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篇一:重庆历年高考英语作文题目及范文

Possible version I2013年重庆高考作文(一)范文参考

写作一(满分15分)

请结合材料,按要求用英语写作。

A mother said, “My son is always on the phone, sleeping, out with his friends, or in his room. He never has time to talk to me.”

要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;(2)要紧扣材料,有明确的观点;

(3)词数不少于60; (4)在答题卡上作答。

2013 重庆高考英语作文 (二)范文参考

调查显示,中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝,目前总述不足1000只。假设你是李华,现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写一封信,请他们关注着一状况并提供帮助。内容包括:

●说明写信目的

●简述江豚现状

●希望WWF如何帮助(比如:资助江豚保护项目等)

●表示感谢并期待回复

注意:(1)词数不少于80;

(2)在答题卡上作答;

(3)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student from Chongqing, China. ___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,Li Hua

该作文为个人作品,仅供参考,不当之处,不吝指教。QQ: 1434373570 Gus Wang As is shown in the material, the relationship between parents and their children is suffering (worsening). Some of the students seldom or never communicate with their parents. Several facts may account for the phenomenon.

First of all, they have few common topics when communicating with each other because of age difference. Parents may merely focus on the school performance rather than what their children are interested in.

For another, some of us depend too much on modern electronic devices such as phones, iPods , computers and so on… Anyway, these means of communication are popular among them. On the other hand, they chat with each other as they may have the same problems and feelings as peers.(同辈人)

Last but not the least, some of the students are just seeking comfort from the virtual world (computer games) in order to escape the pressure from their school and parents.

As a student, personally, I hold the view that we students should drop the phones sometimes and talk to our parents in a positive way. Meanwhile, I do hope our parents can pay much more attention to our healthy growth instead of the school performance. Only in this way can we and parents communicate like true friends.

此作文范文仅供大家参考讨论不足之处,批评指正。

Possible version IIby Gus Wang

I am writing the letter to you for the purpose of asking you for assistance. Recently, research on finless porpoises has been conducted in Chongqing. What worries us is that the number of them is decreasing sharply and their number has dropped to less than 1,000. To make matters worse, they are faced with extinction because of human’s activities. It is high time that we should take some effective measures to change the present horrible situation.

Therefore, for one thing, I do hope you can help us by providing some valuable suggestions as to how to protect finless porpoises. For another, we are planning to establish a fund used to help people realize the significance of protecting them. Meanwhile, we are making every effort to raise money for the program. We would appreciate it if you can offer us some valuable experience in funding or necessary money.

From my point of view, only by working together and helping each other can we build a more harmonious world. Don’t you think so? Thanks a lot.

I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible.

2011年

据报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中,

美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信,就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信,主要内容包括:

自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

Dear Amy,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon

Yours,

Li Hua

2010年

假设你是李华,于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后,发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信,请他们帮你寻找。

信件要点包括:

? 陈述写信原因

? 简要描述该行李

? 说明其重要性

? 期待回复并表示感谢

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suicase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.

My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it. It si really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it si what my father sent to me on my birthday.

Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

2009年

国外某网站将举办新一轮网上讲座活动,正面向全球中学生征集话题。假设你是新华中学的学生李华,经常访问该网站。现请你用英文给该网站发送一封电子邮件,向其推荐话题。内容包括:自我简介 写信目的 话题:我们应该感恩(thankful) 推荐的理由 预祝活动成功

2008年

学校网站新开设了一个"英语写作"栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括:开设的目的;栏目优势,教师在线(on-line )指导等;作文要求:内容贴近学生生活;优秀作文的鼓励办法;邀请大家参与。Welcome to the column "English Writing"!

2007年

报道,7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信,就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华,请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信,主要内容应包括: ?自我简介

?得知的情况

?表示鼓励

?打算为她做什么

?祝她早日康复

注意:

1.信的格式已为你写好。

2.信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3.词数100左右。

4.请在答题卡上作答。

范文:

Dear Amy,

I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.

At present,ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty,no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.

I will try my best to ask all my friends,schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you,which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.

May you recover soon.

Yours, Li Hua

2006

加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice,希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学习中国的语言,文化culture。假设你是李华,请在看到这则启事后,用英文给David发一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:你怎样得知David的愿望;你打算如何帮助他;你盼望他的回复

篇二:高考英语作文写作技巧攻略

高考英语作文写作技巧攻略

一、如何写出“亮点”

以前,英语作文评分的依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定。但是从2001年起实行的高考评分标准强调了内容要点,语言的多样性、连贯性和得体性, 鼓励学生尝试语言表达的多样化和复杂化。因此要写成一篇较有水准的英语作文,除了要点和语言准确度以外,还必须在语用、语法结构以及表达的多样性和灵活性上有所表现。句子单一、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕没有任何错误也不可能得高分,相反,“有些许错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分档次仍在最高档。

那么,英语作文如何才能得高分呢?以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”:

(一)改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。

试比较:

1.(原文) My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.

(修正) The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.

2.(原文) The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. (修正) Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.

(二)在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。

1. 强调句

(原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely.

(修正) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.

2. 主从复合句

(原文) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

(修正) What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.

3. 分词短语、由with或without引导的短语

(原文) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road. (修正) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.

4. 倒装句

(原文) I went to bed at 11:30.

(修正) Not until 11:30 did I go to bed.

5. 省略句

(原文) While you are crossing the street, you should be careful.

(修正) While crossing the street, you should be careful.

(三)通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

(原文) He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

(修正) He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

(原文) We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

(修正) After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.

(四)使用过渡词语

写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。那么,如何使文章行文连贯呢?这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样,起着润滑的作用。

常用过渡词

并列递进:and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, etc.

转折:but, y

重庆高考英语作文写作技巧

et, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc.

因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc. 对比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc.

总结:in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, to sum up, in conclusion, etc. 总之,要使文章的层次高,可读性强,考生应增加些较高级的词汇与复杂的结构,并运用恰当的连接词和复合句,只有这样,才能在考试中取得理想的成绩。

四、高考英语作文开头万能公式

(一)开头万能公式一:名人名言

有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型: A proverb says, “ you are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言) It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言) 更多经典句型:as everyone knows, no one can deny that?

(二)开头万能公式二:数字统计

原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中是不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: travel by bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 five-day work week better than six-day work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型: A recent statistics shows that ? -8910

二、高考英语文章主体段落三大杀手锏

(一)举实例

思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,尽管举例子! 例如:In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food.

更多句型:to take ? as an example, one example is?, another example is?, for example

(二)作比较

写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的; 世界上没有同样的指纹,没有相同的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。

相似的比较:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …

(三)换言之

没话说了,可以换一句话再说,让你的文章在多一些字,或者文邹邹地说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字: I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. that is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. in other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我们举过的例子: I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. that is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.

更多短语: in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply

三、高考英语作文结尾万能公式

(一)如此结论

内容说完了,毕竟要归纳一番比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.更多过渡短语: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型: thus, it can be concluded that?, therefore, we can find that?

(二)如此建议

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.

书面表达(满分25分)

假设你叫李华,在2008年暑假期间成为了北京奥运会的一名志愿者,请你用英语给美国的笔友Tom写一封100字左右的信,谈谈你当志愿者的心得体会。要点如下:

1.志愿者工作艰辛而快乐;

2.锻炼了英语口语;

3.增强了合作精神和责任感;

4.你感到很骄傲,并将珍藏这份记忆。

注意:

1.信件的开头和结尾都已给出,不记人总词数。

2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

How is everything going?

Looking forward to your reply. Take care.

Yours

Li Hua

篇三:2015高考英语作文写作技巧和训练

高考英语写作高分秘诀

近几年来全国英语高考试卷中的写作题目主要是:记人、叙事、写信、通知或看图作文等。大多为记叙文、议论文和应用文。高考英语写作是高考试题中对考生来说相对比较难的一题,高考英语写作主要考查考生综合运用语言的能力。这主要要求考生根据所给的情景和要求写一篇书面材料,但是,它并不是要求考生按照试题里的“提示”进行逐句翻译,而是要求考生在充分领会“提示”的前提下,用自己的语言写成一篇内容充实、语言正确、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。在写作时,考生应注意以下几点:

(1)写记叙文时要有时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果六要素,写作的时候要明白清楚地写出来。写人物时,要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等。叙事时要描写事情发生的经过与发展的结果,写清楚事情发生的前因后果等。

(2)写议论文时要求考生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来阐述自己的看法。议论文应由论点、论据、论证三部分构成。

(3)高考英语应用文主要以写信为主。写英文书信要注意它们的书写格式,格式一定要正确。英文书信主要由6个部分组成,即:信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结束语、签字。信的正文和写文章一样,要分段落写,每一段要有一个中心思想。在写作中,首先,要根据试题里的“提示”确定一个写作中心,再根据这个中心,列出写作提纲,提纲一定要包含所提供的情景要点,同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。然后,用自己熟悉的词汇与句型扩展成篇。自己不熟悉的词汇与句型能换则换,一定不要用,以免用错扣分。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题。千万不要写那些与主题无关的内容。扩展时要注意短文的字数,要写够100个词语,以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分。也不要扩展得太多,字数达到要求既可,以免浪费时间或出现更多的错误而扣分。

那么,在最后的冲刺时间里,不管是什么类型的文章,在具体的写作过程中,我们均可以按如下四大步骤进行强化训练,从而提高写作技巧,解决问题:

步骤一:认真审题立意,确定写作中心。找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些,要避免那些与中心内容无关的细节。

以命题作文“The Classmate I Admire Most”为例,文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位同学,因而就不能泛泛谈论这位同学的家庭关系、社会背景等,而要紧紧抓住这位同学身上能够吸引你的地方展开去。

步骤二:围绕中心,列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点,同时尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。仍以“The Classmate I Admire Most”为例,提纲可以这样写:

① Who is the Classmate I admire most?

② My reasons. (Some Examples)

③ What can I learn from the classmate。

步骤三,根据字数要求,扩展成篇。有几个可以遵循的规律,供大家参考:

1、在整篇文章中,努力避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。

2、使用不同长度的句子,通过分句和合句,增强句子地连贯性和表现力。

3、改变句子的开头方式,不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序,可以把状语置于句首,或用分词等。

4、学会使用关联词。如:

① 递进关系: furthermore; moreover; further; In this way ;still; not only...but also...; not...but...; in addition (to);etc。

② 转折关系:but; even so; however; though; even though; etc。

③ 归纳总结类:in other words; on the whole; in sum; therefore; hence; in short; to sum up; in conclusion; in summary; etc。

④ 强调关系:in fact; especially; particularly; moreover; naturally; what is more important; in reality; indeed; in particular; etc。

⑤ 对照(不同点):yet; still; for all of that; notwithstanding; rather; neither ... nor; although; though; but; however; etc。

⑥ 并列关系: and; also; as well as; either...,or...;both...and... etc。

⑦ 先后次序关系:at this time; first; second; at last; previously; simultaneously; last but not least; to begin with; etc。

⑧ 结果关系:accordingly; thus; consequently; thereupon; etc。

⑨ 顺序关系: at the outset,following this; at this time; etc。

⑩ 重申关系:in other words; that is to say; as I have said; etc。

5、尽量避免重复使用同一单词或词组。

步骤四、利用最后的时间做“机械性”写作练习,强化记忆。例如:常用的应用文如通知、书信等都有其固定的格式及写作技巧,读懂具体内容,然后把内容套进特定的格式中去,就是一篇条理清楚的书面表达了。比方说:通知要掌握:

①通知的对象、地点、时间及要做的事情;

②要注意的事项;

③写上“Don’t be late”或“Be on time”(口头通知前还要写上Boys and girls或Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention, please?等一类句子)。

例如:

Class 1 and Class 2 are going to plant trees on Western Hills. We’ll take a bus to go there. Please bring lunch and water with you. Remember to wear old clothes as we’ll do a lot of hard work. We’ll meet in front of the school gate at nine o’clock. Don’t be late。

高考英语书面表达练习

1.上海世博会

2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动,志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外,志愿者或做家教,教小孩子阅读、算术,或打扫公园与街道,或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

2.拯救地球

处理城市垃圾是一个非常重要的问题。首先,垃圾会导致污染。它会污染空气、水和人们居住的场所。其次,它会危害人类健康。

所以我们在城市中,垃圾得到了妥善处理。我们首先将垃圾分类,然后可将旧报纸和玻璃制品进行再生利用。有害的废物要被掩埋,污水要在净化后才排入河流。政府已经制定了规章,禁止垃圾污染。仅仅这些还不够。我们大家必须竭尽全力防止拉圾污染环境以及拯救我们的城市,拯救我们的家园。 Saving Our Earth

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health.

So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish.

But that's not enough. We must all try our best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to save our city and our living place.

3.防治甲流

最近这几个月里,H1N1病毒在全世界引发起来。如果我们用正确的方法预防它,它就不会那么可怕。这里有一些为你的建议:首先,当你在咳嗽或者打喷嚏的时候,你应该用手捂着嘴。然后你最好尽可能的离公共场所远一点,如果你必须去,请戴上口罩。饭前仔细洗手,经常打开窗后这样使空气保持清新。最后你应该做更多的运动去使你身体更强壮,这样你就可以保持健康了。我认为这才是最重要的。

Let's prevent H1N1 from happening to us.During the last few months,H1N1 has set off across the whole world.If we have the right way to prevent it ,it won't be scary.Here are some suggestions for you:First of all,you should cover your mouth with a napkin or hand when you cough or sneeze,Next you'd better stay away from the public place if possible, if you have to,please wear a mask.Wash your hands carefully before meals and always keep your windows open so that the air will be fresh.At last,try to do more excisice to make your body strong so that you can stay in health.I think this is the most important.

4.书信

在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。

●适当放慢进度,留出思考时间 ●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法 ●减少作业量以保证质量●给予更多鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points that also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

5.近来,越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大寝室。请根据下面提示,一分为二地用英语写一篇短文,说说两者各自的好处与坏处,并表明自己的观点。

1. 学习时间; 2. 安全; 3. 自由性; 4. 与同学交往; 5. 学习效果。

注意:可从其他角度阐述,但两方面的理由都至少要有两条;词数100左右。

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of course it is safer. A dorm is more like a society, wich enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone, it’s better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside the school.

Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

6.请根据下列中文提示,用英语向来访的贵宾介绍你校新建的网络学校。

(1.)使教和学更方便,更有趣,能在课堂上获取更多的信息,学到更多知识。

(2.)向师生开放,可向世界各地发送电子邮件,获取信息,等等。

(3.)只要家中有电脑,任何人都可以学习本校课程。

(4.)有助于改善学校的管理,满足现代化教育的需要。

(5.)作为重点学校(key school),对于其他的新建中学起示范和帮助作用。

注意:

1.短文须包含上面提示,可以适当增减内容使文章连贯。

2.词数:120左右。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school. Now I would like to introduce our net-school.

Our net-school is very helpful in many ways. First, it makes both teaching and learning easier and more interesting. Students can get more knowledge in class. Whoever has a computer can have the lesson we give at home. Second, we can make good use of the Internet, sending e-mails, searching for any information we need, etc. Third, the net also helps improve our school management and meet the needs of modern education. Fourth, as a key school in our city, it sets a good example to the newly-built schools and may be of some help to them.

That’s all. Thank you.

7.最近,你校试行在课间播放音乐,同学们对此私下议论,看法不一。请你根据表格中所提供的信息,给你的班主任Mr. Brown 写封信,客观地介绍大家的看法。

大多数同学赞同,部分同学反对。

注意:词数100-120左右

赞同者:反对者:

原因

播放音乐能活跃气氛。 课间时间太短,播放音乐达不到预期效果。

能使大脑得到放松,减轻学习的疲劳。 课间需要的是安静,而不是嘈杂的声音。

能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受。 有时上课后还沉浸在课间听的音乐中。

Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music provides us with relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy.

On the other hand, some students have the opposite view. They don't think they can get the expected results by listening to music, as the break between classes is short. What's needed during the break is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. Besides, in class some students are still lost in the music they have just heard.

8.Respecting Our Parents

现在,很多学生迫于升学就业的压力,把自己的烦恼都宣泄在父母身上,对父母不是很尊敬,甚至和父母争吵动手。针对这种现象,写信给某报编辑,请提出一些具体的建议,让同学们树立尊敬长辈的意识,发扬中华民族的传统美德。

Dear editor,

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly severe phenomenon that teenagers don’t show respect to their parents. As we can read in newspaper or watch in TV, some teenagers quarrel with parents, some talk back and some even resort to violence. As to this problem, I’d like to offer several proposals as follows.

Initially(First), we should realize that it’s our parents who give us lives. Without parents, we can not live in this world. Therefore, the importance of respecting our parents can not be too overemphasized. What’s more, it goes without saying that we have to remember the birth

day of our parents, when we can express our gratitude to them. None the less(Meanwhile), respecting our parents should be done from every detail. Just as a proverb goes, “Piety is above all.” (百善孝为先)

To sum up, respecting parents is our traditional virtue in China. No matter how old we are, it’s a priority to respect our parents.

9..Knowledge is Power (观点阐释型)

因为经济危机和大学连年扩招的影响,大学生就业形势越来越严峻,让很多人产生了错误的意识,觉得读书无用,受教育无用。针对知识就是力量这句话,结合实例来谈谈对它的体会和感受。首先,写出这句话的寓意,和启示。然后,结合具体的事例,阐释为什么知识就是力量。最后,我们作为青年人应该怎么去实践这句话。

There goes a famous proverb, “Knowledge is power.” We can be informed a great deal from it. Without knowledge, by no means can we achieve our life goal. Knowledge is like the wind in the ocean, which helps us- the boats move swifter towards the right direction.

As is frequently heard, “Knowledge can change one's fate.” My brother-in-law is an exact explanation for this sentence. He was born in a remote countryside in Sichuan, whose parents are both farmers. With his great efforts, he was eolled in Peking University and became an excellent doctor in a prestigious(有声望的) hospital after graduation. Whenever talking about his experience, he always tells us “knowledge did change his fate.”

Taking the above mentioned into consideration,I suppose it is a wise option to concentrate on study from now on. Believing the power of knowledge, we can create miracles not only for us but for our nation.

10.上周日你在你们社区进行了一次社会调查,其主题内容是"你最关注的学生安全问题是什么".调查结果如下表所示.请你根据自己所了解的身边的信息,并结合以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文.词数要求150单词左右,可适当发挥.

调查人数比例关注内容 你的感想和希望

30% 学生饮食安全, 生活卫生习惯

40% 交通安全, 遵守交通法规情况

30% 公共安全, 参加集体活动 安全防范意识

Last Sunday , I organized a survey in my neighbourhood, whose topic is "Which safety problem is the one you are most concerned about " .And the results are as follows:

30% of the people in the neighbourhood are most concerned about the diet safety problem of students .And they hope that students should acquire good living habits to avoid the problems.There are also 40% of the people choosing traffic safety as the top one.In their opinion , students should put it in the first place that they must follow the traffic rules strictly .Beisides, 30% of the people regard it as the most important one that students should learn to keep safe in public places while taking part in activities.

I think ,as students we must strenthen our sense of safety and learn common knowledge of safety.

11.目前,越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教.对于这一现象,存在两种不同观点: 有些人认为有必要 另一些人认为没有必要,

有老师辅导比自己学好 容易养成依赖习惯

有更多机会和老师互动 学生需要时间休息和娱乐

可以弥补上课错过或没听懂的东西导致有的学生在常规课堂上不认真听讲

请您根据以上提示,以Are Training Classes or tutors Necessary 为题,写一篇150 词左右的短文,反映表中内容,并简要阐述自己的观点.文章开头已给出,不计入总字数.

参考词汇:家庭教师:tutor 要求:层次清晰,连贯流畅;表达灵活,不要逐字逐句翻译.

Some think it necessary to do so. Firstly, it's more effective to study with a teacher's

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