初二英语作文100字

篇一：英文短文6篇(100字左右)

1.Look at the sky

One day, Charley bought a hot dog in a snack bar after school.

Suddenly, he stopped and raised his head high. He kept looking at the sky. It lasted two minutes.

A woman passed by. She saw Charley looking at the sky and she stopped and also looked at the sky.

The sky was blue. There were some white clouds. Charley still looked at the sky and didn’t move a bit. The woman also went on looking at the sky.

Mary passers-by stopped. They looked at the sky, too.

After a while, charley lowered his head. He laughed and asked. “What are you looking for in the sky?”

The woman said: “why are you looking at the sky?”

“I didn’t look at the sky.” Charley pointed to his nose, “My nose was bleeding.”

2. One good turn deserves another

I was having dinner at a restaurant when Harry Steele came in. Harry worked in a lawyer's office years ago, but he is now working at a bank. He gets a good salary, but he always borrows money from his friends and never pays it back. Harry saw me and came and sat at the same table. He has never borrowed money from me. While he was eating, I asked him to lend me $2. To my surprise, he gave me the money immediately. “I have never borrowed any money from you,” Harry said, “so now you can pay for my dinner!”

3.Good news and bad news

An artist asked the gallery owner if there had been any interest in his paintings currently on display. "I've got good news and bad news," the owner replied. "The good news is that a gentleman inquired about your work and wondered if it would appreciate in value after your death. When I told him it would, he bought all fifteen of your paintings."

"That's wonderful!" the artist exclaimed, "What's the bad news?". With concern, the gallery owner replied, "The guy was your doctor."

4.Difference

"I can always tell a graduate class from an undergraduate class," observed the instructor in one of my graduate engineering courses at California State

University in Los Angeles. When I say, “Good afternoon,” the undergraduates respond, “Good afternoon”. But the graduate students just write it down.

5.Charge for Bread and Butter

Some years ago, my dad, an attorney, took me to a fancy restaurant in Now York City. When the bill arrived, there was a $1.50 charge for bread and butter. Dad paid the bill, including the charge for bread and butter. However, the next day, he sent a letter to the restaurants stating that the charge was uncalled for. Enclosed in the same envelope was a bill for $ 500 in legal services.

Someone from the restaurant called immediately and asked, "What is this $500 bill for? We never ordered any legal services."

Dad replied, "I never ordered any bread and butter."

The $1.50 was returned without delay.

6.Sleeping Pills

Bob was having trouble getting to sleep at night. He went to see his doctor, who prescribed some extra-strong sleeping pills.

Sunday night Bob took the pills, slept well and was awake before he heard the alarm. He took his time getting to the office, strolled in and said to his boss: "I didn't have a bit of trouble getting up this morning."

"That's fine," roared the boss, "but where were you Monday and Tuesday?"

7.This Problem with Gas（生词稍多但幽默）

A little old lady goes to the doctor ... and says, "Doctor, I have this problem with gas, but it doesn't really bother me too much. They never smell and are always silent. As a matter of fact, I've farted at least 20 times since I've been here in your office. You didn't know I was farting because they don't smell and are silent." The doctor says, "I see. Here's a prescription. Take these pills 3 times a day for seven days and come back to see me next week." The next week the lady goes back. "Doctor," she says, "I don't know what the hell you gave me, but now my farts ... although still silent... stink terribly." The doctor says, "Good! Now that we've cleared up your sinuses, let's start working on your hearing."

8.Your Coat Is on Fire

The master, to impress on his pupils the need of thinking before speaking, told them to count fifty before saying anything important, and one hundred if it was very important. The next day he was speaking, standing with his back to the fire, when he noticed several lips moving rapidly. Suddenly the whole class shouted: Ninety-eight, ninety-nine, a hundred. Your coat is on fire, sir!

9. May I have your attention please, now I will give you a basic introduction of Mountain Tai. It is one of the "Five Sacred Mountains" and is a natural museum abounding with cultural relics and artworks, such as Red Gate Palace, Mid-Heaven Gate and so forth. Now it is half past eight, and all the visitors can stay in the mountain for 8 hours.

篇二：初二英语作文修改

2011年北京市东城区中考英语模拟试卷（一）

十、文段表达。（15分）

根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所以英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

75. 毕业时刻即将到来，你校英文校刊向初三年级学生征文，题为” My Best Friend”， 以此作为对初中生活的纪念。请你写一篇征文，介绍你初中阶段的好友。内容包括他/她的学习情况、性格特点及爱好。（好友的名字用Mary或Jack代替。）

提示词语：hard-working, be good at, friendly, get on well with, dance, draw, win prizes

My Best Friend

and drawing. She even won some prizes in some competitionsHer hobbies are collecting stamps and doing sports.

A friend in need is a friend indeed. When I’

m in trouble, she always

修改意见：

（一）文章中出现了一些可以避免的语法错误，比如名词的复数( prizes) 和人称代词的使用(her).

（二）文章内容缺失，要求是“介绍你初中阶段的好友。内容包括他/她的学习情况、性格特点及爱好”，但文章中只涉及了性格特点和爱好，学习方面没有提及。

（三）通篇文章简单句使用过多，亮点少，可适当使用复合句。

（四）本篇作文字数不够。虽然题目要求是不少于60字，但一般来说中考的字数要保持在80－100之间，90最为合适，不能超过100。

具体错误：（颜色对应文章中的颜色）

（1）病句。mark 意为“分数”，不能说“她的分数擅长打篮球”。另外删去第二个 she is, 和前面的she is重复了，没有必

要。

(2) 将此句改成 so…that..句型，显得句式丰富活泼。

（3）some 后面如果加可数名词，要用复数形式，因为是“一些奖项，

一些比赛。”

（4）“她的”是her, 不是 she’s

(5) 用give a hand to her 比 help her 更有文采。

亮点：

A friend in need is a friend indeed.这句话运用得不错，在作文中适当 使用谚语等可以增强文章文采。

总结：

（1）不够细心，有些问题实在不该出现。

（2）平时多练写长句子，避免重复使用简单句,导致文章没有文采

（3）认真审题，避免内容缺失。

2011年北京市海淀区中考英语模拟试卷（二）

十、文段表达。（共15分）

根据中文提示内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的文章。请不要写出真实的校名和姓名。

75. 亲爱抽学们，初中生活即将结束！在此离别之际，恰逢21世纪英语周刊征稿，请你以A/An…Person in My School Life为题，介绍一位老师或同学，描述一件发生在你们之间的、令你印象深刻的事情并谈谈你的感受。 A/An Helpful Person in My School Life

I have met many people in my school life. One of them is my friend

about my homework. When she knew that I didn’t go to school, she helped me to take notes and sent my homework to my home. That made me feel very grateful.

修改意见：

(1)字数太少，没达到80－100字。

(2) 重复使用简单句，没有亮点。

（3）“感受”写的太少，有些虎头蛇尾。

具体错误：

（1）One of them is my friend Mary 和 she is active and very helpful分别是两个完整的句子，中间直接用逗号隔开，要加连词连接，或者也可以把she 变成who, 改成非限制性定语从句，增加文章亮点。

（2）stay at home，也发生在过去，所以用一般过去时态。

（3）这句话有点怪异，你既然没上学，不知道家庭作业，她怎么可能把“家庭作业”给你带回家呢？可以改成带回作业本或者告诉你作业。

总结：

（1）时态错误不应该出现。

（2）重复使用简单句，文章没有亮点。

（3）感受谈的太少，虎头蛇尾，另外事情叙述也太简单。

2011年北京市海淀区中考英语模拟试卷（一）

十、文段表达。（15分）

根据文中提示和力表内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的文段。文段的开头已给出，其词数不计入所完成的文段内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

75. 现在的中学生每月都有一定数量的零花钱。某校对九年级（1）班的30名学生进行了零花钱用途的调查。结果如下：有的同学常买零食或书籍，有的同学把钱花在手机或其他方面，也有的同学把零花钱存了起来。请你任选图表中的2至3项简述调查结果，谈谈你是如何支配零花钱的，并说明理由。

Nowadays, most middle school students have pocket money every month, and we did a survey in Class 1, Grade 9.

Among the thirty students, we found most of them spend their pocket money on snacks or mobile phones and half of them spend it on books.

In my opinion, pocket money shouldn’t be used a lot to buy snacks be cause snacks aren’t healthy food. I often spend most of my pocket money buying useful books and save some money every month because books

developing some good habits.

修改意见：

(1) 内容基本全面，但如果能有一些总结更好。

（2）有些句子表述缺少逻辑性。

具体错误：

（1）表格上很清楚地表明是30个学生参加调查，所以文章中要有所交代。另外，两个完整句之间不能直接用逗号隔开，可用and隔开。

（2）这句话说得太绝对了，不是所有的零食都是不健康食品。可以改为“ because it’s not good for your health to eat lots of snacks”（吃很多的零食对你的健康没好处）.

(3) knowledge 是一个词，不要分开写，固定搭配是be good for doing sth. 另外，我觉得这句话怪怪的，“存钱对养成一些好习惯有好处”，

篇三：初二年级英语作文

初二年级英语作文：How to stay healthy [标签：初二年级 英语作文 800字作文]登录e度论坛

Health is most important for any of us. ]n order to stay healthy, we need some common knowledge.

First]y, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, because they are rich in fiber and Iow in fat. As a proverb says, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." So fruit is good for health. Don't have a lot of food that contains too much fat, such as butter. Meanwhile, sweets should be eaten in proper quantity, because too much sugar does harm to us. Don't drink too much coffee,either

Secondly, exercise is necessary. Regular exercise can help us keep from getting fat. People who do running every day usually have stronger hearts than who don't.

Finally, form good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours at night,and never work too hard. Over work and little sleep will lead to illness. What's more, stay away from cigarettes.

These are the things we should pay attention to so as to stay healthy.