帮我修改下我文章的语法 During the 1930s,when Hitler came to power,the life in Nazi Germany was changed greatly.Most of the Germans lived better thought Hitler,for some groups which were not accepted by the Nazi such as Jews were have a hor

帮我修改下我文章的语法 During the 1930s,when Hitler came to power,the life in Nazi Germany was changed greatly.Most of the Germans lived better thought Hitler,for some groups which were not accepted by the Nazi such as Jews were have a hor
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During the 1930s,when Hitler came to power,the life in Nazi Germany was changed greatly.Most of the Germans lived better thought Hitler,for some groups which were not accepted by the Nazi such as Jews were have a horrific life.The Nazi affected different groups of people in different ways,workers were encouraged to work hard by award,and provide cheap entertainment; women were treated as homemakers; and Nazis took their excessive hatred of Jews to a terrible situation.
The lives of ordinary German workers have changed by Nazi rule.In order to improve the economy and get credit from the working class,in 1933 the organization called Strength through joy (Kraft durch Freunde or KdF) was established.It provided many cheap entertainments such as sport clubs,theatre trips,swimming courses,etc.KdF also provided rewards to encouraged workers work harder.A lot of people enjoyed these actives and it became more and more popular.For Nazis,it was an achievement that most people have changed their attitude of democracy; works were not interested in politics as long as they have a job to raise a family.Another crazy idea was the people’s car.Hitler believed that everyone shall own a car; he asked the factory to produced low price cars that everyone can afford.People were possessed by the Propaganda Ministry.The purpose of people’s car was to get the domestic political credit as they offered cheap cars.However,no one received a car because the factory changed to produced weapons during the World War II.Lots of Germans have degenerated under the temptation of benefit,and they also help Hitler came to power.
Besides workers,women were suffering by the Nazi rule.The Nazis declared that women’s job were provided a healthy family.Hitler believed the next generation was hope of Nazi; they were going to grow up in the Nazi society.There were many Nazi posters promoted the idea of motherhood and housewife.Hitler highlight that women must stay at home and product as much as healthy children,the Nazi also encourage women to birthed more children by awarding them base on the number of children they had.The purpose was to have more healthy and strong Nazi soldiers.Girls were taught how to be a good mother and housewife in school.In my opinion,on one hand,Hitler have taken all the women’s right by controlled their lives because of his ambition.On the other hand,he was a leader of far vision that he had a very good analysis of the political situation.He treated the young as a hope of Germany and provided a good living environment to the next generation.
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In conclusion,the life in Nazi Germany had changed by the Nazi rule.For the Nazis,they got preferential treatment and powers over other people.The ordinary people’s life was good as well that the Strength through Joy programme (KdF) offered cheap trips and other fun entertainments.On the contrary,the roles of woman become changed,women were treated as a homemaker and their responsibility was to produce a healthy family.And also,Hitler’s belief led to the Holocaust that millions of Jews were killed.However,the life in Nazi Germany have changed,these changes had leave a far-reaching historical significance.

帮我修改下我文章的语法 During the 1930s,when Hitler came to power,the life in Nazi Germany was changed greatly.Most of the Germans lived better thought Hitler,for some groups which were not accepted by the Nazi such as Jews were have a hor
During the 1930s,when Hitler came to power,the life in Nazi Germany was changed greatly.Most of the Germans lived better thought Hitler,for some groups which were not accepted by the Nazi such as Jews were have a horrific life.The Nazi affected different groups of people in different ways,workers were encouraged to work hard by award,and provide cheap entertainment; women were treated as homemakers; and Nazis took their excessive hatred of Jews to a terrible situation.
The lives of ordinary German workers have changed by Nazi rule.In order to improve the economy and get credit from the working class,in 1933 the organization called Strength through joy (Kraft durch Freunde or KdF) was established.It provided many cheap entertainments such as sport clubs,theatre trips,swimming courses,etc.KdF also provided rewards to encouraged workers work harder.A lot of people enjoyed these actives and it became more and more popular.For Nazis,it was an achievement that most people have changed their attitude of democracy; works were not interested in politics as long as they have a job to raise a family.Another crazy idea was the people’s car.Hitler believed that everyone shall own a car; he asked the factory to produced low price cars that everyone can afford.People were possessed by the Propaganda Ministry.The purpose of people’s car was to get the domestic political credit as they offered cheap cars.However,no one received a car because the factory changed to produced weapons during the World War II.Lots of Germans have degenerated under the temptation of benefit,and they also help Hitler came to power.
Besides workers,women were suffering by the Nazi rule.The Nazis declared that women’s job were provided a healthy family.Hitler believed the next generation was hope of Nazi; they were going to grow up in the Nazi society.There were many Nazi posters promoted the idea of motherhood and housewife.Hitler highlight that women must stay at home and product as much as healthy children,the Nazi also encourage women to birthed more children by awarding them base on the number of children they had.The purpose was to have more healthy and strong Nazi soldiers.Girls were taught how to be a good mother and housewife in school.In my opinion,on one hand,Hitler have taken all the women’s right by controlled their lives because of his ambition.On the other hand,he was a leader of far vision that he had a very good analysis of the political situation.He treated the young as a hope of Germany and provided a good living environment to the next generation.
In conclusion,the life in Nazi Germany had changed by the Nazi rule.For the Nazis,they got preferential treatment and powers over other people.The ordinary people’s life was good as well that the Strength through Joy programme (KdF) offered cheap trips and other fun entertainments.On the contrary,the roles of woman become changed,women were treated as a homemaker and their responsibility was to produce a healthy family.And also,Hitler’s belief led to the Holocaust that millions of Jews were killed.However,the life in Nazi Germany have changed,these changes had leave a far-reaching historical significance.

1.encouraged workers work harder-->encouraged workers to work harder
2.women were suffering by the Nazi rule-->women were suffering from the Nazi rule
3.Germany had changed by the Nazi rule-->...

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1.encouraged workers work harder-->encouraged workers to work harder
2.women were suffering by the Nazi rule-->women were suffering from the Nazi rule
3.Germany had changed by the Nazi rule-->Germany had changed by Nazi rule
4.these changes had leave a far-reaching historical significance-->these changes had left a far-reaching historical significance

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