2016年中考作文范文

篇一：人教版2016年中考英语作文范文30篇

人教版2016年中考英语作文范文30篇文章

Model Writings

（以下30篇文章仅供同学对不同题材的参考） 句型：下划线 词组短语:黑体 精美句子：方框

1. How to Make Friends

if you stay alone all the time. make friends when you have similar interests. Look at people in the eyes when you talk to them. Don?t be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best. Be a good listener. Let a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because

to choose from and have more chances to make friends.

Television has been in our life for many years.

from the plays on television. We?ll be bored all day if there is no television. Television programs are attractive. After a whole day?s hard work, we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea. How wonderful it is!

Television is also bad for people?s health. It’s not good for you to watching TV can influence our behavior and achievement. However, it depends on what we do.

3. Talk about Internet

Today，I?ll talk about going online. We know that there are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyablebecause we can learn how to use the computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English. We can read some good computer games. I can send e-mails to our friends quickly. We can chat online with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系)

people from all over the world, but unfortunately the government doesn?t allow communication with many people.

But some students spend too much time playing computer games and some stay in net bars all day and all night. As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons and they don’t study well any more. I think we shouldn?in summer or winter holidays.

4. A Picnic

It was a sunny day. We decided to have a picnicWhen I was 9 years old, my family took the bus to my grandparents'. In the bus, I had a good seat. At 7:30, the bus came to a village. A woman got on with a baby in her arms. At that time, there was no seat. But she must look after her baby carefully. She had to stand next to me. I wanted to stand up and let her sit down, but I was afraid of hearing the other people say “That girl wants to be praised.” I looked around. Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping. Suddenly, a little boy behind me, stood up and made room for the woman. She said:“Thank you very much” with a big smile. The boy smiled, too. When I told my cousin about it after that, he said :“That child

is a great boy.”we reached the picnic place. We sat by the river bank and took out a lot of things, such as bread, orange juice, apples, cakes, eggs and so on. All of Unluckily, there was no shelter nearby. We had to take a bus to go back home in a hurry.

5. An Unforgotten Summer Holiday

little boy did?

From

6.Don't Waste Water

不管，不顾)the notice above “Save the water, please.”there is very limited available （可利用的）water resources in the world. So we shouldn't waste it. Of course, we have to use it to drink, and to do cooking, washing and etc(and so on). But we

extravagantly(奢侈的，浪费的). If we don?t stop such wasteful habits, we would cut off (切开，切断，割掉，削除，伐除；截止；截断)the development of the world and human life.

7. How Do You Get on with Your Classmates?

How do you get on withthat question. If you meet up with your friends, you can say, "hello!" your friends must be happy, they will think that you are a polite girl or a boy!If your friends have some questions, you should help them. They'll of my classmates has some problems, my classmates will help them solve it. So they are excited.

polite and helpful child, and I hope you can get on well with all of your classm(来自:www.Zw2.cn 爱 作文 网)ates.

the world.

3. I want to be a reporter when I watch TV every evening. We can get lots of important information from them. They make the world smaller and China and the other countries around the world. I can meet many superstars as well.

5. I want to be a scientist. Scientists have made recorders, TV sets, and so on可以用分别用以上1. 2. 3. 4. 5点再加上后边的一段

来组成不同的文章)

come true one day, .”

8. I Want To Be A…….

1. I listen to my teacher carefully. I think I will become a teacher when I grow up play with my students, too. So we are good friends.

10. Life in the Future

go to the moon for vacations. What do you think?

11. My Chinese Teacher(可换为其他人)

very pretty and young. Her hair is brown and curly(卷缩的). Miss Li is very strict with us, when we make a mistake, she often makes us stand up. Miss Li often sticks to her lessons (坚持上课)when she is ill, she looks weak, but still beautiful.

Miss Li loves us very much, she teaches us so carefully. I think she is a good teacher. We all love her, too. I think teachers are like candles, giving off light for others by burning themselves.

12. My Dream

think that I can sing on the stage(舞台). I will move to New York and be a Because when I?m sad, I can sing songs to be happy and I will become very popular. That?s so interesting and exciting. For my dream, I will sing every day and sing well. I hope that day comes quickly, I can?t wait! ? What?s your dream?

13. My Family

people in my family. They are my parents, my grandparents, my sister, and I. My father and mother are businessmen. And farmers. middle school （可适当再增加）

14. My Favorite Sport

Everyone in this world so do I. My favorite sport is football. I often play football with my friends. I began playing football when I was 5 years old. There are many worldwide

is Edson Arantes do Nascimento who is a former Brazilian football professional football player. I learnt discipline(纪律) and teamwork through playing football.

15. My Home Town

rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward (落后)little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then

The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The love its people. They are 16. Myself

My name is Li Ling, I come from Kunming and I am in grade seven. I like to study maths and English. They are my favorite subjects. Maybe it best, you can do everything well. I also like sports, such as ping-pong, it is

I hope we can become good friends. This is me!

17. Sports Keep Us Healthy

Sports Everybody likes to do one kind or another. But not all people know how to do them correctly and sometimes the advice we get may be wrong. I?m lucky，for since my first day at school I have I have always been very strong. I go swimming almost every day all year round, few items at the school sports meeting this autumn.

18. A Gift

I have on my birthdays. But I love the book named ?Beautiful English? best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the my mother?s deep love.

19. My Day

篇二：2016中考作文趋势及2015中考满分作文精选 Microsoft Word 文档

中考作文的命题方向有八大类：（增补后四类）

1、成长感悟类5 读书感悟类

2、感恩感动类6亲情友情类

3、励志素养类7青春梦想类

4、审美感悟类8环保低碳类 2015年山东济南中考作文题目：那声音常在我心田

1．那声音常在我心田

三年时光匆匆，我深深眷恋着我的校园，因为这里有百听不厌的读书声。

每一次走进校园，朗朗的读书声都像一缕缕清新的风，吹向我的耳畔。那声音，像一曲跌宕有致的乐章，承载着我们的梦想。时而高亢，时而低沉，每一声都回荡在我的心间。

当读书声响起时，其中，有的声音浑厚，有的声音清脆：有的如铿锵击鼓，有的如绵绵细雨，都在微微润湿的晨风中酝酿，令清晨的空气也带着丝丝甜味。

读书声诵读着经典：宋濂不畏艰难求学，令我们深深赞叹：吕蒙终予醒悟读书，令我们刮目相看;花木兰勇于替父从军，令我们传唱不衰;口技人独自精彩表演，令我们叹为观止。每一次朗读都令我受益匪浅。

湖心亭上，张岱绘“天与云与山与水，上下一白”，一声声吟咏，展现水天一色的美景;桃花源中，陶渊明忆“阡陌交通，鸡犬相闻”，一声声吟咏，唱出对幸福生活的向往;岳

阳楼上，范仲淹道“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”，一声声吟咏，责任填满我们的胸膛。

朗朗的读书声，带着我在知识的殿堂里自由穿梭。走过赵县的赵州桥，那饱经沧桑的石板，令我心生感慨;徜徉苏州的园林，那独具匠心的轩榭池沼，令我心驰神往;登上泰山的绝顶“一览众山小”，令我心潮澎湃;飞跃咆哮的黄河，看汹涌的浪花，令我心头激荡。

每一次踏进校园，听到此起彼伏的读书声，我身上所有的倦怠都悄悄溜走。我的步伐不由加快，似乎有种无形的力量推着我，在学习的道路上奋勇向前。

每一次踏进校园，听到传递快乐的读书声，我都情不自禁地微笑。因为，这声音里有我对知识的渴望，有我们纯真美好的友谊，还有老师的谆谆教导，家长的殷殷期盼。每一声，都在我的心田绽开美丽的花朵，采撷雨露，迎接朝霞。

毕业前夕，我们再次齐读经典，然而，在嘹亮的诵读声中，我听出了“惜别”，听出了“珍重”。中考前夕，我再次来到校园，校园里寂静无声。我竞情不能已，仿佛曾经的读书声依然回响在我耳畔。

考场上，回首三年时光，有很多话想说，却最终汇成只言片语：别了，敬爱的老师;别了，亲爱的同学。在以后的读书声里，我将带着新的梦想扬帆起航，驶向心灵更广阔的领域。

高分启示

在考场作文中，一说到离别，很多考生会着重刻画离别的场景，而这篇作文独辟蹊径，将“读书声”和“离别”自然结合，在百听不厌的读书声中，道出了“离别即带着新的梦想起航”，赋予离别新的内涵。

2．那声音常在我心田

济南—考生不同的脚步声，或重或轻，或急或缓，凑成了一曲常在心田的爱之声。

晨之曲

清晨，天刚蒙蒙亮，妈妈就轻手轻脚地起来，为我做可口的早餐。妈妈的脚步，一会儿到饭厅的冰箱前，拿走晚上泡好的黄豆：一会儿到客厅的热水器前，烧一大壶开水，为我上学带水做准备;一会儿又到厨房，炒菜、打豆浆……她的脚步不停穿梭。当妈妈快做好饭时，爸爸起来了。爸爸往往是趿拉着拖鞋，“摩擦”到我的卧室门前，一下子推开门，笑着说：“大学生快起来!”然后就是风吹火一般的脚步，走进洗漱间。爸爸洗漱出来，见我还在床上磨蹭，刚要“东河狮吼”，我“噌”一下子从床上跳起来，几十秒钟就穿衣完毕。

午之曲

每当楼道里响起急匆匆的脚步声，那一定是妈妈下班回来了，她总是赶着回家做饭。那脚步声是匆忙的，却也是沉

重而疲惫的。

有一次，妈妈忙完工作已经中午十二点二十了，当她的脚步声响起在楼道里，是一连串的“咚咚”声，原来妈妈小跑着赶回来给我做饭。又有一次，由于太过着急，还未见妈妈进屋，“咚咚”声就戛然而止，原来妈妈扭伤了脚。从那以后一段时间，妈妈再回来时的脚步声都是一高一低，一轻一重。夜之曲

爸爸应酬很多，总是很晚回家。但无论多晚，他回来后的第一件事，总是要轻轻走进我的房间。如果我睡了，他就轻轻坐在我的床边，凝望我一会儿。那个时候，即使我能察觉也会闭着眼睛，只是静静感受爸爸的气息。过了一会儿，爸爸几乎是用轻得不能再轻的脚步走出去，然后小心翼翼地关好门。爸爸的脚步声像一首舒缓的轻音乐，在静谧的夜里格外亲切，让我感觉自己像躺在幸福的花园里，不知不觉便酣然入梦。

从早到晚，日复一日，年复一年，爸爸、妈妈的脚步声交替往复，从未停歇，奏响了一曲常在我心田的“爱之声”，伴我幸福成长。

点评：

考生善于捕捉日常琐碎的生活细节，并善于思考和发现，赋予平淡生活以人情味，令澜卷者感同身受。题记的语言非常凝练，却揭示了“脚步声”即“爱之声”的深刻主题，令

阅卷者一目了然。而从早到晚的时间顺序叙述，运用三个小片段，将一天中不同的脚步声自然贯穿起来，显示了考生严谨周密的构思。

2015年天津中考范文赏析：3.晒出我的梦想

时常有人问我，你的梦想是什么？今天我就晒出来与大家共享。

我的第一个梦想：考上理想的学校。

不要说我自私，从某种意义上讲，人都有点儿“自私”。我的短期目标就是考上我心仪已久的一中。平时，就是课间那比金子还难得的一点儿闲暇，我也常常闭上眼睛，想象自己在一中如画的校园里，度过我快乐而温馨的学生时代，这将为我考上理想的大学搭设一个很好的台阶。

我的第二个梦想：找一份儿好的工作。

大学毕业后的我步入社会，肩上的责任感倏地加重了。首先要照顾好我的家人，所以我需要一份儿好工作，让我有能力去做一个负责的好女儿、好姐姐。当然，这些工作必须是我喜爱的，能让我的人生过得更充实、更潇洒。

我的第三个梦想：买车买房给爸妈，让他们幸福。

篇三：2016中考语文写作专题二

专题二 看破千道题，其实一文章

考场作文要拿高分，首先得破题！考场作文题目层出不穷、五花八门，但实则万变不离其宗。不同作文题目之间或多或少都有着千丝万缕的联系，作文题目总会围绕某一主题命制，十年前的一道题和今年刚考过的题目在主题上可能是相同的。看透了这一点，考场上陌生的题目其实不过是改头换面后的“炒冷饭”。突破了审题关就能了解命题人想让我们写些什么，为临场发挥铺平道路，也为转换角度、“搬用”平时习作奠定了基础。

考场上，时间短，要获得高分，就得一气呵成，但这样的写作状态在平时的写作中也难得出现一两次。对此，众多一线老师的一致看法是：平时的优秀习作就是考场佳作，考场高分其实是在考场外取得的！初中三年练过的作文题目、学过的技巧与方法、累积下来的素材与范文都是为考试那一刻准备的！同学们需要做的不过是在看透题目、确定立意与选材的基础上，转换角度，把考场作文与平时的优秀习作对接起来。

“看破千道题，其实一文章”就是针对考场作文时间短，考题万变不离其宗的特点量身定制的！“看破千道题，其实一文章”首先在于如何破掉考场这道题，破了考场这道题，掌握了命题意图和可写角度，就可以借用平时习作了。借用平时习作的关键在于不跑题，这就要求我们要适时点题和改写语言细节，注意要拿出自己最得意的一篇习作来改写。那么，平时习作就要有意选用自己最有感触的立意、最熟悉的素材、最擅长的技法、最拿手的语言风格，同时反复推敲、修改，保证在中考前就能打造出几篇像样的“样板”习作！

下面编者以一篇学生的优秀习作为例，将湖南省2015年中考作文以此法串联起来，教会学生挖掘自己的作文潜力，从而写出考场佳作。

真题展示

优秀习作

爱是甜蜜的责任

爱，如一抹薄雾，与责任融合，飘在天际，弥散在心底。

——题记

爱与责任，在妈妈的嘴边。

每个人都有昵称，儿时妈妈唤我“宝贝”。但随着年龄的增长，我渐渐hold不住这样的“甜腻”，甚至有些反感??

一天早上，妈妈把我从被窝里拉起，我穿上衣服、鞋子后懒洋洋地在洗手间里刷牙洗脸，耳边响起妈妈的声音。“宝贝快点，要迟到了??”我打开门，极速向外冲去。“宝贝，书包！”我回头一看，天啊，我竟然忘了带书包！“宝贝，书包都忘了带！怎么这样丢三落四？宝贝，上课要好好听讲哦。”接过书包的那一刻，我突然闻到了幸福的味道。那一刻，我再次爱上“宝贝”这个昵称。

我知道，疼我爱我是妈妈甜蜜的责任！

爱与责任，藏在售票员心中。

一个春寒料峭的早晨,我坐在班车上，望着车窗外铅灰色的风景，木然地想着心事。车突然停了下来，司机打开车门，一个女人抱着孩子站在路边，身边还跟着个三岁左右的小女孩，似乎等了很久。“等急了吧，来，上车。”售票员热情地说道，女人抱着孩子上车，售票员轻轻抬起胳膊，把手放在孩子的头上方，防止孩子的头不小心撞到车门上，然后下车牵起女人的另一个孩子上了车。这一幕深深地触动了我，一股暖流涌上心头??

我知道，关爱乘客是售票员甜蜜的责任！

因为满怀对社会的关爱，湖南农大种子科学与工程专业博士生导师陈立云40年扎根稻田，为国家杂交水稻项目做出突出贡献；因为满怀对儿子的深爱，陶艳波十六年陪伴儿子读书，为无声世界里的儿子带来爱与知识的美好；因为满怀对贫困山区孩子的呵护，朱敏才、孙丽娜夫妇义务支教山村多年，为山村孩子打开了一扇了解外面世界的窗。

爱是甜蜜的责任，我们甘之如饴。

【名师点评】材料充实，内容丰富。小作者选取生活中的事例“妈妈对我的昵称中饱含着对我的爱与责任”“售票员对乘客的关爱和责任”来写，贴合生活实际，真实可感。同时，巧妙地运用陈立云、陶艳波、朱敏才等事例来支撑观点，使“爱是甜蜜的责任”具有更广泛的社会意义。巧用题记来揭示文章主旨，极具个性色彩。巧妙运用比喻、排比等修辞，使文章节奏整齐、语言优美，展现了小作者深厚的语言功底。

精彩变式

1. （’15岳阳）半命题作文：倾听的声音

分析这道半命题作文可知，此处需要补充一个名词或者名词性短语。此处可以补充抽象的事物，如“美”“爱”“勇气”等；也可补充具体的事物，如“花”“鸟”等。而原文书写“爱”与“责任”，那么这两者均可填入本作文题目的横线处，下面以“倾听爱

的声音”为例进行改写。

2. （’15永州）半命题作文：那一刻，我

仔细分析这道半命题作文，题目要求补写的是与“我”有关的事物，并没有明确限定范围，可补写名词性词组或短语，也可补写动词性词组或短语。可在原文标题“爱是甜蜜的责任”前面添加“懂得了”构成一个短语填入本题中，与原文主题契合，修改即可得到佳作。

3. （’15

湘潭）半命题作文：生命里不能没有

这道半命题作文并未限制所填词语，因此可填写具体的一个人或物，也可以填一种抽象的情感，如“爱”“担当”“勇气”“诚实”“感恩”“追求”“责任”等。故在此处可填写“爱”使之与原文契合，稍加修改即可得到佳作。