张浚铂mba2016英语写作实战技巧

篇一：2016MBA英语作文模板及详解解析

大作文

形式：①图标 ②文字

内容：①数字变化类 ②优缺点类 ③问题解决类 ④A/B选择类

高分作文必须具备的

1、结构模式化

①三段化 ②大于180词 ③三段三句总领句

第一段开题句

[数字变化 图表]

As is illustrated in the table/chart/curve, the number of 主题 is 数字in 年份, 数字 in 年份, and 数字 in 年份.

从表格/柱形图/曲线图/中表示，(主题)的数字在(哪一年)是(多少)，在(哪一年)是(多少)，和在(哪一年)是(多少)。

[数字变化 文字]

The past few years witnessed a dramatic rise of the number of ………..。

几年来见证了(主题)的数字戏剧化的增长。

[优缺点类]

There is no doubt that 主题 is getting increasingly prevalent over the past few years. 毫无疑问的，近年来(主题)变得日益普及。

[问题解决类]

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned with [the problems…arising from…]. 近期越来越多的人对[……的问题]感到忧虑。

第二段第一句

[数变---原因] [优缺点---优点或缺点] [问题---方法]

[原因]

What accounts for the rise? In my view, at least [three] factors contribute to the change. 增长的原因是什么？我认为至少有三种原因促成了这种变化。

[优缺点]

As is known to all, every medal has two sides, and the unfavorable aspects of……can’t be ignored. 众所周知，任何事情都有两面性，……的缺点不能忘。

As is known to all, every medal has two sides, …… have favorable and unfavorable aspects. 众所周知，任何事情都有两面性，……有优点和缺点。

[问题解决类 方法]

As a matter of fact, there are various approaches which can contribute to the resolution of the trouble. 事实上有各种方法都可以解决该问题。

Various approaches have been tried to resolve the problem, but in my view, the followings will work better. 人们已经尝试了各种各样的方法，但我认为以下方法会起到更好的作用。

第三段(结论)

[数字变化]

With the development of society, the rising trend is bound to continue for a few years in the future. 随着社会的发展，这种增加的趋势还要继续。As far as I’m concerned, it’s a positive(negative) sign and should be promoted(reversed), for it is beneficial(a threat) not only to individuals but to the society.. 在我看来，这种趋势应当(鼓励/逆转)，因为它不仅有(利/害)于个人，也有(利/害)于社会。

[问题解决类]

Undoubtedly, the resolution of the problem calls for governments’ measures coupled with the public’s effort. 无疑该问题的解决，需要政府的措施和公众的努力。With governments’ effective measures and the public’s considerable efforts, the problem is bound to be resolved in the near future. 有了政府的措施和公众的努力在不久的将来这个问题一定能解决。

[优缺点类]

We’re all aware that……itself is neither blessing nor hell and its effect on people depends, to a large extent, on people’s attitude toward it. 我们大家都意识到……本身既不是福也不是祸，其影响取决于人们对它的态度。Provided that people have an appropriate attitude toward it and make good use of it, ……is beneficial to users. 只要人们对它有正确的态度和正确的使用，就会有利于使用者。

2、论证条理化

在第二段里写（原因、优点、缺点、方法、意义）

[正增原因]

① the rising income 日益增加的收入

② the turning of people’s attitude toward and outlook on life 人生态度及人生观的转变

③ the bettering facilities/policies 日益完善的设施/政策

[负增原因]

① the rising number / pressure / demand 日益增加的数量/压力/需求

② the ill behaviors/habit / attitude 不好的行为/习惯/态度

③ lack of supervision / guide 缺乏监督/引导

[问题解决 方法]

① educate people to became aware of…… 教育人们认识到……

② lay down and enforce relevant laws and regulations 立法并强制执行

③ timely guide / find a substitute 及时引导/找一个替代品

④ improve facilities

[优缺点 优点]

① keep users more informed of the outside 让使用者及时了解世界

② extend social circles 扩展社交圈

③ seek (for) help 从中得到帮助

④ bring about joys 带来娱乐

[优缺点 缺点]

① waste of time 浪费时间

② add to expense 增加开支

③ plunge users into unexpected troubles 让使用者陷入意想不到的麻烦

3、语言个性化

(1)关于 concerning……when it comes to…….

(2)不同 vary

When it comes to this topic, people’s views vary from individual to individual 关于这个话题，不同的人有不同的看法

(3)认为 hold / argue

Some people hold that……, while others argue that……

有人认为…….而另一些人认为…….

(4)支持 be in fav

As for as I’m concerned, I’m in favor of the former/latter view

就我而言，我支持前者/后者观点

(5)首先 To begin with, …… To start with,…… First of all,……

其次 In addition,…... What’s more,…… More importantly,……

最后 Finally,…… ……also……

(6)显而易见 显然Apparently,…….

(7)在增长 be on the rise

Apparently, the number of …… has been on the dramatic rise over the past few years. 显然，近年来……的数量在戏剧化的增长

(8)为什么？ What accounts for ……. ?

(9)引起/导致 contribute to …… be responsible for …….. (负增长)

(10)因为 …… be related to …… …… have much to do with ……

To begin with, the change is closely related to the rising income of [Chinese people]. 首先，这种变化是因为中国人的收入增加了

In addition, the change has much to do with the turning of people’s attitude toward and outlook on life. 其次，这种变化还因为人们的人生观和态度的转变

(11)改变 transform v.

The coming of …… has transformed the society, economy, as wall as our daily life. ……的到来，改变了我们的社会、经济和日常生活

(12)强调 重视 place emphasis on …… / give importance to ……

To start with, government and the public should place more emphasis on [the conservation of energy]. 首先，政府和公众应该重视环境保护

(13)认识到 be aware of / that ……

What’s more, people should be educated to become aware of the terrible consequences arising from [over-consumption].

其次，应该教育人们逐渐认识到(过度消费)的危害

(14)必定 肯定 be bound to do ……

(15)越来越…… increasing (adj.) increasingly (adv.)

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned with the problem

篇二：张浚铂mba英语写作终极成功模板2

新起点命题分析

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A2广告：正反观点

第一段：

(第一句)These days, one of the most controversial topics arousing general concern is （第二句）Whenever it comes to this issue, there will arise a heated/vehement discussion among the general public.(万能句型，任何有争议的话题都可以用，包括现象类作文)

（第三句）A vast majority of people are in strong opposition of advertisement, while others’ viewpoint is quite the opposite.

(第四局) For the moment, it seems, there is no hope of reaching a compromise between these two groups of opinions.

第二段：

（第一句）To prove their views, some important arguments have been given on both sides.

(第二句) With regard to the first group of people, two factors stand out among others.

(第三句) (第四句可省略) They often (第五句) For another thing,

(第六句) In contrast, there are also reasons for the opposite side.

（第七句）On one hand, they tend to think that many advertisements are not

(第八句) According to a recent TV survey conducted by the authority organization, they claim, as many as

（第九句）On the other hand, they allege that, every time, advertisements make 最后一段

(第一句) So far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support advertisements.

(第二句可) That is the former view seems more convincing, and acceptable to me.（第三句）Accordingly, this phenomenon should be encouraged and popularized by immediate and rigid regulations or laws.

模板2提炼：

现象引入： These days, when asked about the issue of________, people vary a lot in their viewpoints.

观点一分析 A small group of people tend to hold that ______填句子________. 具体例子 Some statistics appear to support their view: 填句子. 观点二分析 Despite the arguments above, there are still a sizable percentage of people in strong favor of

具体例子 According to them, there are quite a number of factors contributing to this idea, of which the first and foremost one is

最后一段： So far as I am concerned, the latter/former viewpoint seems more convincing, and therefore more appealing to me. In fact, however sound the arguments of the former/latter view may be, they only skim the surface of the

problem. Therefore,

现象分析作文：低碳生活(low-carbon life)已经成为社会的热门词汇，谈谈推广低碳生活的意义，以及我们如何践行低碳的生活方式。

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第一段：

第一句These days, one of the most controversial topics arousing general concern is 第二句Whenever it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.

第三句Some people view it as beneficial, while still some others consider that it is not suitable or acceptable for a developing country like China.

第四句So far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former view.

,第二段：

第一句Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows.

第二句 First of all, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and the steady improvement of living standards, there is an increasing number of people who 第三句According to the data given by the relevant government, as many as 59% of the common people surveyed have such experiences.

第四句 What’s more, the authorities concerned had already made relevant rules and regulations to advocate the low-carbon life.

第五句 In addition, the conception of low-carbon has been commonly accepted by so many Chinese young people that most of them choose to have a low-carbon life.

第六句Based upon a recent internet survey, nearly 100% people approve of the low carbon-life in China nowadays.

第三段：

There is no denying the fact that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but taking all these factors into consideration, my standpoint is clear and well founded in the foregoing discussions. (Therefore, I believe, the current trend should be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned.)

模板提炼

第一段：

第一句：

1. Nowadays more and more people the importance (significance/seriousness) of the problem of ________.

2. Recently the topic (issue/problem) of __________ has been in the limelight (has brought into focus)(has aroused public attentive concern)

3. Recently the ________ has become the focus(concern) of the public.

4. Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that_________ that______________________.

6. It is undeniable that______填句子____ has become the biggest concern of the present-day world.

7. The past few years have witnessed the emergence of a widespread social phenomenon, that is, _______________.

第二段：

第一句：原因

1. Some driving factors (forces) that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows.

First of all, _________________

In addition, ________________

What’s more _________________

Last but not least, ______________

2. Some possible reasons (driving forces) behind the above-mentioned changes could as follows.

3. It is not difficult for us to find some factors to account for this phenomenon.

4 It is of no difficulty for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.

5.影响So far as I am concerned, I believe that such changes will result in some consequences.

6.影响 It follows that some remarkable effects may inevitably (naturally) come up

原因1：The past 30 years of China’s reform and opening up have witnessed dramatic changes with regard to Chinese economy and society.

原因2：With the rapid development of Chinese economy and society, there is an increasing number of people__________________________________.

原因3： the conception of ________ has been commonly accepted by so many Chinese young people that most of them choose to________________________.

原因4： Everyone should realize the truth that the issue of ______ concerns not only the government but all of us.

原因5：The public should be educated to be more self-conscious of ____________.

原因6： Popularizing the national sense of ______ can gradually better the worsening situation in the problem of _____________. 在全国范围广泛地普及______意识将使每况愈下的_____情况/问题逐渐好转。

篇三：2016MBA英语写作模板

2016MBA英语写作模板

英语情景作文：辩论式议论文

模版(一)

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.

There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3.In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版(二)

People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing,论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least,论据3.

To conclude,总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.或From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版(三)

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(争论的焦点). Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, 论据1. Furthermore, 论据2. Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3.

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或From above, we can predict that 预测.

【图表作文写作模板】

It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of … has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone

up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as … varies). At the point of …, … reaches its peak …(多少).

What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First

of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).

From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).