can get a good interview result.

有没有人可以看看我英文作文有什么问题.Hello!How are you?I am sorry to hear that you are going for a job interview but you are so nervous,because of that,I share my interview experience with you and holp that can help solving your ner
我简要讲几点吧：
1,开头的“sorry”按照中文表述没有问题,但是英语语境里面换做表示“遗憾”的“regret”一词更加通顺；
2,“because of that”也是同样的原因,你应该更加适应英语语境,比如这里就可以换成直接“Therefore”作为句首连接词就变得行文通畅；此外,你把“hope”拼写错误；
3,文件一词应该是复数形式“documents”,名词要注意单复数；类似错误多加细心留意；
4,表达不明,First那段末句表述混乱,我推测你是想表达“考官会由此制造麻烦”,所以可改为“They would give you a hard time on this”；
5,介词使用,多积累吧,Then这段里面“例如衣着方面”,你就应该用“about your Clothes”；
6,最后还是要多练习,适应英语语境的表达习惯吧,practice makes perfect,你的英文思路很不错,清晰明了,希望多从基础知识下功夫吧,纯手打,看了几遍你的作文,别忘了给个采纳~

很好啊！没什么问题的。