高考作文字加分

篇一：如何为高考作文加分

如何为高考作文加分

作者：陈艳

来源：《作文成功之路·教育新干线》2015年第01期

寒窗苦读十二载，明朝金榜可有我。这是多少学子们的忧虑！语文是工具性学科，也是战略性学科，首战不顺，定会影响后面几科的发挥。而作文是战略中的战略。那么，怎样为作文加分呢？

评卷老师有一套作文快速阅读法，即“作文看三眼”。第一眼看整体，主要看字体是否工整，卷面是否清洁，布局是否合理。第二眼看审题，主要看文章的审题是否准确、角度的切入是否得当、立意是否准确鲜明。第三眼看选材，主要看材料是否切题、丰富、新颖。所以要，要为作文加分需从以下几方面入手：

第一，从作文的卷面入手

卷面如人的容貌，给人的印象是非常重要的，卷面状况直接影响着阅卷教师的心理和情绪：字迹潦草、勾勾画画、涂改得难以辨认的试卷，马上就给阅卷者一个不好的印象，在无形中就会多扣几分；而书写工整，卷面清洁，则让人一看心中先喜三分，你的文章即使内容表达稍微欠缺，也会因阅卷者惜才而给出比实际水平高的分值。这么说，是不是卷子上一个字也不能改呢？也不是。该改的完全可以改，只是要改得清楚、整洁，哪些地方删掉，哪些地方增加，都要使人一目了然。

第二，审题准确，角度恰当，立意明了

立意是作文之魂，立意偏了，哪怕结构再精巧，语言再漂亮，也掩盖不了思想的苍白与贫弱。而且评卷老师在规定的场所、规定的时间内不可能反复阅读琢磨你的观点。因此，高考作文不宜写得太含蓄、深沉，故弄玄虚。例如：

我们正在走向“后物欲时代”，经济的爆发式增长是近几十年的突出现象，物质富足之后精神空虚和无聊的问题也日益突显。

东西方的贵族解决所谓的“富裕挑战”，其成功的道路都是致力于提升人的精神追求。古典教育的内容是教人如何生活的，而现代教育在这方面就绕了个大弯子，却是教人们如何工作的。留心一下周边的成年人，有多少毕业后还热爱阅读、体育、美术、高雅音乐、写诗赋词，保留着这方面的兴趣和习惯？更不用说，有的人甚至从未培养出这类兴趣和习惯。

于是乎，我们就有机会目睹官员贪腐、土豪炫富、明星吸毒、全民参赌等一系列怪现象，精神荒芜，道德滑坡，信仰迷失，人情淡薄，甚至比赤贫时代更加严重。如何找到救治“富而不贵”的药方呢？

请根据你对材料的理解和感悟，自选一个角度，写一篇不少于800字的文章，文体自定，标题自拟。要求：立意明确，不要套作，不得抄袭。

考生在习作中有以下立意：1.“后物欲时代”种种现象。2.成功的方法。3.寻找精神财富。4.为人生盛宴加点精神食粮等。

分析这则材料：第一段点现象，关键句“物质富足之后精神空虚和无聊的问题也日益突显”。第二段点原因，关键词“富于挑战” “提升人的精神追求”。第三段说结果，关键词“若不这样就会产生一系列怪现象”“如何找到救治富而不贵的药方”。由此材料的话题就是“如何用精神追求解决物质富足之后精神空虚和无聊的问题”，而第二段中“热爱阅读、体育、美术、高雅音乐、写诗赋词”就是精神追求的方法。这样一来，文章该如何立意，就明确了。很显然上述第四个立意切合题意。

第三，结构清晰

结构体现思路，讲究结构就是理清思路。就如做衣服，袖子、领口、衣襟，衣包等小零件要按一定的比例和顺序组合，一篇文章也是如此，文章的主题和众多材料确定好了之后，需要按合理顺序和思路组合在一起来表达主题。清晰的思路，不仅使主题鲜明，也能使内容深刻，还能让阅卷老师短时间内理解文章，发现亮点。

第四，语言规范，有文采

高考作文对语言的基本要求是文从字顺。具体说：每句话的意思要明确，不能产生歧义；句与句要连贯，不能出现跳跃。在此基础上，要有文采。“言之无文，行而不远”就是说文章没有文采，就不能流传很远，那么，我们要想文章打动阅卷老师，语言就必须有文采。怎样才能使语言有文采呢？

我研究了好多好多的满分作文，发现一个共性，就是他们的文章中，都会时不时的引用古代名句，来彰显文采和底蕴！但绝不是用个双引号，用个冒号，然后说：李白说过：“长风破浪” 这样的引用是垃圾！ 那么我们该怎么引用呢？我举个例子：

架舟于玉溪河上，轻轻拨动逆来的流水浮苏，渺渺兮听到了风急猿啸，远望那在水一方似然有广寒仙桂，朦胧仙子芳香。已然不知今夕是何年，今月否圆缺。

这句话中，没有一个完整的引用，但是却将好多句古诗词中的只言片语镶嵌其中，让改卷老师一看就知道：这个考生对古诗文的把握，已经超越了背诵阶段，达到了自如运用，长袖歌舞的层次。

因此合理的引用古诗词，不仅能含蓄地表达作者的思想感情或主张，而且能使文章富有文化意蕴，增添文采，提高品位，受到阅卷老师的青睐。

篇二：高考作文三天加分模版

高考作文有模板可循 熟记自己运用最好的七八个句子，考试时候一定可以用的上！！！

Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern. 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.

The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.

Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face. 如今，（人口过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.

It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为…… Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……

With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……

A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……

引出不同观点:

People’s views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……，然而其他人却认为……

People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.

Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.

There are different opinions among people as to …关于……，人们的观点大不相同.

Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

结尾

Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion

that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……

Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that …

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……

There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits. 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.

All in all, we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.

提出建议:

It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.

It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of … 毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.

Obviously, … If we want to do something … , it is essential that … 显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…

Only in this way can we … 只有这样，我们才能……

It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……

预示后果:

Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that … will lead us in danger.

很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.

No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that …

毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……

It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.

很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.

论证

From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.

I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点…… Personally, I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边. I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……

In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do ….

在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智.

Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why … 给出原因:

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …

这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先，……；第二,，……；第三，……

Why did …? For one thing …，for another …. Perhaps the primary reason is…

为什么会……？一个原因是……，令一个原因是……；或许其主要原因是……

I quite agree with the statement that … The reasons are chiefly as follows. 我十分赞同这一论述,即……，其主要原因如下:

列出解决办法:

Here are some suggestions for handling … 这是如何处理某事的一些建议. The best way to solve the troubles is … 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.

批判错误观点和做法:

As far as something is concerned, … 就某事而言，……

It was obvious that …很显然,….

It may be true that …, but it doesn’t mean that …

可能……是对的,但这并不意味着……

It is natural to believe that …, but we shouldn’t ignore that … 认为……是很自然的,但我们不应忽视……

There is no evidence to suggest that … 没有证据表明……

如何连接

1、强调

still, indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.

2、比较

like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.

3、对比

by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.

4、列举

for example, for instance, such as, take …for example, except (for), to illustrate.

5、时间

later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.

6、顺序

first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.

7、可能

presumably, probably, perhaps.

8、解释

in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.

9、递进

What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.

10、让步

although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.

11、转折

however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately, whereas

12、原因

for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.

13、结果

as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as a consequence

14、总结

on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.

15、其他

mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case

篇三：高考作文加分词组

英语写作词组

1. abide[?'baid] by(=be faithful to ; obey)忠于；遵守(法规)；信守（协议）

2. of one’s own accord(=without being asked; willingly; freely)自愿地 ,主 动地

3. be engrossed [in'ɡr?ust] in ,be rapt in(=be absorbed in) 全神贯注于…

4. (be) abundant in(be rich in; be well supplied with) 富于,富有 Abundant energy/opportunities

5. in accord with 与…一致 . out of one’s accord with 同….不一致with one accord (=with everybody agreeing)一致地 in accordance with (=in agreement with) 依照,根据 on account of 因为; on no account不论什么原因也不

6. take…into account(=consider)把...考虑进去

7. be accustomed to (=be in the habit of, be used to)习惯于.

8. to advantage 有利的,使优点更加突出地.

9. answer for (undertake responsibility for, be liable for, take charge for) 对…负责.

10. appeal to sb. for sth. 为某事向某人呼吁. appeal to sb. 对某人有吸引力

11. arrange for sb.sth. to do sth. 安排…做…

12. be ashamed of (=feel shame, guilt or sorrow because of sth. done) 以… 为羞耻

13. assure sb. of sth. (=try to cause to believe or trust in sth.) 向…保证, 使…确信.

14. attach(to) (=to fix, fasten; join) 缚, 系 ,结

15. make an attempt at doing sth. (to do sth.) 试图做…

16. attend on(upon)(=wait upon, serve, look after) 侍候,照料

17. attitude to toward …对…的态度.看法

18. attribute…to…(=to believe sth. to be the result of…)把..归因于.., 认为..是..的结果

19. (be) aware of (=be conscious of , having knowledge or consciousness)意识到,知道.

20. by birth 在出生上,论出身,按血统 at birth 在出生时; give birth to 出生

21. blame sb. for sth. 因…责备某人 blame sth. on sb. 把…推在某人身上

22. be capable of 能够, 有能力 be capable of being +过去分词是能够被…的

23. in comparison with (=in contrast to) 和…比起来

24. conform to (=be in agreement with, comply with) 符合,遵照,遵

守;1)obey 服从; 2) observe; 3)comply with照…办;

5)abide by服从;6)stick to按..做

25. be confronted with(=be brought face to face with) 面对, 面临

26. in consequence (=as a result) 结果

27. in consideration of (=in return for, on account of, because of )由于

28. considerate (=thoughtful of the needs) 体贴的, 考虑他人需要的, considerable相当大的,值得考虑的

29. contribute to 有助于

30. with credit以优异成绩; to one’s credit使某人感到光荣

31. on the decline 在衰退中, 在减少中 in decline 下降; on the increase 在增加

32. despite (=in spite of) 不管, 尽管

33. be bound to (do) (=be required by one’s job or esp. by conscience) 有义务(做)

34. economize on (=save sth. instead of being wasteful) 节省

35. emerge from ( =appear, become known ) 出现, 暴露(问题. 意见等)

36. engage in 或 be engaged in 忙于,从事

37. in the event of(=in case of)万一,即使发生..时

38. in excess of (=more than) 超过

39. exert oneself to do sth. 努力,使劲

40. in one’s favour(=to one’s advantage)对.有利

41. be ignorant of ( = lacking knowledge) 对…不了解,不知道

42. be indifferent to (=not interested in)对…漠不关心, 冷淡, 不在乎

43. inferior to(=less good in quality or value) 比…差; superior to比… 好

44. (be) intent on 专心致志, 坚决

45. intervene in 干预

46. be liable for 对…应负责任的

47. for life 终身

48. (be) at a loss 不知所措

49. major in 主修（某课程）

50. as a matter of fact 实际上, 事实是

51. on memory of 为纪念…

52. object to (=be opposed to) 反对

53. on occasion(=now and then)不时地,必要时

54. by occasion of (=because of) 由于

55. once and for all =once and forever永远地

56. come go into operation开始运转

57. be of the opinion 持有…的看法

58. on the outskirts (of) 在城郊

59. participate in (=take part in)参加

60. in particular (=especially) 特别是,尤其

61. (a) passion for 对…的热爱,热情

62. (be) at peace with 与…和睦相处

63. take(a) pleasure in 喜欢做某事

64. preside over at 主持(会议,业务等)

65. prevail over 占优势, 压倒, 战胜

66. previous to (=prior to) 在…之前

67. take pride in(=pride oneself on) 以…自豪

68. in private (=privately) 私下, 秘密地 in public 公开地

69. proceed from (=arise from, result from) 由…发出, 由…引起(产生)

70. in progress(=in the state of be done)进行中

71. prohibit…from (=forbid) 禁止, 阻止

72. to the purpose (=useful for one’s purpose)得要领的, 中肯的 73. be qualified in 在某种科目或学科上合格 be qualified for 在某种职业上合格

74. in question (=under discussion)所谈及的;

75. range over (=cove, include) 范围包括

76. at any rate (=at all events)无论如何,总之

77. relevant to 与…有关的

78. resort to force 诉诸于武力