高一英语作文课件

篇一：高中英语作文课件--节日介绍

主题: 介绍端午节

[时间]The Dragon Boat Festival, a traditional Chinese festival, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese calendar. It dates from over 2000 years ago, which falls on June 6th this year.

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[方式] On this day, Chinese people prepare Zongzi — glutinous(粘黏的) rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. As the festival name shows, people have dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. [意义] The Dragon Boat Festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China.

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节日的介绍一般应包括过节的时间、方式，有时还会说到节日的历史和意义。因传统节日是年年过的, 所以用一般现在时。

一、套语背诵

1. Tomb Sweeping Day usually falls on April 4 — 6 every year. 清明节通常是每年的4月4 — 6号。

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2. The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year, which is usually in February.中国的春节是农历年的第1天, 通常在2月份。 幻灯片6

3. It’s in this special day that people mourn over their ancestors and remember their great contribution to the development of our society.就是在这个特别的日子, 人们悼念他们的祖先和纪念他们为社会的发展所作的贡献。

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二、超级仿写

1.我国中秋节的情况如下表所示：

翻译词组

1.传统节日 _________________

2.团聚______________________

3.家庭团圆的象征

___________________________

4.向所爱的人表达最美好的祝愿

_______________________________

traditional festivals

have family reunion

a symbol of family reunion

express best wishes to the beloved ones

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合并句子

1. ⑴ The Mid-autumn Festival falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.⑵ It is one of the most obvious traditional festivals in China. (用定语从句或同位语)

答案: The Mid-autumn Festival, (which is) one of the most important traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year. 幻灯片11

2. ⑴ It is popular in China.

⑵ It is celebrated in many other Asian countries.(用not only ...but also) 答案:Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.

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3. ⑴ They will also eat moon cakes.

⑵ The cakes are round.

⑶ There is meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.(定语从句, with复合结构)

答案: They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.

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参考范文

[时间] The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one of the most important

traditional festivals in China, falls on August 15th of the Lunar calendar every year.[范围] Not only is it popular in China but it is also celebrated in many other Asian countries.

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[象征] People believe that the moon is a symbol of family reunion, luck and fortune, and it is a custom to express best wishes to the beloved ones at this particular time. [方式] On that day people usually go back home to have family reunion, enjoying a large meal with their family. They will also eat moon cakes, which are round cakes with meat, eggs, nuts and other things inside.

篇二：高一英语写作指导

【写作情景】假若你是某高中学生李华，进入高中后， 你觉得学英语的方式与初中有很大的不同。 你给自己的英语老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。请你根据下面的提示补全此信。

【写作内容】

1. 开始学习高中英语时，觉得学习英语有很多困难，难得让他几乎丧失信

心；

2. 后来逐渐意识到英语的重要性；

3. 每天努力学习英语，例如多读书，多背诵英语课文等；

4. 向老师和同学请教更好的学习英语的方法；

5. 他们的帮助和您的鼓励使我取得了很大的进步，现在对英语越来越感兴

趣。

【写作要求】字数在100字左右。

参考词汇：背诵：recite 高级的: senior

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English

study since I became a senior high student.

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Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Mr. Li,

I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high student. When I started to learn senior English in the beginning, I had much difficulty in learning English. I found it so difficult that I almost lost heart. Later, I gradually realized the importance of English, as a result, I worked hard every day, such as reading and reciting English texts as often as possible. I also went to ask my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. It is their help and your encouragement that help me make great progress in my English. And now I’m getting more and more interested in it.

Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

Wish you all the best.

Yours,

Li Hua 基础写作（共15分）

请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文，简单描述一下1923年发生在日本的地震。

1. 地震于1923年发生在日本横滨市(Yokohama)；

2. 当时人们正在睡觉，并不知道地震发生；

3. 大量的房屋、建筑物倒塌，水电供应中断；

4. 有140,000多人丧生，还有很多受伤者和无家可归者；

5. 是历史上最严重的地震之一。

要求：

1. 短文必须包括要点中的所有内容；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；

3. 词数：100左右。

(One possible version)

In 1923, a big earthquake hit/struck/occurred in/happened in/took place in the city of Yokohama, a city in Japan. It happened at night when most people were sleeping. When the earthquake happened/ occurred /took place, it seemed that the world was at an end. Houses and tall buildings fell down. Water and electricity were cut off. There were fires and smoke everywhere. In a few seconds the whole city was almost destroyed and lay in ruins. The number of people who were killed reached more than 140,000. Besides, a large number of people were injured and lost their homes. It was one of the biggest earthquakes in history.

写作（25分）

按照中文大意写成语言规范,前后连贯的文章：

汶川过去是一个不知名的小城市，它距离成都159公里。就在2008年5月

12日约下午两点半，汶川发生了一次强烈地震。许多房屋倒塌，成千上万的人无家可归。一些老师和家长为了救孩子牺牲了。全国都关心汶川，送来了救援人员。人们相信汶川有更美好的未来。 Wenchuan used to be an unknown small city, which is 159 kilometres away from Chengdu. It was at about 2:30 pm on May 12, 2008 that a strong earthquake struck Wenchuan. So many houses fell down that thousands of

people became homeless. Some teachers and parents lost their lives in order to save the children. However, the whole nation was concerned about Wenchuan, so they sent rescue workers. Generally, people believed/believe that Wenchuan would/will have a great future.

第二部分、如何提升句子

I. 讨论下面习作并对比两篇范文：

请根据以下的情景说明, 使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。标题为 My English Learning

【情景说明】

我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语， 争取早日掌握这门语言。

范文1My English Learning

①I have been learning English for over 6 years. ②I have made some progress in my English. ③But I always feel English is hard to learn, especially some English idioms are difficult. ④I will work hard at this useful foreign language. ⑤I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.

范文2My English Learning

① It is six years since I began to learn English. ② With the help of my teachers and classmates, I have made progress in my English. ③ Now I’m doing well both in writing and reading in English. ④ But I still find it hard to learn English, such as some difficult idioms. ⑤Difficult as it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.

III. Here are 3 ways to make sentences:

A. 巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：

1)借助名词短语做同位语

如：李立，男，19岁，1986年生；籍贯：广东。

Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1986.

2)借助介词短语做定语

如：李飞，男，10岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。

Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and a white jacket.

3)借助介词短语做状语

如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。

With the help of Tom, we soon found their village.

4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语

如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。

They are standing under the big tree, waiting for the president.

B. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：

如：他给我钱，我不要。

He gave me a lot money but I refused.

如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。

I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.

C. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句：

2) 定语从句

如：中国，地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。

China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natural resources.

3) 状语从句

如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。

I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.

篇三：高中英语作文写作指导

写作 考纲扫描

一、测试要求

写作是四项语言技能中不可分割的一个重要部分，更是语言生成能力的重要表现形式。该部分要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能：

1. 准确使用语法和词汇

语言的准确性是写作中不可忽视的一个重要方面，因为它直接或间接地影响到信息的准确传输。应用语法结构和词汇的准确程度是写作部分评分标准中的一项重要内容。

2. 使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。

任何一篇文章都需要一个主题，作者应该围绕该主题，借助一些句型、词汇等的支持，清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想。

二、试题形式

要求考生根据题目的提示（包括情景、图画、图表、提纲等）和要求，用英语写一篇120~150个单词的短文，满分30分。

三、答题要求

写作部分的答题要求是，在考试进行时，考生直接把作文写在二卷上。 体验高考

【高考真题】

假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom 写一封信：

1．感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；

2．询问Mr., smith 的近况并索要其联系方式；

3．邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。

注意：1. 词数120-150；

2．可适当增加细节。

【2009山东】

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I am now back China and sound. In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my English learning when I was in New York. Additionally, your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first American trip into a unforgettable memory.

I have been missing our English professor, Mr. Smith whose unusual cast of mind, wide and varied knowledge, together with a singular personal charm, combined to exert a strong influence on me. What about him recently? I desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listening ability. However, his email address is not available. So would you mind delivering it to me via the online mailbox?(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网)

I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival -Chinese Lunar New Year so that I can repay your friendship. You can partner with me to have a try in lion dances, which is extremely exciting. And the grand lantern festival parade will be bound to

impress you. I assure you that you would enjoy visiting here as I did at you home.

With my best regards!

Yours cordially,

Li Hua

【解析】

一、题材贴近学生生活实际，有时代气息。

学生在实际生活中会经常遇到这样的问题――忘记某人的联系方式，因此学生会感到有话可说，并且书信又是学生在平时练习中做的比较多的应用文之一，写起来比较容易上手。

二、要点提示得当，难度适中。

今年一改前两年的开放作文，而用提纲作文的形式，恐怕也是大部分师生所始料不及的。作为提纲式作文，要点提示简洁，全面，即使大部分考生有话可说，又能给学生一定的自由发挥的空间，能够考查学生的语言综合运用能力，并从客观上保证了学生正常水平的发挥。

三、试题难度不大，但想得高分也并非易事。

学生要想得高分并不是很容易，因为内容大都一样，要想得高分，就必须要有很强的驾驭语言的能力，合理使用一些高级词汇和复杂句式，力争少犯错误，做到书写美观，卷面整洁。

【高考真题】

假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：

? 帮他分析原因

? 给他提出建议

? 陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意：词数120~150。

【2008山东】

【答案】

Dear Li Ming,

I’m very glad to become your classmate. I know you are worried about your study and don’t know how to adapt yourself to the new environment. There are some suggestions about it and I hope they can help you.

You know we always become puzzled when we go to a new environment because we don’t know anything about people around us and even don’t know what to do. I think you should make friends with the students in our class. Then, if you have any problem you can ask us or our teachers for help. We’ll try our best to help you.

After class, I’ll show you around our school and tell you something about it. If you have any problem, please tell me and I will give you my advice not only on study but also on your life here.

All in all, I hope you can adapt yourself to the new environment and we can become good friends.

Best regards.

Zhang Hua

【解析】

这是一篇命题巧妙的文章，其主题是强调沟通与交流的重要性，这一主题贴近学生生活实际。这篇书面表达的难度不大，但无论从内容还是形式上都可以形成一定的区分度，试题

设计巧妙：既限制话题又开放细节内容，可以引导考生思考涉及学习生活的现实问题，使考生可以有更多的写作空间，做到有感而发，而不是为了写作而写作。这篇文章的写作思路应该紧紧围绕所给话题来写，在全面包括所给话题的基础上可以发散思维，按自己的理解来展开。例如要点一，可以假设李明无法融入新集体的原因是由于性格内向，不善于与人沟通交流，那么要点二的建议就与交流和沟通有关，而要点三的具体做法可以列举诸如和别的同学交流，课堂上积极回答老师的问题，平时学习中遇到的问题多向老师请教等方法，这样，一篇思路清晰、观点明确的文章就出来了。

【高考真题】

阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120—150词的短文。

今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后回生源地所在省份的中小学任教十年以上，你愿意成为一名免费师范生吗？请陈述理由。

【2007山东】

【答案】

It’s inspiring that a number of students will be admitted to colleges free of charge this year on condition that they must work as a teacher in their own province for more than ten years. I would like to be one of these special students.

In my opinion, receiving an education like that would not only reduce the expenses but also enable us to make contributions to our country’s education career. As we all know, fewer and fewer people are willing to be a teacher because of low pay and hard work, especially in the poor areas. It will be dangerous for the development of the teenagers and children in our country. So it’s necessary that large numbers of graduates of high qualities devote to the education career. On the other hand, teaching will be a valuable experience and make our lives meaningful.

In a word, I really want to become a student in such a school.

【解析】

本试题贴近高三学生生活实际,反映了社会热点问题, 是一份既体现新课标要求, 学生又有话可写的试题。写作开放性较强，重在考查考生的写作能力，该题的难度（难度：0.52；）几乎接近理想中的试题难度，该题的平均分：15.57；及格率：47%；优秀率：6.4%。但好同学也有得28-29分的，差距较大，原因主要表现在审题出错。该题目给出的话题为“免费师范生”，不少同学理解为“工作十年不给工资”导致审题出错。答题要求 “如果你遇到这样的情况会怎么做并给出理由”，相当一部分考生阐述会怎么做而没有详情阐述理由，结论没有条理性或者就阐述了一条。而阅卷判分要求应该从2个方面阐述。作文必须表明自己的观点：“是否愿意做免费师范生”一项，考生可以回答愿意，也可以回答不愿意，而有的同学答到最后也没表态，这一个问题就要被扣掉5分，非常可惜。本文可以按照以下层次分段叙述：

第一段 引出话题或者说是本文的论点.本文的论点只能有两个： 愿意或者不愿意.论点一定要旗帜鲜明,不能模棱两可,含混不清。无论哪一种选择都可以,没有对错之分。

第二段 阐述愿意或者不愿意的理由。根据字数和考试大纲要求, 考生至少要列举出两个以上的缘由。关键是言之成理, 表述规范, 符合英语表达习惯。

第三段 表达个人决心。如果考生选择愿意的话, 可以加上这么一段。如果选择不愿意, 本段可以省去. 解题指导

一、能力指标

（一） 提纲作文

1. 提纲作文的写作步骤

中文提纲式写作一般都有较多的文字说明，这样就在一定的程度上限制了考生的写作思路，考生可以从下面几个方面入手进行操作：

① 认真研究所给提纲；

考生要仔细领会提纲的含义，不能遗漏提纲要点，更不能错误理解提纲的意思。； ② 确定各段的主题句；

考生应根据所给提纲写出各段的主题句，合格的主题句应具备以下要点：

☆ 意义完整

☆ 表意清晰

☆ 内容具体

☆ 用词贴切

主题句一定要用词准确，简明达意，为段落的拓展打好基础。

③ 逐步展开段落；

段落写作应围绕自己列好的主题句进行，在写作过程中可稍加调整。

④ 检查与修改。

检查考题所给提纲是否完整且准确地被表达于文章之中，如有偏差，应做出相应的修改。

2.提纲作文常用的模板句型

① 开头

With the development of 随着······的发展

I think/feel that 我认为/觉得······

It is often said that ··· 我们经常这么说······

I’m for the opinion that ··· 我支持······的观点

It goes without saying that ···不言而喻······

There’s a widespread concern about/that ··· ······引起广泛关注

There’s no immediate solution to the problem of. . . but . . . might be of help .对······问题没有快速的解决办法，但是······可能会有用。

It can be easily proved that ···很容易证明······

One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is ··· 与以上同样重要的是······

The chief reason why . . . is that ··· 之所以···的主要原因是······

Take . . . for example (instance) 以······为例

According to a latest study ,it can be predicted ··· 根据最近的一项研究可预测出······

② 连接句

Another special consideration in this case is that . . . 关于这件事还有一点值得考虑，那就是······

This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to …这也许对，但关于······我们仍然有一个问题。

Besides, we should not neglect that …另外，我们不应该忽视······

Therefore, these findings reveal the following information …因此，这些发现揭示以下信息······

On account of this we can find that …据此我们可以发现······

Wonderful as A is ,it has its own disadvantages too.尽管A很好，但它也有自身的缺陷。 Among the most convincing reasons ,one should be mentioned .在所有令人信服的理由中有一个值得一提。

All available evidence points to the fact of that…所有的证据证明······事实。

No one can deny the fact that …没人能否定······这个事实。

③ 结束句

Take all these factors into account, we may safely reach the conclusion that …考虑到所有这些因素，我们可以很有把握得出这样的结论······

【例题】

假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：

1. 描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；

2. 介绍你处理该事的方式；

3. 谈谈你的感想。

注意：

1. 词数不少于120个；

2. 可适当发挥想象，增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的任何真实信息。

【2009 湖南】

【答案】

Dear Zhang Hua,

It’s three months since I heard from you last time. Now I want to tell you an impressive story happened on my first lesson.

On hearing the bell, students ran into the classroom as quickly as they can. But a boy, Li Ming, whose father died a month ago, was late for the class. He stood outside the classroom, silently. I smiled to him and let him came in. After a while, he cried on his desk. Then I walked to him and asked what had happened .He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his words, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “Mother” for the students. How time flies! Class was over before I realized it.

From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them. Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Li Hong

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