剑6小作文

篇一：剑6 TEST2 小作文

The table depicts some figures about changes of public choices in ways of travel which involving walking, bicycle, car, local bus, long distance bus, train, other in England over the period from 1985 to 2000.

Among a variety of travel modes, driving car to travel was popular with most of people in 1985 which is the same as in the year 2000. The figure climb from 3199( per person per year ) to 4806( per person per year ) during the 15 years .

In England, people also tend to travelling by train and walking . The tendency of travel by train moderately increased while the tendency of walking travelling slowly inclines to 237( per person per year ) between 1985 and 2000. It is worth mentioning that the number of people travelling by local bus decreases by 155( per person per year ). At the meantime in 2000 the number of people travelling by long distance bus and taxi are over 2 times more than that in 1985. In a word, the ways of travel and the popularity of travel modes varies a lot in eight different travelling mode in England.

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篇二：剑6 t2大作文

As is known to us all,professional sports stars earn much more money than those in other important professions.Some people hold the view that they did not deserve it,however,some people think it is fair.

Those who are not satisfied with the incomes of sports stars might compare sports professionals with scientists,doctors,teachers and so forth.They hold the view that sports professionals could not make contribution to the progress of society when comparing with other professions or themselves.However,we should not deny that sport is one of the most important industries.Sports games can bring us not only the excitement and surprise,but also the sprit of struggling and the faith of winning.The sprit is able to boost the potential of human beings.

What’s more,there are many preconditions to become a successful sport professional.First of all,he should get the talent,and in addition,hard training is necessary.A successful sport professional may have trained for one or two decades for a certain competition.The game might only last for only a short while,but we cannot see the sacrifice they have made.Yao Ming,the famous basketball player,is a good instance.Many people are not satisfied with salaries only because they will never know the sweat he dissipated while training.Though he does not have the responsibility,he donates to the charity a large amount of money every year.

In conclusion,thank to the sports professionals that we can watch various kinds of sports games and gain the excitement of sports.Thus,those sports professionals deserve what they got via hard training and the faith of never give up.

6.5

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结构合理，内容丰富，论据也比较有理有据，语法错误很少。

篇三：剑6 t2小作文

The given table illustrates how people in England changed their ways of traveling in 1985 and 2000.

In 1985,as we can see,a person traveled about 4740 in total per year and it had reached 6475 miles after 15 years,about a half more than it was in 1985.Many modes are referred in the chart such as walking,cycling and so forth.Walking miles didn’t change much,255 miles in 1985 and 237miles in 2000.The miles of traveling by bicycle declined a little,51 in 1985and 41 in 2000.Besides,we saw a plunge when it comes to long distance bus,54 miles per person in 1985 and doubled in 2000.However,traveling by taxi became more common.In 1985,it was 13miles per person,and in 2000 it was about one third of it in 1985.But traveling by local bus was not th

What’s more,cars were obviously the most important way of traveling,3199 and 4806 miles in 1985 and 2000 respectively.Overall, the distance of traveling was longer in 2000 than in 1985.