上海英语中考作文

篇一：2014上海中考英语作文范文和点评

中考作文点评

今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时”(This Time Next Year )，黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的想象空间，可以说是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体，加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 2014年中考英语作文：

题目：This time next year

This time next year I will be enjoying my senior school life 1.which I have expected for a long time. The life then will be 2.as colorful as flowers.I will take an active part in all kinds of activities in high school 3.because the saying goes ”All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. In addition, making friends 4.will be on top of the list since a real friendship5.is of great importance to me. As for me, I will be definitely6.turning a new leaf of my future life this time next year, and I’m really looking forward to it. ? 精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往

亮点二：用as...as的比较级结构，抓人眼球

亮点三： 用到了idiom，而且用的极为恰当

亮点四： on top of the list永远放在第一位

亮点五：be of great importance 名词结构更高端

亮点六： turn a new leaf of my future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章

? 写作小Tip：

今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运用一般将来时，对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。

2014年上海中考英语范文1 This Time Next Year

It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.

At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.

Life will be totally different, but I'm really looking forward to it.

【解析】

这篇作文需要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章中需要涵盖着三点。

第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。

2014年上海中考英语范文2

This Time Next Year

Life is changeable, and that's why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.

Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading

English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly.

Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.

(110 words)

文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应该是与未来的生活相关的，生活在变化，一年后我将进入高中，但是学习还在继续，所以我仍有自己的目标。文章主要立足于两点，我对未来的计划或者期待，以及我要如何去实现。作为一名英语学习者，我会从三点去提高自己的英语。英语学习是一个持续的过程，只有不断努力才会有收获

篇二：上海市历届中考英语作文题目

上海市历届中考英语作文题目

2002 My favorite thing(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004Leave School 毕业时分

2005 Growing pains and gains 成长的烦恼

2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Parent(s)” 一个关于我父/母的故事

2008Love Around Me 爱在我身边

2009I want to do something for my school 我想为我的学校做点什么

2010I'm proud of myself 我为我自己感到自豪

2011I’m a member of .... 我是……的一员

2012If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result. 写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信，并给予建议

2013 How to protect myself 如何保护自己

2014 This time next year 明年此时

篇三：2014上海中考英语作文模板_-_副本

2014上海中考英语作文模板

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．１． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．２． 分析并举例使其更充实． 中考英语作文万能模板：解决方法题型要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径１． 问题现状

２． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective

measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法).

Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

中考英语作文万能模板：说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）１． 说明事物现状

２． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）３． 你对现状（或前景）的看法

role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一（Ａ的优点之二）.

----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点) ---------------(我的看法)．

测)．)

(1) ）

_ 观点一 People, differ in on this matter. Some _______. In 原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二 is no doubt that ___观点二______.

support the view that __观点一或二______. It also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has

negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

中考英语作文万能模板：图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease

There are attwo______. On theother hand, _______ is the In addition, ________ isare someto is

generally that mentioned As faras I am am sureopinion is both and

A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报A的议论。 给一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科们可以这样描述A…

A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。

认 真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了（这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡）。（举例）。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。

事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。

而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。中考英语作文万能模板：说明原因型模块（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate

the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .

It is clear that (1). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,

your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ).

Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .

No one can deny another fact that (4 ) .You donn\'t have to

look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know ( 5) .

It will exert a profound influence upon (6).

With reference to my standpoint ,I think (7 ). 附加

一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分：

How nice to hear from you again.

Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.

I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

结尾部分：

With best wishes.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分：

I have an announcement to make.

正文部分：

Please listen carefully and a groups.

结束语部分：

1. 导入：

第1段：should...

正文：

第2段：（正方观点） 列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段：（反方观点）

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论： 第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than g

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main 赞同A的原因) 第3段(列出1~2个B的优势)

结论：

第4段) オ 3.

导入：

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1 第2Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, following may be most effective. First of all... 列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论：

第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

四、图表作文写作模板

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).

We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).