关于一日三餐的作文
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篇一:杨晓辉老师点评作文妈妈的一日三餐
杨晓辉老师点评作文妈妈的一日三餐
重庆市南岸区涂山小学3年级2班 杨桓骁
指导老师:周莉娟 13452455926 邮编:400061
和所有的年轻女性一样,我的妈妈也非常爱美,十分在乎自己的身材。每天早上一起床,妈妈做的第一件事就是称体重,哪怕只重了0.1千克,妈妈也会很在意。为了控制自己的体重,妈妈在饮食上对自己非常苛刻。
请跟我一起来看看妈妈的一日三餐吧!
早餐
每天早上八点钟,我和妈妈都会准时到大石坝的早餐店吃早餐,店里的早餐种类很多,有可口的汤包,有香香的煎饺,还有甜甜的麻圆……我常常是一碗小面、一个煎蛋,另外还要喝一盒牛奶。而妈妈呢,却只买两个小小的老窖馒头。吃不了几口,妈妈的早餐就匆匆结束了。
午餐
辛苦工作了一上午,妈妈和同学们一起在教室里吃午餐。学校的午餐本来就比较简单,只有一荤一素一汤,妈妈却担心荤菜里的油水太多,只喝一小碗汤,吃一小碗素菜,几乎不吃肥肉和米饭。
晚餐
经过一天的学习,我早已饿得饥肠辘辘。一放学,我就直奔外婆家吃晚饭,什么鱼呀、肉呀,狼吞虎咽大吃一顿。而妈妈呢?她却
干脆取消晚餐,什么也不吃,只是象征性地吃一个苹果或一只香蕉。我真不知妈妈是怎样空着肚子熬过漫漫长夜的?
唉,我可怜的妈妈,为了控制体重,为了所谓的美,失去了多少吃的乐趣呀!
杨晓辉点评:电脑时代,许多孩子不关心周围的世界,也不关心自己的亲人,而杨桓骁 同学则不然,他不仅注意到妈妈三餐节省,还懂得妈妈减肥的决心,并且对她的过度节食表达了同情。爱家长,从关注开始吧。
篇二:三餐的英语作文
Let me tell you about his meals.
In the morning I alwasy eat at home.it's a good choice to have bread and milk for my Breakfast。Corn Bread is very nice.but it cost me 5 dollors.
I ofen have my Lunch in the school.let mee eat American Lunch.
I like eatmeat that comes from any poultry, chicken, duck, geese as well as dairy meat. beef tastes really good. Not only are they delicious and fattening, they are full of nutrition. Also, meat can come in an almost infinite array of
varieties, because they come from a whole range of animals and each can be prepared in many ways. There are many exotic types of meats around the world, hopefully, i will have the chance to sample my favourite food in many different ways.
supper is the best dinner for me.because my mom will do come decious cook for me.Ham Omelet ,ried eggs and so on.i think it will spend 10 dollores.
my family's three meals
There are three people in my family:My father,my mother and I.My father likes eggs,noodles and apples for breakfast. My mother likes eggs,soup and milk. I Iike eating bread,milk and fruit! We usually have French
fries,chicken,tomatoes,rice and porridge for lunch.We have dinner at 18:00. I like eating potapoes,soup,rice and vegetables.But my father doesn't like. He likes broccoli,rice and fruit!We don't have dessert.
We eat lots of food,because My mother think it is good for us to keep healthy
Hello!I am XXX.I am XX years old.I eat lots of heathy food for every day! I like eggs ,milk and apples for breakfast. I have rice ,tomatoes,bananas and beef for lunch! And for dinner, I like rice, fish ,pearand tomatoes. For dessert, ice-cream! Do you like it? If you have them ,you are a heathies people ,too! (自己把第一人称改为第三人称)
hi.LI Hua,for brekfest i like tomatoes and banana ,for lunch i likehamburgers salad and pears,for dinner i like chicken tomatoes,French fries.i wish you come to Chinese buy things,eat delicios food
希望能帮到你
I think breakfast is the most important, because you have nothing to eat during the whole night.Therefore,you must have breakfast every morning,it will be good for your health.Sometimes,lunch time is very short,so you just have something like hamburgers,noodles,rice and some drink,that will be OK.For supper,you have enough time to prepare the supper,then you can have
something delicious for supper.And you can drink some wine or beer during supper.But remember,after each meal,you'd better have some friuts.
For breakfast ,I like eggs,milk and hamburgers.For lunch,I like carrots,vegetables and chlcken.For dinner,I like broccoli,tomatoes and salad. I think I eat well!
I like eating bread and drink milk for breakfast .I think milk is good for my health.For lunch,I like having noodles.And
sometimes I also eat some vegetables .My mother says eating more vegetables is also good for my health.For dinner, I like to eat fish and a bowl of rice.I think my three meals are very healthy.What is your advice .
I ofen have milk and eggs for breakfast.I think it's good for us.I like to have vegetables,fish,chicken,and a bowl of rice for lunch.I like fish very
much,because it's very healthy and delicious for me.I usually have noddles or jiaozi for supper.Sometimes I eat out with my family.Afer supper I ofen go out for a walk.
How about you?
给你多写选择 1.My favorite food is Mabo Tofu. It is spicy, tender, nutritious, and delicious. My mom buys Tofu in the Market every morning, and makes different types of dishes using Tofu for dinner. Everyone in my family enjoys Mabo Tofu very much. 2.My Favorite Food
I like many different kinds of food, eggs is my favorite kind. Egg is contains a lot of essential nutrients needed by the human body, and it's commonly found in almost any part of the world.
Eggs are oval shaped spheres with a light brown color depending on the
egg.Eggs is the basic ingredient to many dishes, like omelet and french toast.
You can easily get eggs at any supermarkets, and they are sold for a very cheap price too. After the eggs are acquired, it is best to crack it open into a pan or plate and stir it evenly. If the egg is to be pan fried, then just crack the egg into the boiling pan, and remember to flip sides.
Eggs contain lots of nutrients and is a very good source of energy. Soldiers used to carry eggs to the frontline as their food. Egg is my favorite kind of food. 3.My Favorite Food
There are many different kinds of food. My favorite food is fried rice.In China, most of the people in the south eat rice. And I like fried rice best.
It’s really delicious. When I go home from school, I am always hungry. At that time I always make fried rice by myself. I often cook it carefully and it is so delicious. It makes me happy. After eating it, I am not hungry any more. Fried rice is my favorite.
4.my favorite food is big mac. it's delicious and full of nutrient. a big mac could set up by many layers, a slit of steak, a slit of cheese, a slit of leaf and two
pieces of burg bread.it could provide you the energy and protein. 有4个,选个好的吧,嘻嘻,望采纳,祝你学习顺利
hello everyone my name is yang. Today I would like to share my diet with you. I like many kinds of food. And my favorite food is beef and fish. I think they are very delicious. So at breakfast I often eat beef noodles. At lunch I have some rice fish and vegetables. when I eat dinner ,I like to eat rice beef and
vegetables. After lunch I often eat some fruits. This is my diet. Do you think I am heath? And what's your diet?Can you tell me.
我是初三学生,这篇作文是我一字字打的呦,很认真,应该符合你的水平(大概是初中),嫌多可以删。 估计应该没什么错。可以吗?
i have a good family,we live happily everyday,now,i will tell you about my daily died.in the morning,we eat some bread,milk,and eggs.at the noon,we eat fish ,meat,rise,it"s very delicious.in the evening,we have some meat and vegetables for supper,it"s my and my parents" daily diet,what about yours?
what do i like? I like a lot of things. I like eat.I eat Youtiao and Doujiang as my breakfast and I have rice and meat as my lunch and my dinner is soup with Rice, and some dessert after dinner.
It's important for everyone to have three meals everyday. Many people miss their breakfast because they do not have enough time -- that's totally bad for bodies. It's easy for you to get hungry if you do not have anyone of these three meals. Breakfast is important, beacuse you have not been eating anything for hours before you get up. You can not miss your lunch because you need to get energy for the rest of the day. Some people do not have dinner in order to lose weight, but they will feel hungry later but food taken at that time is harder to be digested, they will get less nutrition but a lot fat store in their body instead. That's why you need to have three meals on time everyday.
In the morning, we had porriage and steamed-bread for breakfast. At noon, we prepared some rice, together with some fish, chicken, some potato salad and a bowl of soup for lunch. In the evening, mother cooked noodles with fried eggs and peas for us.
Seven in the morning, I woke up to eat breakfast, wow, really rich, with bread and milk, cake or anything waiting for me, enough to eat after I go to school. At noon, I ate Youlin eggplant, chicken wings, Chinese cabbage, tomato, and a bowl of white rice, and I enjoyed it. Home in the evening, my mother made
foreign fast food meal, steak, and I am happy not to eat a little left, my mother's cooking and the chef is as good. My three meals a day is very rich, I love to eat rice every day, because it would amaze me。
我自己写的,将就用吧
中文意思是;早上七点,我起床吃早餐,哇,真丰富,有面包牛奶,蛋糕之类的东西等着我,吃饱后我上学了。中午,我吃了油淋茄子、鸡翅、白菜、番茄,还有一碗白米饭,我吃的很开心。晚上回家,妈妈做了一顿洋快餐,牛排,我很高兴,吃的一点不剩,妈妈的厨艺和厨师一样好。我的一日三餐很丰富,我爱吃每天的饭,因为它会给我带来惊喜。
I am a middle school student. I usually have breakfast at home. My mother
cooks breakfast for me everyday. I like egg and milk, but I prefer bread. I have lunch at school. I often eat beef and vegetables. I like vegetables. Because I think it is good for our health. But it isn’t delicious, so I don’t like it. As for dinner, I eat at home. My mother often cooks fish and chicken. I prefer them to berad.
篇三:七年上作文话题参考
作文例文
关于Unit 6 话题 1. Bill是你的朋友,他13岁,喜欢运动。他是一位很好的跑步运动员。但他不喜欢玩电脑游戏。在一日三餐方面,他吃得很健康。请根据下表提示写一篇文章介绍
1.Bill is my friend. He is 13. He likes sports and he is a good runner. He doesn’t like playing computer games. He usually eats well, and he eats lots of healthy food every day. For breakfast, he likes an egg, an apple and a glass of milk. He usually has hamburgers and carrots for lunch. And for dinner, he often eats chicken and broccoli. So he is a healthy boy.
关于unit7 购物话题的作文
1. (*****)假如你在淘宝网上开了一家名为 “乐淘”的店铺, 店内出售各种各样
的衣帽鞋袜等,请你根据下表提示写一则销售广告,宣传自己的店铺。要求不少于50
Letao Clothes Store
Welcome to Letao Clothes Store! We have many clothes at a very good price. Do you like T-shirts? They are just 35 yuan each. Do you need a hat? We sell hats in all colors for 15 yuan each. Do you want socks and shoes? Socks are only 12 yuan each and shoes are only 20yuan each. Anybody can afford our prices!
Come and see for yourself a Letao Clothes Store! (点评:写类似这样的购物广告,可以背诵课本2B, 稍作改动就成为自己的一篇好文章。不主张从头到尾都是一个句式,比如,本文中用了Do you like…?/Do you need….?/Do you want….?来避免了文章的重复单调,学会借用学过的句子来为自己的作文增添色彩)
2. 彼得的服装店(Peter’s Clothes Store)开张了,请用下列所给词给彼得写一则广告,不
少于6句话。
参考词汇:come to; T-shirt ($5, all colors) sweater ($ 17, red and white), shoes ($ 12, green), cheap
Come to Peter’s Clothes Store. We have many clothes are on sale. The T-shirts in all colors are at $ 5 each. The red and white sweater is $17 dollars . We also have some shoes on sale for $12. All of them are very cheap. Anybody can afford our prices.
Come and see for yourself at Peter’s Clothes Store! Don’t miss the chance. 3. Rose Store 里的学生用品正在打特价,请你帮忙写一则海报。
Pen---¥10 eraser---¥1 pencil case---¥8 backpack--¥30 shorts for sports--¥30
Boys and girls, have a look at the school things at Rose Store’s great sale!
We have pens for 10 yuan and pencil cases for 8 yuan each. Erasers are also on sale for 1 yuan. Do you like backpacks? We have backpacks in all colors for only 30 yuan. The shorts for sports are
also 30 yuan. And that’s not all. So come and see for yourself at Rose Store!
关于unit 8 的 日期话题作文
假如你是一名班主任,新的学期开始了, 请你根据下面的计划,向学生介绍本学期的主要
Nice to see you, boys and girls!
New term begins. Now I will tell you our events of this term. We have a Chinese
contest on September 20th. In October, we have a basketball game. Let’s have an English speech contest in November. Christmas Day is on December 25th. We have a Christmas party.
Wish you a happy term.
Unit 9 假如你叫TOM ,你的网友Mike来信询问你的学校生活,根据下表内容给他写一封
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. You want to know something about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. We usually have six classes a day. We start class at eight and have four lessons till twelve in the morning. In the afternoon we have two classes for two thirty to four. After class, I sometimes play football with my friends, play the guitar and sometimes read books in the reading club.
My favourite subjects are English and music, because I think they are interesting. I don’t like maths because it is too difficult for me. What’s your favourite subject?
Yours TOM
关于 school day 的话题作文
根据表格内的信息,以Sally’s Day 为题,描述一下她一天的活动安排,要求不得遗漏任何一项,数字全部用英文,字数60-80
She usually gets up at five forty. She has breakfast at six thirty. She has two eggs and a glass of
milk. She goes to school at seven thirty. School starts at eight o’clock. At twelve o’clock, she has lunch at school.
She often does her homework at seven in the evening. At 9 pm, she watches TV with her parents. She goes to bed at around ten o’clock. What a nice day! What about yours? 关于school life 的话题作文
假如你是Linda, 请给你的美国朋友sally 写一封信,告诉她你的学校生活,包括饮食 运动 学科以及你的感受等。70词左右。
My School Life Dear Sally,
Let me tell you something about my school life. I have lunch at school and like to eat chicken, fruit and vegetables. They are good for me. I play sports for about two hours every day. I often play tennis and volleyball with my friends. They are difficult but interesting. I learn many subjects. My favorite subjects are music and biology. Music is great and relaxing. I can sing many songs. Biology helps me know more about plants and animals. I like my school life.
Please write and tell me about your school life.
Best wishes Linda
篇四:中学生三餐食谱一
早餐:牛奶250ml、面包(面粉200克)、煮鸡蛋50克。
午餐:米饭(粳米200克)、蘑菇炒肉片(鲜蘑菇50克、猪肉50克、植物油5克、料酒、淀粉、蛋清、味精)、炒青菜(青菜200克、植物油5克,味精、盐适量)。
晚餐:馒头(面粉150克)、百合虾(虾仁50克、胡萝卜25克、柿子椒25克、植物油5克、百合、淀粉、味精、盐适量)、牛肉菜汤(卷心菜50克、豆腐干50克、胡萝卜50克、土豆50克、牛肉50克、植物油5克、番茄50克,味精、盐适量)。
早餐:小米粥(小米100克)、牛奶250ml、荷包蛋(鸡蛋50克)。
午餐:米饭(粳米150克)、鱼香三丝(猪瘦肉50克、胡萝卜50克、土豆100克、植物油5克,姜丝、泡椒、酱油、醋、白糖、味精、盐适量)、香菇炒青菜(绿叶菜200克、香菇50克、植物油5克,味精、盐适量)、炝花菜。
晚餐:金银卷(面粉100克、玉米粉100克,麻酱、盐适量)、清蒸鲜鱼(各种鲜鱼150克、植物油5克,葱段、姜丝、盐适量)、蒜茸茼蒿(茼蒿150克、植物油5克,大蒜、味精、盐适量)、青菜虾米汤(青菜50克、植物油5克、虾米,味精、盐适量)。
早餐:粳米发糕(面粉150克)、牛奶250ml、皮蛋拌豆腐(无铅松花蛋50克、内脂豆腐50克)。
午餐:米饭(粳米150克)、蒜苗炒蛋(蒜苗100克、鸡蛋50克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、西芹牛柳(牛瘦肉50克、芹菜茎100克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、菠菜粉丝汤。
晚餐:黑米粥(粳米40克、黑米10克)、馒头(面粉150克)、炒猪肝、猪肝50克、豌豆苗50克、植物油5克,胡椒粉、黄酒、味精、盐适量)、芸豆炖土豆(猪瘦肉25克、芸豆100克、土豆50克、植物油5克,味精、盐适量)。
早餐:牛奶250ml、鸡蛋发糕(面粉150克、鸡蛋50克、白糖25克)。
午餐:米饭(粳米150克)、虾仁豆腐(内脂豆腐100克、虾仁50克、植物油5克,淀粉、味精、盐适量)、炒青菜(新鲜蔬菜150克、植物油5克,味精、盐适量)、虾皮萝卜丝汤(萝卜50克,虾皮、味精、盐适量)。
晚餐:肉菜包子(面粉150克、猪瘦肉50克、海菜150克、植物油5克、调味品适量)、紫菜鸡蛋汤(鸡蛋50克,紫菜、调味品适量)。
早餐:虾肉馄饨(虾仁50克、菜100克、面粉100克,调味品适量)、牛奶250ml。
午餐:米饭(粳米150克)、木须肉(猪瘦肉丝30克、鸡蛋50克、植物油5克,木耳、调味品适量)、酱焖茄子(猪瘦肉30克、茄子150克、植物油5克,大豆酱、调味品适量)、绿豆汤(绿豆、冰糖适量)。
晚餐:黑米馒头(黑米面粉150克)、糖醋排骨(排骨300克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、海蛎子炖豆腐(海蛎子100克、豆腐100克、植物油5克,香菜、葱、姜、蒜、盐少许)、银耳蛋花汤(鸡蛋50克,银耳、调味品适量)。
早餐:鸡蛋薄饼(面粉150克、鸡蛋50克、植物油5克、调味品适量)、牛奶250ml、炒绿豆芽(绿豆芽200克)。
午餐:煮水饺(面100克、瘦肉80克、青菜150克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、绿豆粥(粳米50克、绿豆25克)。
晚餐:红小豆饭(粳米150克、红小豆25克)、炖刀鱼(刀鱼100克、植物油5克,葱、姜、蒜、料酒、酱油、味精适量)、炒芹菜干丝(芹菜75克、豆腐干30克、植物油5克,味精、盐适量)、干贝豆苗汤(豌豆苗50克、鲜干贝丁30克,调味品适量)。
早餐:面包(面粉200克)、牛奶250ml、煮鸡蛋50克。
午餐:米饭(粳米150克)、孜然炒羊肉(羊肉100克、木耳2克、胡萝卜50克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、香菇烧油菜(鲜香菇50克、油菜150克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、拌小青菜。
晚餐:百合粥(粳米50克,百合适量)、馒头(面粉100克)、葱爆两样(猪腰50克、猪瘦肉50克、洋葱100克、木耳2克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、青椒豆腐丝(青椒50克、豆腐皮100克、番茄50克、植物油5克,调味品适量)、紫菜虾皮汤。
篇五:小学作文写作素材
写事作文
一:写家事 一、写家里事的作文类型
1.写家里的日常生活,表现家庭生活中有意思或有意义的内容;
2.写参加家里的劳动或跟家里人学习家务;
3.写发生在家庭中的一件事,反映出家庭成员的个性素质或思想品质;
4.写我与爸爸妈妈之间发生的事情,说明自己从中受到的教育和启发;
5.写家庭中的突发事件,来抒发自己的一种情感。
二、写家里事的参考题目
1.《爸妈笑了》
2.《发生在我家的一件事》
3.《我家的双休日》
4.《我跟妈妈学家务》
5.《我有这样一个家》
6.《我家的喜事》
7.《我家的变化》
8.《在充满爱的家庭里》
9.《我家的烦恼》
10.《爸妈闹别扭时》
11.《爸妈不在家的时候》
12.《家庭给我的______》
13.《喜事临门》
14.《今天我当家》
15.《我带着分数回家》
16.《不幸发生以后》
17.《晚饭后的争论》
18.《我想对父母说》
19.《我家的“三国大战”》
20.《我的家庭》
三、写家里事的参考开头
1.《发生在我家的一件事》的两种开头
第一种开头:这件事发生在去年的冬天,我记得那年的雪下得很大很大。
第二种开头:奶奶在去年冬天不幸去世了,这件事给我们全家都带来了无限的悲伤。
2.《我有这样一个家》的三种开头
第一种开头:我有这样一个家,一个幸福美满的家。
第二种开头:幸福美满,这是我们家的最好的概括。第三种开头:在我们家,不管你什么时候来,几乎总能听见全家人格格的笑声。
3.《家庭给我的______》的两种开头
第一种开头:在我的家里,我是妈妈的“宝贝女儿”,是爸爸的“千金小姐”,他们给了我无限的爱。 第二种开头:我有一个家,一个充满了爱的家,一个充满了阳光和雨露的家。
4.《我对父母说句话》的两种开头
第一种开头:爸妈,今天,女儿要对你们说:不要老是瞧不起你们的女儿!你们的嘲笑和讽刺已经深深地伤透了女儿的心!
第二种开头:今天,在这静静的时刻,我想对我的父母说些什么话呢?想来想去,我最想说的一句话就是:爸妈,请你们尊重女儿的自尊心!
5.《我学会了做家务》的两种开头
第一种开头:红烧肉是我最喜欢吃的一种菜,可我从来也没有烧过。今天,机会来了,妈妈终于答应我,今天教我烧红烧肉!
第二种开头:红烧肉,你喜欢不喜欢吃?那你会烧吗?告诉你,昨天,我从妈妈那里学会了烧红烧肉。
6.《喜事临门》的两种开头
第一种开头:今天,爸爸回家时的脚步特别重,一进门就高声对全家人宣布:“明天搬新房!” 第二种开头:“明天搬新房!”爸爸一回到家,就兴高采烈地宣布了这一大喜之事。
7.《我家的双休日》的两种开头
第一种开头:又一个双休日到了,全家到哪里去玩呢?爸爸提议去爬山,妈妈建议去划船,我果断地投了爸爸一票。于是,我们全家就决定了去爬天平山。
第二种开头:一个双休日的早晨,在通往著名游览胜地天平山的路上,有一家三口正快速地骑着自行车——这正是我们一家,今天双休日,我们要去游天平。
四、写家里事的参考词句
幸福美满/和睦相处/勤劳致富/合家欢乐/全家团聚/一日三餐/清洁卫生/温暖舒适/尊老爱幼/互相体贴/彬彬有礼/天伦之乐/关心体谅/开怀畅饮/井井有条/各得其乐/窗明几净/宽敞舒适/应有尽有/丰衣足食/甜甜
蜜蜜/红红火火/心平气和/和风细雨/闲情逸致/精力旺盛/眉开眼笑/教子有方/频频举杯/有说有笑/欢声笑语/美酒佳肴/闲情逸致/生活优裕/健康长寿
1.电子琴声、二胡声、吊嗓声,相互交织,响成一片。
2.瞧,他仰一仰头,拐一拐腿,摊一摊手,耸一耸肩,还真有点喜剧大师的风采呢,逗得我们全家都笑了起来,四周的观众也跟着笑了起来。
3.轮到我了,我略一思索,就联了个“前功尽弃”,然后得意洋洋地看着妈妈。
4.“夫人,学习到此结束,请用餐!”爸爸替妈妈合上书本,然后学着西方绅士的派头,潇洒地做了一个“请”的姿势。
5.妈妈夹起一大块鱼肉,细心地摘掉上边的刺儿,恭敬地送到爷爷的碗里。
6.他拍拍脑袋,吞吞吐吐地说:“厂里号召捐款,我??我捐出30元。这??”没等他说完,妈妈就站起来,大声地说:“真的?你怎么不早告诉我呀,你呀你呀!”
7.你瞧吧,一家子人吃得心满意足,人人撑得肚儿溜圆,有的嘴上还在流油呢。
8.妈妈和小姑来来往往,走马灯似的把菜端到桌上,不一会儿,桌上的鸡呀、鸭呀、鱼呀、肉呀、虾呀??层层迭迭堆得像小山,香气扑鼻,令人垂涎三尺。
9.我们纷纷站起身来,笑着喊着,朝爷爷举起酒杯,这时强烈的灯光一闪,叔叔把这个美好的场面摄入了镜头。
10.爸爸故作深沉,强忍着兴奋的心情,背着手在新房里踱来踱去;妈妈高兴得像捡了个大金元宝,乐得合不拢嘴,这儿摸摸,那儿看看。
五、写家里事的参考段落
1.吃晚饭的时候,总是我们都吃完了,爸爸才从外面回来。安全帽、工作服上到处都是油污和泥浆,脚上穿的鞋子已经辨不出是什么颜色了。他总是急急忙忙地从桌子上端起一碗稀饭,也不拿筷子,只唏哩呼噜地一下子把一碗稀饭喝了下去,然后抓起两只馒头边往嘴里塞,边往外走。
(写爸爸的一心为公,写爸爸的工作忙碌,这一段写得很有特色。)
2.吃午饭时,舅母邀我们到东间的饭厅里用餐。我走进去一看,饭厅不大,但窗明几净。中间一张大圆桌,铺着花台布,四周放有钢折椅。桌子中间是一面盆鲜红发亮的大毛蟹,周围放着清炖鲢鱼、炒鱼片、白壳虾,还有难得见到的糖醋桂鱼和一盘黑乎乎的清蒸甲鱼。整个饭厅里香气扑鼻。舅舅拉我坐在他的身边,为我挑了两只又肥又大的母蟹,并帮我剥好。在我津津有味地吃蟹的时候,舅母又端上了一沙锅鱼头汤。那鱼头真大,白乎乎的汤里还翻起香菇、木耳、虾仁和鸡丁。
(小作者的描写能力很强,光是那么多的菜名就非常地丰富了。)
3.接着,我们全家演唱了《西游记》的主题歌《敢问路在何方》。乐队在奏前奏曲时,我和爸爸分别表演了唐僧、孙悟空、猪八戒和沙和尚四个造型,歌还没有唱,观众席里就响起了掌声。外公虽然年逾花甲,但嗓音浑厚,担任领唱。爸爸摇着沙球,妈妈打着铜铃,外公敲着木鱼,我击着三角铃,全家敲敲打打,声情并茂,剧场里连连响起掌声。
(真是“敲敲打打,欢乐一家”。)
4.一大早,我拉着妈妈迫不及待地跳上公交车前往医院。等车停稳,我一个箭步蹿下,跑向医院。真的,亲爱的爸爸不是坐在轮椅上迎接我,而是迈着矫健的步子向我走来,他把我抱了起来,用大胡子扎着我的脸,逗得我“咯咯”直笑。妈妈兴奋地与一位笑容满面的医生模样的人谈笑着。医院门前车水马龙,我感到汽车发出的“叭叭”声,似乎在对我说:“喜事!喜事!”素不相识的行人似乎在向我点着头:“祝贺!祝贺!”偎依在爸爸怀里,我整个心都被一个“喜”字包容着。
(后面写自己的想象是很不错的,这样写,渲染了文章喜庆的气氛,很聪明。)
5.回到家里,已经是九点多了,爸爸他们还在继续打“麻将”。在我正聚精会神地做着作业的时候,爸爸突然大声叫我去买四瓶汽水。没法,爸爸的命令不得不服从,到我要睡觉的时候,妈妈走出来对爸爸说:“不要再打了,明天一早还要上班。”爸爸却满不在乎地说:“明天我不上班,在家里补休几天。”妈妈又说:“你的儿子要睡觉的,不要吵。”说完就动手抓麻将。爸爸正玩得高兴,给妈妈这样一捣乱,就伸手向妈妈打去,啪的一声,妈妈满脸通红,泪水大滴大滴地流下来。最后,还是三位客人告辞走了,爸爸才去睡觉。当时,我真想冲出去与爸爸打架。
(妈妈的两句话写得很得体,第一句是关心,第二句就显然有意见在里面了,她的意思是:你不要我的关心,那儿子要我的关心!)
6.妈妈听后点头微笑,我也喜鹊似的跳跳蹦蹦跟随着妈妈继续散步。河岸的晚风吹得人真舒服呀,而我的心里,更为轻松,因为我对妈妈说出了憋在心里的话。
(这一段中的写景的句子很有用,它起到了借景抒情的作用。)
7.12月31日,家庭会议开始了。由我担任大会主席,按大会议程,我宣读了“家庭规定”:
一、大人不准随便地翻看小孩的日记;
二、大人不准打骂孩子,造成严重后果者,开除家籍;
三、家长必须按家规办事,不得随意改动。
读着读着,我心中十分得意,大人的特权全被我给限制住了,我又读了其它若干条款,最后附上一条:“本规定自公布之日起执行。”
(这一段写得很有情趣,有幽默感,一条一条好像在与谁订合同似的,你喜欢不喜欢读这样的文章?)
8.那是个风雨交加的黄昏,学校的操场在无情的雨水浸淋下汇成了一个“湖泊”。我和同学们在雨中“抗洪排涝”,衣服鞋袜都湿了,可大家都不在意。泄水道通了,我迈着喜悦的步伐走在回家的路上,汗水、雨水和笑容在脸上溶成一片。我幻想着回到家的情景:爸爸翘起大拇指,妈妈赞许地点头。可我猜错了,他们知道这件事后,竟然一个唱红脸,一个唱黑脸,一直不停地数落我:“你这丫头,就只会疯,要是考试不及格,看你怎么办!”“听妈妈的话,那么脏、那么累的活以后就别干了。”我不禁迷惘了,做好事是疯吗?哦,不,爸爸、妈妈,我要对你们说:“请你们理解我!”
(这一段中,写我在回家的路上的一段想象,很巧妙,它起到了衬托的作用,因为我原先想的是爸妈会称赞我的,可恰恰相反,这就衬托了父母对孩子的不理解。)
9.妈从厨房里跑出来一看,扑哧一下笑了起来:“看,你满脸黑灰,成了花和尚了。”原来是我刚才一急,忘了手里有煤灰,随手擦汗,可不就成了大花脸。“妈,别笑了,你看这怎么不成块?”“土少了呗,你呀,我告诉你,这一盆煤最少要放两铲土,两瓢水,然后再仔细地拌,别急于求成嘛,等它浸泡好了,粘了,才能脱。”这时我才明白,原来做煤球并不像我想象的那样简单。我照着妈妈讲的那样跟她一齐和起煤
来。煤和好以后,等到吃过早饭才干起来,这时做出的煤球又圆整又光滑,那一个个小球,就像一只只眼睛对着我笑。我对着小煤球做了一个鬼脸,干得更起劲了。
(妈妈的两句对话写得相当精彩,有两个特点:一个是符合妈妈的身份,生活中的妈妈就是这样说话的;另一个是对话很短,这样就让人觉得很亲切,和我们平时的说话一样。)
10.有一年的夏天,天气非常地炎热,西瓜的价钱始终跌不下来,不懂事的我却总是缠着母亲买西瓜,而每次都被她巧妙地回绝了。一天下午,邻家的大孩子坐在门口吃西瓜,看他津津有味的样子,我居然蹲在门口呆呆地看。正看得有劲,忽然听见母亲叫我回去收拾玩具,我只得恋恋不舍地回家。母亲一面和我一起收拾,一面却说:“乖囝,这几天下了雨,就给你买西瓜,记住,以后不要去看人家吃东西,人家有,我们以后也会有的。”那时,我只觉得母亲太不讲理,但逐渐地,我终于明白了这样的道理:人穷志不短。
(“我居然蹲在门口呆呆地看”,这一句话写得很真实,把一个小孩子眼馋别人吃东西的样子非常真切地写出来了,写文章,就是要写这样真切的内容。)
六、写家里事的参考题材
1.经过几年的等待,终于等到了分房子,全家人喜笑颜开;
2.爸爸妈妈在工作上取得了成绩,得到了较高的荣誉;
3.爸妈的一个愿望终于得到了实现,我们全家人热烈庆贺;
4.为家里人举行生日晚宴,场面非常热闹;
5.有一个亲戚从很远的地方回来了,久别重逢,全家人非常高兴;
6.家里的农田因为采用了科学的方法,获得了较好的收成;
7.因为一件紧张的事情,最后化险为夷,平平安安,所以全家人都感到非常庆幸;
(以上可以作为写家里喜事的参考。)
第二类:写学校的事
一、写班级学校的事的作文类型
1.写学校的一件事,表现学校的新面貌新气象;
2.写班级的一件事,反映出班级的班风和同学的精神面貌;
3.写发生在班级的一件事,表现班级同学之间的深厚友谊;
4.写发生在班级的一件事,表现出师生之间的亲密关系;
5.写发生在班级的一件新鲜事,反映新时代的少年风采;
6.写班级的一件大家议论纷纷或有争议的事情,表明自己的态度和想法。
二、写班级学校的参考题目
1.《我们班的新鲜事》
2.《这件事教育了我》
3.《真是乐死人》
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