新能源英语作文

篇一：英语四级作文话题分类篇-能源

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在历年四级考试作文话题中，关于能源的话题出现了2次，查看热门作文话题：四六级考试网

关于能源的问题成为了近年来大家关心的热点问题。很多不可再生能源需要大家去保护，节约。为了帮大家理清写这类作文的思路，我们来看一篇范文：

Ever since early this century, electricity has become an essential part of our modern life. It plays an important role in many fields such as industry, agriculture and the daily life of men. Electricity is a source of energy that makes it possible for the factories to turn out products and for people to create comfortable living conditions, for example.

If there were no electric power, things would be quite different. Machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what is essential for them to keep alive. Traffic would have to stop at night because there would be no lights in the street. A world in darkness would no longer be a pleasant one. In a word, things would be in a mess.

Therefore, we should realize the importance of electricity. As electricity is insufficient in our country, we should be frugal in using electricity. We should make great efforts to produce more electricity.

这篇范文讲的是电。典型的三段论

1. How can we use electricity?

2. What would happen if there were no electricity?

3. We should improve the enery conservation.（节约能源）

从上文中可以看出，有很多关于能源的词汇是我们必须掌握的。

对于这来话题，我们要从一下几方面入手：

1. 此能源用来干什么，也就是回答What can we do by using it?

2. 没有这类能源，世界或者我们的生活会是什么样，也就是回答What would happen if there were no...?

3. 怎样合理利用能源，也就是回答What should we do to improve the enery conservation?

由于作文时间很紧，在审题的同时我们就要在心中认真思考这三个问题，并及时想到有哪些词汇或句子可以为我们所用，给文章增色。最重要的是要有一个大方向-合理利用能源，节约能源。

有了这个框架，在碰到任何关于能源的话题时，我们就不至于手忙脚乱，头脑发懵了。

说了这么多，现在我们以：Energy Shortage 为题来练习一下吧。

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篇二：关于能源短缺的英语作文

关于能源短缺的英语作文

当今社会能源短缺，环境污染严重，以及解决的问题

Energy shortage is a very serious problem in the world. Many people worry that energy resources on the earth will be exhausted if we use them in an unchecked way. This, most people agree, will cause serious problems and even crisis and jeopardize the survival of mankind .On the one hand, most people agree that the problem can be solved in one way or another. One is to conserve and save our energy. Energy refers not only to coal, oil, or natural gases but also to goods, land and water, etc. Most countries have realized the wastefulness in their using of energy. They are trying to conserve energy. For example, some countries have a daylight saving system to use less electricity for lighting. Some cities have enforced water savers at public such as restrooms and bars. Some have enforced serious penalties on overuse of electricity, water, and farming land. By these means, people hope the drain on energy resources could be slowed down.However, conservation alone cannot solve the problem. Another way, perhaps the best I think,, is to develop new energy resources. Obviously, no matter how hard we try to save energy resources and how abundant they are, we will use them up sooner or later. I think there are many energy resources that we can develop and utilize. We don't have to depend only on the current conventional energy resources. There are many other energy resources that we can develop such as nuclear power, waterpower and solar power. These resources, if developed, can completely replace the conventional energy and thus solve the problem of energy shortage.

篇三：节约能源英语作文

节约能源英语作文

节约能源 英文： Save the Energy Resources

Another round of energy crisis is knocking at the door. In 2004, world oil

consumption reached a new record, causing oil price in the international market to

skyrocket amazingly. As for China, it was reported that many traditional mineral cities in northeastern China had run into predicament, with their economy collapsed and workers unemployed, only because coal had been mined out.

Fossil energy resources, including coal, oil and gas, are unlike sunlight, water power and wind power which are generated consistently. They’re not practically reproductive during human history. Once consumed, they’re gone forever. If they were to be exhausted before we could find sufficient reproductive resources to replace them with, we’d have to live in entire blackout again like our ancestors have done thousands of years ago. That’s of course not what anyone would want to see.

Due to technical limitations, people still have to utilize these resources now.

As a result, we must economize them most cleverly. New techniques should be developed and applied to reduce energy cost in industry and daily life. Alternative energy should be employed wherever possible. Eradicate any practice that wastes energy. Humans have overcome so many crises in history, and we’re sure to win this time also.

With the develope of society,many people begin to care about saving energy.I think saving energy is everyone's duty.So we should do well our responsibility.For instance,we need remeber to shut off the lamp when we leave a room without anyone else and shut off the tap when stop to use it to save water.Sometimes we can take our bay to the

supermarket to buy something.It can save resources.Finally,the most basica is we can't throw litter on the ground anyway.We have one earth ,she is our only home.If everyone do his best to protect her,she will be more beautiful.

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作文是决定语文考试成绩的“半壁江山”，因此作文的成败往往决定了整个语文考试的成败。那么怎样让考试作文得高分呢?我觉得以下几点必须注意。

1、题和立意凡考试作文必须审题，原因是考生要在同一环境下，作公平的竞争。审题，就是要对试题展现的所有内容作全面、准确的审读和理解，把命题者的意图读出来，把题目的各种限制审清楚，明确要我写什么，怎么写，写到什么程度，真正做到全面领会，深刻把握，不偏不漏、不折不扣地按要求写作文。高考作文评判明确规定，凡审题有问题的试卷最

后得分一般都不超过二类卷最低分。由此可见，审题的准确与否是作文成败的关键因素。立意，就是要作者站在时代的高度，去观察、认识生活，提炼主题，使主题体现时代的精神，既反映时代，也作用于时代，跳动时代的脉搏，推动着时代的前进。文章的“意”， 其实就是作者在体验生活中逐步孕育而成的一种思想，是作者的主观认识与客观实际相“撞击”的产物，它反映作者的思想水平、认识水平以及在社会生活中形成的世界观、人生观、价值观等。近两年的作文教改提倡学生写真实生活、真实自我，有些同学忽视了对文章思想倾向的把握，看问题不全面，观点偏激，更有甚者由腐败现象而怀疑党的领导和党的政策。尽管当今的中国社会政治清明，言论自由，话说错了不会追查什么政治问题，但作为未来社会的建设者，正确的是非观还是应该有的。这一点必须注意。

2、标题和段落标题是文章的眼睛，也是阅卷老师对文章的第一印象，特别是自拟题目写作，阅卷老师很看重考生所拟的标题。俗话说：“秧好一半谷，题好一半文”，可见题目的重要性。有(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网)些考生先写正文再拟标题，文章写好后也许是没有时间写标题，也许是忘了补写标题。虽然评分规定无标题扣2分，但实际结果却远非2分。有人曾做过这样的实验，将几篇写得较好的作文，按保留标题和隐去标题两种类型请两组老师分别予以阅卷，其分数差别一般都在5分以上。这是因为阅卷老师对无标题作文产生了一种心理距离，不知不觉便降低了分数等级。至于如何拟题，我觉得应做到这样几条：①确切。指符合文章内容，也指遣词造句符合规范)。②精练。指标题字数恰当。③生动。指题目能体现出一种活力，具有可读性，饶有情趣。④新颖。指有新视角、新思路、新感悟，能够给人一种新鲜感。⑤有意蕴。指有内在的含义。拟题方法多种多样，可以运用修辞拟题，可以引用俗语拟题，可以化用古语拟题，可以借用成语拟题，可以套用流行语拟题，也可以巧用其他学科公式或符号拟题等等，考生可以根据自己的情况灵活运用。段落：考试作文最忌首、腹、尾三段式的结构。把文章分为几段更好?千字以内的作文，我觉得分为5-8个自然段就可以了。因为自然段分得越自然，越显得你成熟老练。另外，要把每一段的首句写好。每一段的首句犹如人的眉目，把首句写好，“眉清目秀”，整个段落都显着精神。

3、文体和内容高考作文试题对文体的要求有两类：一类是规定必须写某种文体，如“写一篇议论文”;另一类是排除写某种文体，如“除诗歌外，其他文体不限”。考生必须按规定的文体去写。近几年高考作文题中“文体不限”，让考生自由选择文体，这里要特别注意，文体不限不是不要文体，而是要你在选择了一种文体后，一定要按这种文体特点写作，要写什么象什么。不可随心所欲，写成不伦不类的“四不像”文章。文章内容方面：不假思索就能想到的东西，绝对不要写;稍加思索想到的也不要写;花上几分钟，想别人想不到的内容来写。记叙文最好将主人公设定为自己，用第一人称入文，让“我”的激情在文章中闪光，情真意切，引起共鸣。议论文切忌大话、套话、废话，要避免空发议论，无病呻吟，滥提口号，乱发号召，空表决心等等。作文可以虚构，“允许”编写故事，但不等于提倡“编写故事”，编写故事要做到“大胆想象，自圆其说”。滥编、胡编，绝对不会得高分。

4、开头和结尾应试作文的开头结尾，就是文章的刀刃。平时在课内外所学的各种开头结尾的方法完全可以用在应试作文上。不管你使用什么方法开头和结尾，必须做到开头起笔入题，结尾点明主旨。为了给评卷老师一个好的印象，开头结尾千万不要涂抹。有道是：良好的开端是成功的一半。可有些考生犯“入题慢”的毛病：有的把大段的原材料全部照搬;有的

把本来简洁的原材料进行扩展;有的开篇摆材料，古今中外，慢慢道来。开篇松散，占去了大量的篇幅，后面的真正应该说的内容却“千呼万唤不出来”，有的只是一笔带过，草草收兵，比例严重失调，使老师难以衡量其实际写作水平。古人写文章讲究“凤头”、“猪肚”、“豹尾”，这是有一定道理的。可有些考生作文来不及刹尾，或用一句话硬断，或点上一串省略号，这样即使你雕出了“凤头”，壮大了“猪肚”，也会因为没有“豹尾”而不成其好文章，得不到高分。阅卷老师衡量一篇文章的好坏，首先是看其整体。所以，考生交给老师的无论如何也应是一篇完整的作文。

5、语言和字数考试作文语言要规范准确，具有个性和活力。不要文白夹杂;不要使用别人看不懂的方言和词汇;少用长句多用短句;可引进部分时代新词汇，引用名言警句，引用流行的通俗歌曲歌词，引用百姓口头民谣，但取向一定要积极向上，真正让语言亮起来。照理说，文章是表情达意的工具，有话则长，无话则短，似乎不应有字数的限制。但考试作文，作为一种特殊形式的作文，为了达到一定的考查目的，并考虑到考试时间等因素，一般对字数都作了规定。我们必须按照规定去做。限最低字数的，一定要写够数量或稍微超过50—100字才好。如果字数不足，虽然评分标准规定，不足字数的，每少50字扣1分，但实际情况是，字数不足往往被认为文章内容单薄，分数很难上档次。限最高字数的，不要超过。否则，给人一种臃肿的感觉，再说，作文写得长，花的时间多，解答前面的题用的时间少，必定会受到影响。如果没有限最高字数，一般就是以作文纸为限，即要在作文纸格子内行文。千万不要自作多情，超出作文格子，以免出力不讨好。

6、书写和卷面近年高考作文评分标准中，书写都占相当的比分。一般不要求写得好看，但要求书写整齐易辨认，一笔一画清清楚楚，不写草字。标点符号书写也要规范，特别是格式要正确，句号、逗号、问号、叹号、顿号、分号不要出现在一行之首;引号、括号、书名号前半不出现在一行之末，可以在这些符号后面挤着写一个字;引号、括号、书名号后一半不出现在一行之首，可以把这些符号挤在上一行之末。省略号、破折号占两个格，不能断开，写不下时挤在一行之末。至于作文的卷面，正如人的容貌一样，给人的印象是重要的，尤其是高考作文，卷面整洁与否直接影响着阅卷老师的心理和情绪，书写工整，卷面清洁，让人一看心中先喜三分，其结果是可想而知的。

7、检查与修改考试作文试题和其他试题一样，做完后也需要认真检查，看有没有笔误的错别字，有没有不通顺的句子，有没有需要调整的内容。审查发现了错别字、错用了词语一定要修改过来，对于句段该删的要删掉，该增的要增补，只是要改得清楚、整洁，使人一目了然。不能因为修改而影响了卷面的整洁。