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篇一：预测作文一 For this part
预测作文一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write acomposition on the topic: Living alone or Living with Roommates?You shouldwrite at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese。
1.有人认为大学里应独自生活
2.另一些认为大学里应与别人同住
3.你的看法
［对比选择型模板］
When it comes to/When asked about谈论主题， different people will give different answers/offerdifferent views/have different choices/preferences. Some people take it forgranted/believe大学里应独自生活。理由一. Inaddition,理由二。 However, others maintain/argue大学里应与别人同住. In their opinions,理由一. Besides,理由二。
(这两段也可写成：When it comes to/When asked about谈论主题， different people will give different answers/offerdifferent views/have different choices/preferences. Some people take it forgranted/believe大学里应独自生活. However, others maintain/argue大学里应与别人同住。Those people who hold the first opinion/make the formerchoice/have the first preference believe理由一. Inaddition, in their eyes/they insist/they maintain/they point out 理由二. However, still others think differently/do not agreethis/have different choices/preferences. In their opinions,理由一. Besides,理由二。)
Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer theformer/latter opinion. For one thing,______. For another, _______________ .Considering these, I may reasonably conclude that __________ ,
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Living alone or Living with Roommates
Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussionamong thecollege students as to whetherthey should live alone outside the campus orlivetogether with other roommates in the students’ dormitory. Opinions are dividedover the matter。(提出观点段)
Those who are in favor ofliving alone maintain thatit isvery convenient to live by
themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in aroom of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others.They are also free to equip the room with a personal computer so that they canhave easy access to the Internet. (反面论述段)
But others argue thatliving with roommates hasattractions of its own. With several students sharing the same room, eachperson’s experiences can be greatly enriched. They can learn a lot from talkingto one another. By learning to tolerate the differences between individuals,they can become more mature。(正面论述段)
As far as I’m concerned, I prefer tolive with roommates becauseI love the feeling of belonging. Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dormthan to rent an apartment outside the campus. (总结观点段)
点评：本文与校园生活密切相关，也是近年来出现的现象，人们对此的看法各异，2003年后，四级作文考查加大了学校生活类题目的考查，因为这类题材不存在地域的差异，不同地域的同学都有话可说。本预测题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的四级作文话题类似，符合命题者出题思路，值得引起重视。 预测作文二
College Students’ Job Hunting
1.近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象
2.产生这种现象的原因(如大学生追求的目标过高，专业不对口等)
3.如何解决这一问题(改变就业观念，大学生再培训等)
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Nowadays/In recent years/In modern society,描述问题，which has/have been brought into focus/has/have arousedgreat concern 。(进一步描述问题或变化)
The reasons for this phenomenon are varied. Among allthese reasons,原因一plays/play a critical role.Moreover/Furthermore/What’s more,原因二.Besides,原因三。
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effectivemeasures must be taken before things get worse. /Considering the seriousness ofthe problem, it is an urgent thing or us to take effective measures to解决该问题. Firstly/First of all,方法一.
Secondly/Moreover,方法二.Thirdly/Besides/In addition,方法三. Onlythrough these ways/Only in this way该问题才能解决。
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College Students’ Job Hunting
In recent years, college studentsfind it increasinglydifficult toget a job. It sounds strange since young college students areusually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bringtheir talent into full play. Then what underlies the strange phenomenon? (提出问题段)
There are several reasons for this.To begin with,nowadays college students aim too high. All they want are “good” jobs whichcould offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social statusamong others. Consequently, most college students are unwilling to acceptvacant jobs they consider not“good” enough. Another reason is thatthere is abig gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands ofvacant jobs. So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs。(说明原因段)
Solution to the problem requiresefforts on both thesociety and the students. The companies should value the students, talent andknowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains. They shouldbe down-to–earth in building up their career. Furthermore, they should facetheir weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent. (解决问题段)
点评：本预测题为社会热点话题。近年来大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点，媒体也广泛报道了大学生就业形势严峻，呼吁全社会共同努力；此外，该预测题也与大学生就业密切相关，也是四级作文选题重点之一。 预测作文三
Credit Cards
1.越来越多的人使用信用卡 2.信用卡的弊端 3.信用卡有哪些好处 可参考［对比选择型模板］
Credit Cards
Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banksand other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change theway they buy
things. Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”， arebeing offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will beable to “buy now, pay later”， and many see this as an advantage。(描述现象段)
But people need to be careful. There are dangersassociated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed theirbudget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, andcan become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a highrate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people。(说明问题段)
However, wisely used credit cards can improve the qualityof people’s lives. They can give people access to money to meet suddenunplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control theirexpenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their moneyhas gone。(总结观点段)
点评：这是一篇议论文，关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分：第一部分，信用卡的好处，比如说应急等；第二部分，信用卡的一些弊端，比如说鼓励一些无用的消费；第三部分：你自己的观点，理性使用。
篇二：英语四级模拟作文
英语四级模拟作文
例一：
Part Ⅰ Writing
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Malting Friends Online. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．网上交友现象越来截止普遍。
2．这种做法有利有弊。
3．我的建议。
答案:[高分作文]
With a wide variety of virtual communication tools springing up like mushrooms, making friends online has become increasingly fashionable over the past decade.
This channel of communication enables people to get acquainted with cyber friends from anywhere without any limitations, enriching their life experiences and even extending their knowledge. What's more, it is not rare for some to find their bosom friends and even Mr. /Mrs. Right. But as a double-edged sword, making friends without physically meeting each other undoubtedly has evils--tragedies occur when cyber-friends finally decide to date. Not coming singly but in pairs, some spouses get divorced because one party falls in love with cyber-lovers.
The network renders people convenient and efficient means to get in touch with the rest of the world and we should make good use of it instead of falling victims to it.
[评析]
这是一篇以分析某现象的利弊为主的说明文。
第一段用一句话说明了随着各种各样的(a wide variety of)虚拟通信工具如雨后春笋般涌现(springing up like mushrooms)，网上交友在过去十年里(over the past decade)变得越来越(increasingly)流行。with引导的名词+doing结构是表示原因的经典用法。
第二段用What's more连接了两个好处。其中的亮点词汇有：enable people to get acquainted with“使人们结识??”；enriching experiences“丰富经验”和extending knowledge“拓宽知识面”两个短语用了现在分词作伴随状语；it is not rare表示“并不罕见”，比it is common更有力；bosom friends“知心朋友”；Mr．/Mrs. Right“另一半；心上人”。
第三段话锋一转，利用比喻“就像一把双刃剑(as a double-edged sword)”，引出了坏处。成语Not coming singly but in pairs“无独有偶”的前后讲了两个坏处，恰恰与前一段的两个好处形成对比。
最后一段简洁地发出呼吁：网络给我们提供了便利、高效的接触外界的手段，我们应该好好利用它，而不应该成为其受害者。亮点词汇有：render, convenient and efficient means, fall victim to。
例二：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Conserving Energy. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．能源短缺问题已经非常严重；
2．可以采取节能措解决能源短缺问题；
3．你的看法。
答案:[高分作文]
Nowadays there is growing concern on the serious problem of energy shortage. Many people worry that energy resources on the earth will be exhausted if we use them in an unchecked way. And they believe that the energy shortage will cause serious problems and even crisis.
Conserving energy is one of the measures which have been taken to solve the problem of energy shortage. For example, some countries have a daylight saving system to use less electricity for lighting. Also, some cities have enforced some facilities for saving water at public places such as rest rooms and bars. Still more, some have enforced serious penalties on overuse of electricity, water, and farming land. By these means, people hope the drain on energy resources could be slowed down. In a word, it is high time that serious consideration was given to conserving energy. Only through immediate and effective action, can we human beings survive and enjoy life as desired.
[评析]
节能是当前备受关注的一个话题，因此可说的内容很多，紧紧围绕提纲要求进行阐述是本文的鲜明特点。文章首段直截了当地提出能源短缺这样一个话题，中间段概括说明节能是解决能源短缺问题的重要措施之一，运用并列型扩展法介绍了几种节能措施。末尾段重申主题，再次强调问题的紧迫性和严重性。 本文词语和句型运用自如。如第二段的列举法虽然没有使用first，second等词语，但使用了Also，still more，使整个段落看起来内容充实，条理清楚。结尾段使用了此类分析问题的作文的典型结尾句型“it is high time that?”。
例三：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On English Learning. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．你认为在英语学习过程中存在的主要问题是什么？
2．导致这些问题的原因有哪些？
3．对于解决这些问题，你有何建议？
It is obvious that there are some problems in college English
learning. In my opinion, something most discouraging is that many
students find difficulty in communicating with a native speaker although they have learned English for many years.
There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon. Firstly, most of the students, even many teachers of English pay little attention to the use of the language. To them, the most important thing of learning English is to memorize some grammatical rules and enlarge the
vocabulary. Secondly, many students have not realized the real purpose of learning English. They hold that they study English to pass tests, not to master a useful tool for their own use.
To change this situation, my suggestion is that more emphasis be put on improving communicative abilities in English. For example, why not advocate that the listening and speaking should be included in the test of English at various levels?
[评析]
作文首先直接提出英语学习中存在的问题，即经过多年英语学习之后，学生依然不能用英语进行交流。第二段揭示并分析产生这种现象的两个原因。主题句为：There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon．扩展句的主要内容：一是对语言运用的学习不够重视；二是学习英语的目的只是为了通过考试。最后提出解决问题而且现实可行的建议，用问句结尾，引起阅卷老师对本文的注意。 本文的语言表达准确，三个段落的过渡自然。文章开头句子明确提出问题It is obvious that there are some problems in college English learning，
第二段首句提出产生这种现象的原因有两个There are two reasons explaining this phenomenon，末段的首句用To change this situation来承接上文，最后用for example引出自己的建议。
例四：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Cheating on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．在大学里存在着考试作弊的现象；
2．你是怎么看待这一现象的；
3．如何才能制止这种现象。
答案:[高分作文]
Cheating on exams is becoming a serious problem on campus. 23% of students have ev(转 载 于:wWW.smHAida.cOM 海达范文网:for,this,part作文)er been found doing so on their exams. Some of them copy from each other, some take out their textbooks or reference books to copy, still some use the modern communication tools such as mobile phone as a way to get related information. It is obvious that cheating on exams has bad effect on students' academic performances as well as morality practice. Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams. First,
some students just play time away and want to pass the exam without efforts. And some students are under great pressure from parents and they fear to fail the exams. Second, college or universities must bear the blame for their placing more emphasis on grades than learning. Rigid grading system promotes cheating.
How can such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated? In my opinion, there are two ways we can adopt. First of all, a severe punishment should be put into effect to prevent students from cheating. In addition, we shouldre form our examination system to make it a real effective tool to measure students' abilities.
[评析]
本文的第一段指出考试作弊在很多大学里是一个很严重的问题，通过数字说明问题的严重性，主题句的提出显得有理有据。接着列举了学生的各种作弊手段。
第二段主题句“Many remarkable factors contribute to the cheating in exams.”显示本段的主要内容是分析考试作弊的原因，分别从学生和学校实行的制度两个方面进行分析。第三段提出根除作弊现象的措施。本文段落之间的衔接自然得体，如第三段开头用了一个问句“How can such an unhealthy phenomenon be eliminated?”，很自然地将话题转到如何制止作弊上来了。各个段落内部扩展句之间的逻辑层次清晰，分析透彻。如结尾段在阐述采取何种措施根除作弊时，用first of all, in addition表现了两种措施逻辑与意义上的关系。
例五：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Internet-based Instruction. You should write at least 120 words following the outline below in Chinese.
1. 1．近年来网络化学习发展迅速；
2．网络教育蓬勃发展的原因；
3．我如何利用这种形式充电。
The past decade has witnessed a boom in Internet-based instruction both at home and abroad. Online education with or without record of formal schooling is readily available.
The attraction of the fenceless school for students is obvious. Learners can cast aside the restriction of age, profession or educational background and select freely according to their own need the studying contents. Additionally, with the instructors posting syllabi, reading assignments, and schedules on Websites, and students sending in their assignments online, time and space are no obstacles to anyone. Meanwhile, expenses and resources are accordingly saved for both students and schools. Obviously, webucation broadens the channel of knowledge
reception, realizes learner-centered auto-study and enhances the learners' ability of knowledge acquisition and knowledge updating. As for me, to enhance integrated quality by selecting some popular web courses annually will be a long-term mission.
[评析]
这是一篇重点在于分析某现象的原因的文章。
第一段用两句话简单说明了过去十年里国内外网络化学习发展迅速这一现象。亮点词汇decade “十年”，比用ten years显得有水平；witnessed“见证”，以时间地点作主语，事件作宾语，表示在某个时间或者地点发生了某事，属于拟人化的用法；boom“蓬勃发展”；(at) home and abroad“国内外”。Internet-based, instruction和Online education是“网络教育”的两种不同表达，体现了用词的多样性。
第二段分析这一现象的原因。第一句是承上启下的过渡句。第二句详细说明了第一条原因：学习者可以不受年龄、职业、教育背景等的限制，自由选择课程。随后一句用Additionally引出了第二条原因：由于教学活动都在网上进行，师生都不受时空限制。紧接着用Meanwhile引出了第三条原因：费用和资源得到节省。最后用Obviously进行升华、小结：网络教育拓宽了接受教育的渠道、实现了以学生为中心的自主学习、提高了学习者获取知识和更新知识的能力。这一段中的the fenceless school 和webucation又是“网络教育”的另外两种表达。其他亮点词汇还有：cast aside, obstacles, accordingly, broadens the channel, learner-centered, enhances the ability, knowledge acquisition, knowledge updating等。
第三段简明扼要地说明自己的打算：每年选几门受欢迎的网络课程来提高自己的综合素质。亮点词汇有：enhance, integrated, annually, long-term mission。
例六：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled How to Live a Colorful Life on Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 1．许多大学生希望自己的校园生活能够丰富多彩；
2．有许多方式可以丰富大学生活；
3．对此你有什么建议？
Nearly all students want to make their life on campus as colorful as possible. With a colorful life, a student can feel meaningful and
confident. So it is necessary- for students to enrich their campus life. There are several ways to live a colorful life on campus. It is a good choice for students to join various clubs and groups. By doing so, students can make a lot of friends whose interests are similar to theirs. Besides
篇三：大学英语六级作文题目
提纲式作文：现象阐述型、解决问题型、观点对比型
图表类作文
应用文
现象阐述型
2011年6月六级真题作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Certificate Craze. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同 3.在我看来
2010年12月六级真题作文
1、 当今社会，高校排名很流行
2、 个人看法不同
3、 我自己的观点
08年12月六级真题作文
How to Improve Students’ Mental Health
1.大学生心理健康很重要
2.为此，学校可以…
3.我们自己应该…
2008年6月六级真题作文
Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?
1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多
2. 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是……
3. 我的看法
2007年12月六级真题作文
1、如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用，例如
2、数字化产品的使用对人工作、学习、生活产生的影响
解决问题型
2010年6月六级真题作文
Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 1 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；
2 出现这种现象的原因和后果；
3 针对这种现象，我认为……
2006年12月六级真题作文
1．阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要
2．现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是……
3．我们大学生应该怎么做
2005年6月六级真题作文
1. 目前盗版的现象比较严重
2. 造成这种现象的原因及危害
3. 我们应该怎么做
Useful words and expressions:
盗版：piracy (n.)
盗版产品：pirated products
知识产权：：intellectual property rights
侵犯版权：infringe sb's copyright; copyright infringement 2009年12月四级英语作文真题
irections: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an essay entitled Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 绿色校园的重要性；
2. 什么样的校园是绿色的？
3. 我们应该怎么做。
观点对比型
2009年6月六级真题作文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Importance of Name. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 有人认为名字很重要
2. 有人认为名字不重要
3. 你的看法
2009年12月六级真题作文
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;
1、对这种做法有人表示支持，
2、有人并不赞成;
3、我认为…
2007年6月六级真题作文
1、 有人做好事期望得到回报;
2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报;
3、 我的观点。
2008年6月四级作文真题
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write no less than 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率；
2.还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷，进而影响学习；
3.你对网络的看法
图表题型
2006年6月六级真题作文
题目：国外旅游
1。近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游
2。出现这种现象的原因
3。这种现象可能产生的影响
表格：
1995 2000 2005
1万人 近4万 12万以上
2012年12月四级作文： Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter Applying for a Bank Loan. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese。
1. 你的基本情况your basic information1
2. 你申请贷款的原因、数额及用途you reason for the loan, the amount and purpose
3. 你如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算
篇四：作文,
那么按2013年12月四六级考试在即，在近年四六级写作灵活命题和高跑题率的背景下，如果再死板的按照传统背诵模板的方式去准备作文可能是死路一条；如有人将作文分为“图画作文”、“话语评论”、“提纲作文”，甚至还有更加细致的分为“观点对比型”、“问题解决型”、“现象意义型”或“谚语警句型”，这样的总结方式优点是细致，缺点是繁琐，致命的硬伤是“考试题目不一定会按照某个老师总结的类型”去考。而且阅卷发现，作文跑题的原因之一就是死板的背诵了模板或预测作文，在话题相类似的情况下，直接将背诵预测作文写上去，忽略题目的要求，导致直接失分。
因此，死背模板和考前押宝预测作文都不太靠谱。也有“10大”、“20大”、甚至“30大”冠以“必备、必背”之类的字眼。试问，30篇作文还叫预测吗？
相反，不如静下心来，仔细想想考试是怎么回事吧！
只要是命题作文，就一定给出“话题”和“内容要求”；那么按照“话题”和“内容要求”写相应的功能段落和表达就确保不跑题。以下给出的文章和内容基于课堂所讲的“功能段落和表达”，目的在于帮助有缘在新东方课堂相识的同学复习课堂所讲，并帮助考生重温“现象”、“建议”、“意义”、“原因”、“观点（利弊）”和“危害”的功能表达。复习时，请勿追求面面俱到，重点复习现象、建议和意义，如果有时间也复习其他三种功能段。范文中重复部分是常见功能表达。
话题1：老年人孤独生活
Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”
首句功能为：引出图画；之后为图画内容描述，主要是四要素：人/物、动作、文字和环境，写出四要素中的两三点即可。
Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness,it is advisable for their children to spend more time in
parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find itdifficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.
二段首句：图画联系主题；之后if句为图画简单评论；in contemporary society一句为图画所暗含的社会现象；meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受；however之后为强调句式，论述意义；尾句是万能总结。
As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us
toaccompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to love, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words) 尾段首句：观点；二句建议；尾句展望未来。
话题2：网络谣言
Part I Writing ( 30 minutes )
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “It is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet rumors.” You can cite some examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Given is a simple but thought-provoking remark: “it is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet
rumors.” Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the seriousness of rumors: if we intend to have a positive Internet environment, it is advisable to eliminate/refuserumors. (51)
In contemporary society, it has become a trend for individuals to surf the Internet for the information they need. Meanwhile, an increasing number of people find it rather difficult to distinguish the true news from rumors. Searching the Internet, we can notice a great many examples like this: false news, ads and pictures. (危害) Then, it is these rumors that lead the public to be cheated, confused and even panic. As a matter of fact, experts in large numbers have come to realize the importance of Internet honesty.
As a regular Internet surfer, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for government to punish rumor makers. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to refusemaking and spreading rumors. Sparing no efforts to do so, we will witness a hopeful and promising future of Internet life.
话题3：延迟退休
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Retirement Age Be Postponed? You’d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Your writing should be based on the following outline.
1. 近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议
2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊
3. 我的看法
Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admitthat aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.
A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up
enough work-force.As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view thatpostponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.
I am convinced that we should take into account the wishes of old people. If those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks; if not, it is advisable for the society to create a comfortable twilight for them. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising and hopeful. (187 words)
话题4：教育回报
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay
entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120
Given is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in2010，it had become a trend fordoctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and
$1038. Meanwhile, we can notice that weekly earnings of college graduates with no degrees, those with high school diploma and people with less than high school diploma were $712, $626 and $444 respectively.
(注：图表描述没有必要面面俱到，写出大体趋势即可。)
Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of
education: if individuals intend to acquire/ gain/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. In contemporary America, it has become a trend for a host of companies/firms/corporations/
organizations to hire doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.
As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. Do bear in mind: education is a worthy investment.
v照“话题”和“内容要求”写相应的功能段落和表达就确保不跑题。以下给出的文章和内容基于课堂所讲的“功能段落和表达”，目的在于帮助有缘在新东方课堂相识的同学复习课堂所讲，并帮助考生重温“现象”、“建议”、“意义”、“原因”、“观点（利弊）”和“危害”的功能表达。复习时，请勿追求面面俱到，重点复习现象、建议和意义，如果有时间也复习其他三种功能段。范文中重复部分是常见功能表达。
你的一个疑虑：大家写的都一样，会不会认为是抄袭或模板？？？？？ 放一百个心：你的文章放在400万考生中，根本看不出来。
考前一天，作文还能涨20分，如何做到？？
1. 背写: 记住，没有必要全部背诵以下作文，但必须背诵高度重复的表达。因此，重点背诵：一定要注意两种类型作文写作思路上的差别。
以下几篇范文中重复的部分、就是这次四、六级写作必然能够写上的句式表达。 一定要写：
一定要将所背内容写到自己作文中，一定要字迹工整。你就可以涨分了！！
2．放松心态：只要你准备背写，只要你用上了你背写的表达，你的写作也许拿不了高分，但一定不会因此丢分。
3. 对待预测，不抱有赌博的心态。仔细审读、体会范文中的思路、表达才是重点。
但不敢保证这次必考我预测的作文，但只要用了你背诵的内容，你写作不会太差！
4. 如果赌题，不要在考试后骂我！
5. 活学活用是关键。
关于作文类型是2011年12月那样的全英文要求的作文，还是传统汉语提纲+英文题目的作文类型，笔者认为两种均有可能：几率各占50%，个人倾向于回归传统命题方式：即英语题目+汉语提纲。
但相同的话题重复可能性不大，2011年12月话题均涉及到“成功”，因此，今年2012年6月与“成功”直接相关的话题可能性不大。
有几个万能句，首先进行背诵，考试肯定能写上。
现象描述万能句：
In contemporary society, it has become a trend for _____ to _______. 中间段：
As a vital quality/ awareness/ virtue/ part of life, _____ brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for life, and helps us to _____.
It is _____ that enables _____ to build up _______.
尾段：
(建
议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates (not) to _______
（展望未来）
If we try our utmost to do so, the future of _____will be promising, hopeful and rosy.
第一部分：全英文作文
1. 乐观
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future by commenting on the Tagore’ saying, "If you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Optimism is the Road to a Promising Future
Our history has been filled with a variety of enlightening sayings, and the following is no exception: if you shed tears when you miss the sun, you will also miss the stars. This remark can be naturally associated with the significance of optimism: if one intends to witness a promising future, it is advisable for him to be optimistic.
历史上有很多发人深省的话语，下面这个就不例外：“如果你为错过太阳而流泪，那么你可能还会错过星星。”该评论使人很自然地联想到乐观的重要性：假如一个人想要看到光明的未来，他最好应该保持乐观。
Optimism is the key to success in all fields of activity, and it can be likened to the road to a promising future. (排比句：重点背三个动词：
bring, arouse, help)First, as a vital psychological quality, optimism brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for work, and helps us overcome difficulties. (强调句式：一定能
写)Second, it is optimistic attitude that enables people to build up confidence, hope and courage. （所有作文万能句）
As a matter of fact, successful people in mounting numbers
have come to realize the necessity of optimism in life, work and study. 乐观是各行各业成功的关键，而且它可以被比作通向光明未来的道路。首先，作为一种极其重要的心态，乐观会带给我们极大的动力，让我们对工作充满热情、帮助我们战胜困难。同时，正是一种乐观的心态使得人们积累了自信，希望和勇气。事实上，成功人士们早已经意识到乐观在生活工作和学习中的必要性。 (观
点)As a college student, I am firmly convinced that optimism is the road to success. （建议：一定写上）
Thus, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to cultivate optimism.( 如果字数不够：结尾展望未来：
If we try our utmost to do so, the future of our life will be hopeful, promising and rosy.) （223 words）
作为一名大学生，我坚信乐观就是成功之路。因此，我们应该鼓励、倡导和支持
篇五：电大英语Ⅱ(1)考试期末作文
书面表达
作文1（复习指导样题）
利用所给提示，说明举办奥运会的益处 The Adwantages of Housting the Olympic Games
First, it has a major effect on the economy. It can create many opportunities to develop the economy.
Second, thousands of tourists come to the games and the host city will quicken its construction of infrastructure. In the end, it brings international prestige to the country.
Third, it can arouse common people’s interest in English, so English-learning is prevailing. As a result, it is good for our fellow-citizens to improve their English.
The host cities are permanently improved, So hosting the Olympic Games is rewarding. 作文2（指南模拟1）
Directions: For this part，you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the topic My Hobbies. You should write at least 80 words and could base your writing by using the hints given below.
利用所给提示写一篇短文，说明你的业余爱好以及它们的益处。
My hobbies
Hobbies are activities from which one can benefit a lot. In my spare time, I like paiting, singing, raising flowers, and cycling. My hobbies help me relax after periods of hard work. Moreover, I can make many friends who share the same hobbies with me. My hobbies make me maintain a mental and physical balance. As you see, hobbies can be relaxing, challenging, interesting, enjoyable or educational. So everyone should have a hobby or two or even more, then the life is meaningful and amusing. 作文3（指南模拟2）
Directions: For this part，you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the topic Living In A Big City. You should write at least 80 words and could base your writing by using the hints given below. 利用所给提示写一篇短文，说明居住在大城市中优缺点。 Living in a big city
In the eyes of many people, city life is attractive with all its advantages and conveniences. People can buy almost all kinds of things at supermarkets or shopping malls, dine out in good restaurants and more important, they can have more educational opportunities. However, with the expansion of the city, more and more people are flowing into the big city. Now the traffic is heavier and heavier. The pollution problem is getting more and more serious. The living condition is worse and worse. Most people love the advantages of city life, but a big city also has its disadvantages.
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In a word, city life is attractive as well as troublesome. You should think it over before moving to a big city. 作文4（形考作业1）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the changes in your life. You should write at least 80 words and could base your writing by using the hints given below.
利用所给出的提示写一篇短文，说明你生活中的变化。
There have been many changes in my life / be better off / preserved pickles cramped and gloomy room to a big and bright flat / getting around Changes in life
Thanks to the reform and open-door policy, there have been many changes in my life.
There have been many changes in my life.First, we are better off than we used to be. In the past we lived on preserved pickles and steamed bread of corn, but now we can afford fish, meat, rice and wheat flour, etc. Besides, we have moved from a cramped and gloomy room to a big and bright flat. It is convenient and comfortable living here. Also, we have our own car and we can drive the car getting around the city easily.
What a happy life we are living now. I believe my life will be better and better in the future. 作文5（形考作业2）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty nunute.s to write a passage on the topic How to Keep Healthy . You should write at least 80 words anal could base your writing by using the hints given below.
It is necessary to keep a balanced diet / had better / it is important to do regular exercises / it is essential to keep high mood / renew our spirits and release our stress / be bound to keep healthy How to keep healthy
Nowadays, with the development of people's living standard,more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Without a healthy body, they can do nothing. For us, there are three main ways o keep healthy. First, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet, which is the basis of good health. We had better have more fruit and vegetables everyday. Secondly, it is important to do regular exercises, such as swimming, jogging and so on. Thirdly, it is essential to keep high mood, which can renew our spirits and release our stress. Following these three ways of keeping fit, We must keep healthy, in order to have a healthy body and mind completely. 作文6（形考作业3）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the topic My TV University Life . You should write at least 80 words and could base your writing by using the hints given below.
be engaged in long distance education / web-based courses / join online discussion forums /
send our homework to the tutor / solve the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial
My TV university life
As an adult student in Tianjin TV university, I’m engaged in the long distance education , which is quite new to me, but I enjoy it very much because it involves a lot of multimedia in my study. The web-based courses at the TVU are as good as those at the conventional university. However, the hours are better for us adult students, for we can study in our
spare time. We join online discussion forums, send our homework to the tutor via e-mai and solve the difficulties and puzzles in tutorial. With the help of our tutors, I’ve made rapid progress in my study. I enjoy my TV university life. 作文7（以下为课外作文8篇）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic: My Favorite TV Program. You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below: 1． 你最喜欢的电视节目是什么 2． 你喜欢它的理由 3． 作出结论.
My Favorite TV Program
My favorite TV program is called “The Animal World”, which is provided by CCTV every Sunday night.
Born and bred in the city, We cannot see any wild animals in our daily life. But we can see them in this program with the explanation of the narrator. We also learn some knowledge about animals, even some plants. So, in my opinion, it is an interesting as well as instructive program. Besides, the pictures are very beautiful and some of them also very valuable. It’s really a great joy to watch it. If you don’t believe it, just watch it yourself. 作文8
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter to a new friend, telling him/her about your ambitions and dreams. You should write at least 80 words and base your letter on the Chinese outline below: 1. 童年的梦想 2. 目前的情况 3. 对未来的希望 May 1, 2008 Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter. I’d like very much to tell you something about my dream.
When I was a little child, I often saw planes flying in the sky and I thought that it was very interesting. So I dreamed to be a pilot when I grew up. Then I could fly an airplane to defend our motherland.
I know being a pilot is very difficult, but I think I can do it. I will study really hard, gain more knowledge and pass all the medical exams. I believe that I can be successful.
Please remember me to your parents.Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours Li Hua
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage to state your views on the topic My favorite means of transportation. You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:
哪一种是你最喜欢的交通方式？ 阐述你的理由。 作出结论。
In a modern city, there are many means of transportation, such as subway, taxi, bus and so on.. But my favorite means of transportation is car.
There are some advantages in owning a car in large cities. First, a car allows one to move freely. With a car, there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun. Second, a car makes it easier and more comfortable to travel. One can set out whenever he likes.
In a word, if conditions permit, owning a car can made us work more efficiently and life will become more enjoyable. 作文10
How to Keep Healthy 保持身体健康的重要性 保持身体健康的方式 重申保持身体健康的意义
It is clear that health is the foundation of one’s future success. With the development of people's living standard,What should we do to keep healthy? First, we should exercise every day. Second, we should keep regular reasonable hours. If we get up early, we can breathe fresh air, This habit can do wonder in our life. Third, there is a proverb that says, “prevention is better than cure.”
In short, health is more important than wealth. If you want your wish to come true, you should do exercise and keep fit. 作文11 My Ideal Job
1.你理想的工作是什么 2.理由
3.如何实现理想
To tell you the truth, my ideal job is in business. This ideal came into being when I was a child.
Now, I am majoring in Industry and Foreign Trade. I’m sure what I am learning now will give me a lot of help and preparation for my future job. So from now on, I must study hard to get myself qualified for my future job. Not only should I master my speciality, I should also hae a good command of other knowledge and skills. Besides, I must spend time improving my English is very essential in doing business with foreigners. Where there is a will, there is a way. I have confidence in myself that I can be a good businessman. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart。
作文12 My Home 描述你家位置 各个角落的功能 表述
I live in a large, modern flat near the Central Square of Tianjin. In my flat, you can see one bathroom, on hall, one toilet, one kitchen, one dining room, one living room and two bedrooms. Besides, there is also a big balcony. If you’d like to see the city, you can walk into the balcony through the door in front of you.
It is very convenient living here. The flat is in excellent condition and the area is very safe. I like my flat very much. 描述自己的家
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the topic My home. You should write at least 80 words and base your writing on the Chinese outline below:
1描述你家的位置 2各个房间的功能 3表达你对你们家居条件的态度
1、I live in a flat in north of Tianjin.
2、I moved there four years ago to be closer to my mother's family and it is convenient traveling by tube and by bus.
3、It's easier in the flat because the letting agent does everything that needs doing.
4、The agent has just had the roof repaired and got the gutter replaced. 5、The agent had the windows painted two years ago 6、But the bedrooms need decorating now.
7、We could buy a new carpet, but on the other hand a new shower might be more useful.
8、I love my flat because I can study and rest in it comfortably. 作文13
假设你是李华, 想去北京21st Century 报社应聘,请根据下面内容写一封80-90词的应聘信.
姓名:李华 职业: 记者 工龄: 11年
出生日期: 1965年7月6日 出生地: 中国吉林长春 外语: 英语, 日语, 德语 有何特长: 会使用计算机 个人简历: 1990年北京大学新闻系毕业
1990年至1996年12月在深圳日报社工作. 1997年至1998年在英国BBC学习一年 1999年回报社新闻编辑部, 任主任至今 Dear Sir,
My name is LiHua, born on July 6th, 1965 in ChangChun, JiLin Province, china. I’m a journalist and already had been eleven years of working experience. I can speak Japanese and German besides English of course. I’m good at operating computer.
I graduated from Journalism Department of Beijing University in 1990 and then worked as a journalist in Shenzhen Daily till December 1996. I studied in BBC from 1997 to 1998 and since I came back in January 1999 I have been head of the News Section.
I will be very lucky if I can work in your newspaper—the 21ast century. And I think I have abilities to do the job well.
假设你是王华，想去北京21st Century 报社应聘，请根据下面表格写
Dear Sirs,
My name is Wanghua, born on July 6th, 1965 in Changchun, Jilin Province, China. I am a journalist and have already had eleven years of working experience. I can speak Japanese and Germany besides English and of course I’m good at operating computer.
I graduated from Journalism Department of Beijing University in 1990 and then worked as a journalist in Shenzhen Daily till December, 1996. I studied in BBC from 1997 to 1998 and since I came back in January, 1999, I have been head of the news section .
I will be very lucky if I can work in your newspaper---- The 21st Century. And I think I have abilities to do the job well. Yours Sincerely, Wanghua 作文14
假设你是深圳广播电视大学学生会主席,贵校要举办一次英语讲座. 请根据下面提示,用英语写一份书面通知, 全篇字数:100词左右. 时间:2004年5月5日,星期六碗7:30-9:30 地点: 文化中心大厅
主讲人: 深圳电大美籍教授 Lycidro. 内容: 美国印地安人与美国历史
注意事项: 可邀请朋友或校外同学参加,不要迟到. 听完报告后要用英文写一篇感想.
NOTICE
There will be an English lecture on American Indians and American History by Miss Iycidro , an American professor from Shenzhen TV University. It will be given in the hall of the Cultural Center in our university on Saturday evening from 7:30 to 9:30 May 5, 2004. Those who are interested in it are welcome. And you may also mile your friends from other schools to attend it.
Be sure not to be late. After the lecture, please write a report about it in English.
May 4, 2004 students tenion
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