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  今天,是开学的第二天,我刚走进教室发现我们班还是像上学期一样那么吵,,弟弟带我走到作为处,我们发现作为被人坐了。弟弟出去像何老师反应,老是说,等一下过去。可我们等了好久老是都没来,我再去向老是反应说:“我们的作为被别人坐了”老师说,你们先找个位置坐下,等一下你们的班主任还会去调位的。我走出了办公室,跟弟弟说:“先去第五组找个位置坐下,刚好第五组第三张桌子没有人坐,我们做了下去。

  我还发现了班里来了个新同学,但是也有几个同学没有在这里读了。

同样,你需记住自己十五岁的时候,那被笑声引领的日子,那被泪水浸漫的日子,那带给你奋斗与拼搏的日子。

所以,请记住痛并快乐着的时候,记住自己十五岁的时候。

[点评] 本文选材角度独特,正副标题已经别出心裁,以一位父亲的口吻向孩子娓娓讲述,告诫她铭记自己成长的经过,尤其铭记成长中的苦痛,成长中的转折点。三段分别以小草、蝴蝶、凤凰花类比,篇末回归自身,抒写十五岁面临中考这一人生转折时的感慨,全文格调积极、昂扬,富有真情实感。(此文为一类卷,59分)

(二)记住自己“给予”的时候

灿烂的阳光下,油亮的新叶在这暖暖的春意下像缀满一树的绿宝石,地上留下的斑斑驳驳的叶影似乎在随着阳光曼舞翩跹。(开篇就充满吸引力,比喻新颖,拟人生动。)

放学的路上,与几位好友同行,在这暖暖的阳光里尽情享受,不禁感叹这是多么高贵的给予啊!

刚转过路口,老远便听见一阵沉郁但却隐含少许伤意的竽声。循声望去,只见一位年过半百的老汉正卖力地吹着一支竹竿,深蓝色的中山装似乎被什么涂抹得愈发黑灰。晶亮的汗水在老汉银白的头发间浸染着,在镌刻着岁月的皱纹间滚动着。老汉身边的轮椅上倚着一个更加苍老的老妪,干瘪的身子骨上盖着一条破烂的毯子。她闭着眼睛,显得憔悴不堪。一只瓷碗,一张木牌就这样静静地默默地倒在地上,在绿叶的荫蔽下。(外貌描写生动细致,“涂沫”、“浸染”、“镌刻”、“滚动”等词语用得准确,富有张力。)

急忙走上前,通过他们身前的木牌,我与好友了解到这是一对无儿无女的老夫妇。迫于生计,又因老汉的妻子无钱治病,老汉只得出来给人吹竽,顺便带上老妪,也方便照顾。在笔墨歪斜的字体间,我微微触到了在汩汩流淌的一种情感,我赶忙将手伸进衣袋,想给予他们些什么。(对自己的心理刻画很到位。)

身边的一位好友迅速从自己的口袋里掏出几枚硬币,咣当咣当地掷进了那口瓷碗,我的心也随之释然欣悦起来。同行的另一位好友这时竟拍起刚才那位施舍钱财的好友的肩,打趣道:“哟,挺有善心的嘛!”此时,我正欲掏出钱来,不料竟听到那位施舍的好友回答道:“那么可怜的人,我们又不缺这几块钱,还不如丢给他们。”

我愣住了,放在口袋里的那只手久久没有掏出来,那已摸得暖热的硬币又被我重新放回口袋。阳光依旧灿灿地照着,我很想看到叶片上闪闪的亮光,但我又不得不注意叶子下方那阳光照不到的地方。(语句含蓄,以眼前之景来写眼前之人,内蕴丰富,富有诗意。)

在这依然萦绕耳旁的竽声中,在这瓷碗里的一堆纸币或硬币下,我充分发现这是一个多么“高贵”的给予。一种仅限于物质条件的给予,但同时却给予了他人精神上的虐杀。建立在如此自我意识形态上的给与,已成为多少人夸夸其谈的高尚呢?他们已忘却了真正的给予。(善于对社会现象进行深入思考,体现了作者对生活的敏感。)

瞬间,忘却了我们隐匿灵魂深处真正给予的出发点。

忘却自己给予的时候,我们太可悲。记住自己“给予”的时候,我们太可耻。(结尾强劲有力,给人警醒,引人深思。)

[点评] “一种仅限于物质条件的给予,但同时却给予了他人精神上的虐杀”,作者通过放学路上的一段见闻,表达了自己对“给予”的理解,文章内容深刻、富有内涵。(此文为一类卷,获得满分60分)

All in all. Competition is important for us in that it let us perfect ourselves and improves ourselves,and brings us countless.

12.Shall We Only Buy Things Made in Our Own Country? There is a public debate today on the issue of shall we only buy things made in our own country.There is no doubt that we should not only buy things made in our own country.Globalization is a larger trend than anyone could have imagined. Countries are independent and interdependent. Because of this, I do not think that we should only buy things that are domestically produced.

On the one hand, something made in our own country would do harm to our health.It has become clear to us that the problem of food safety. The goods made in China are usually associated with poor quality, for instance, melamine in baby formula milk powder, poisonous color, oxalic acid, etc.In a word, for our health, we should not only buy things made in our own country.

On the other hand, no one country is resourceful enough to produce everything that people need in life. In this highly globalized world, it is no longer able to be completely "self-sufficient". For example, in China,56.5 percent of China's oil imports from other countries.If we insist on buying home-grown products, we have to give up 56.5 percent of our oil and the price

of oil in our country must be higher!Only play the economic characteristics of each country, in order to meet consumer demand for commodities.

All in all, we had better not purchase things that are made in our country only.

14.One Way to Keep Our Information Safe

With the rapid growth of Internet, the necessity to keep our information safe has become increasingly important in our daily life.

Like many people, I almost always receive spam calls and text messages a day on the phone. The other can accurately call out my name.Late last year, revealing the largest Chinese Internet leaks, shocking to highlight the fragile status of protection of personal information. Chinese hackers Godfather goodwill interview that the user account and password information is only "hackers"

released on about 100 million. "underground hacker"

might also master the more Internet users account information.

Because of that, when we want to register in an english website, chances are that you are required to fill in the real name and ID card number to download some documents.This simple yet potentially threatening act opens you to identity exposure.One way to keep our information safe, in my opinion, is to avoid filling in our real information in to the website.

The major advantage of doing this is the fact that it will lower the risk of exposing our information to others.Usually, those fishing websites would be disguised as the authentic trading platform to lure Internet users and deceive them into entering their identity information.

All in all, we should avoid filling in our real information in to the website.

102.Making an Invitation

November.6th

Dear Bill,

I am going to have a pajamas party to celebrate Single Day in my house.Certainly I wish you could come, because you are my best friend.It's next Friday, November 11th, at 8:00 pm.

I hope you can make it, and I am looking forward to introducing you to my other friends at the party.

Truly Yours,

Tomkin

105.Declining an Invitation

November.9th

Dear Tomkin,

I want to be able to accept your invitation for your single pajamas party on Single Day, November 11th.But I get a girlfriend now. What a pity!

Thank you just the same for inviting me.I will send you some drinks to your home that day.Hopefully you will have a great time at your party, and happy Single Day to you!

Sincerely yours,

Bill

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