雅思小作文考官范文

篇一：雅思写作满分考官范文

雅思写作满分考官范文

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今天为大家准备了关于知名运动员收入高低的雅思写作满分考官范文，对于在雅思写作中遇到瓶颈的同学们参考。想要在写作上更上一层楼，需要平时在练习中要对文章机构，句式运用，词汇选择，论点的表达都要能达到满分的写作标准。

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

考官范文：

As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.

Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading

politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. However, sports salaries

Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career.

The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

在媒体不断地推波助澜下，我国的许多职业运动员已成为了明星和名人。那些顶尖的运动员收入颇丰。像一些电影明星一样，他(她)们也是香车豪宅，生活极为奢华。

许多人觉得与那些挣高薪的顶级外科医生，从事研究的科学家或有管理国家责任的高官相比，他(她)们的回报极为不公。然而，运动员的薪水并不是由一个人对社会所做出的贡献或者其责任水平所决定。相反，它们反映的是从整体上来说体育运动在大众中的普及性以及那些成功的体育明星对促进公众对运动的支持所做出的贡献。所以，“公平”的概念并不是问题关键之所在。

那些认为体育明星拿高薪无可厚非的人争辩说那些有天赋的体育运动员实属凤毛麟角，高薪是对他(她)们娴熟技能和通往成功之路所付出努力的承认。竞争持续不断，运动员在他(她)们相对较短的运动生涯中迎接每次检验。来自于媒体的压力令人窒息，而且他(她)们必须生活在镁光灯下，没有隐私。这一切都证明了他(她)们高薪得之无愧。

在我个人看来，比起电影明星的高薪，体育明星的高薪更受之无愧。但与此同时，该现象也显得出我们的社会更关注体育而非其它一些更重要的领域和成就。以上就是这篇关于知名运动员收入高低的雅思写作范文的全文，比较符合我们国家目前的国情，同时可以看出这篇雅思写作经典范文采用的是分总文章结构，同时长短句的搭配是值得借鉴的，同时一些小词组和词汇都用的很灵活和有深度。

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篇二：老外的标准雅思小作文范文(分享)

第三节观点之间的连贯

Firstly/ primarily/ initially/

其他参考：

vThe first and most important thing is (concerned with)?

vThe first important factor being taken into account is that ?

v? should be put in the first place

vA crucial element has to be considered with regards to teaching quality.

vWe may mention/ point out the indisputable/ undeniable fact that ?

Secondly/ additionally/in addition/ also/ admittedly/ furthermore/ moreover/ besides/ vBesides, we should not neglect that ?

vApart from this (in addition to this), another aspect/ factor is concerned with ? vAnother special consideration in this case is that ?

vAnother equally important/ essential consideration is ?

vAnother reason lies in the fact that ?

vAnother reason lies somewhere close to the fact that ?

vSimilarly, another thing that also deserves our special attention is ?

vAnother important fact which goes strongly against it is ?.

vWhat is also noticed is that ?

vBut that is only part of the explanation. Perhaps the most significant one goes this way.

1)用连接词(详见单词书201)

因果:because,as ,for ,since, lead to ,result in (from), contribute to consequently, hence ,so ,therefore, as a result ,as a consequence, accordingly

递进:furthermore, what's more ,moreover,incidentally, meanwhile, besides, particularly. similarly at the same time , in addition,

转折:but ,however, conversely ,anyway, desptie,

although ,though , likewise, nevertherless ,otherwise, after all, all the same (虽然,但是) at the same time (可是) not withstanding(虽然) on the contrary

PS: 连词:because ,as ,for ,since, even if , although when 主句.conj+从句

副词:主句,adv,主句

IV．结论段与备考策略

第一节结论段

结尾段：总而言之/显而易见+如此建议/ all in all, to sum up, to summarize, as a conclusion --总而言之/显而易见:结尾标志词 in conclusion, +总结主题段落阐述的内容/或用不同语言重现文章的主题/ 作者表态

--如此建议:最有价值的废话

v同意与否：表态+（建议）p57~58

v利弊：表态+建议p61

v原因/问题/解决：总结+建议 p63

回顾 1

Task 240分钟完成

高分词汇：AA，AB重现；连字符词语: win-win situation; 名词化短语；一词多义的单词：bridge n. / vt. Brave adj. / vt. 勇敢面对

六大结构： 后置定语；排比句 not only… but also…等；同位语；名词性从句；虚拟语气；否定兼倒装：Only in this way can we…; Not only verb + subject

First and Last注意首句和末句；首段和末段；每段的首句和末句

五种题型：(1side一分写法，正或反面选其一；2side两分写法，正反面都要写，易拿高分)

Do you agree /disagree? What is your opinion? (1/2-side)

观点性辩论文 To what extent do you agree or disagree? (1/2-side)

现象/说明性论述文

1 辩论文（一分法/二分法）

一分法 完全赞成/反对

Part 1我同/反间接或直接点题

Part 2同/反 1

同/反 2理由，举例

Part 3 我同/反 Discuss both sides… (2-side) Problem-Solution (Why-Because, Causes-Effects) (2-side) General-Particular (2-side)

二分法7-8分

1 2 3

Part 1 我同/反/中立 间接点题

Part 2 同 同反

反反 同

Part 3我同/我反/中立 我同 我反

3种写法： 势均力敌 同=反 先扬后抑 同>反 先抑后扬 同<反

第一种“同=反”比较难写，不要轻易尝试

Part 1 首段末句必须中立点题

Part 2 中间部分必须互反： 利弊，迟早，新旧，今昔对比互反

Part 3 末段首句必须明确表态 （赞成/反对）

2．论述文

Question-Answer Pattern

Part 1What Part 2Why1 Why2Part 3 How

复习总结 2

命题形式:

1.arguement (辩论式) 50% 问A.B好不好

2.report (论说式) 20% 问原因,解决办法

3.mixed (混合式) 30% 有两个以上问号

写作格式

1.不写题目

2.分段

3.用铅笔写(B型或自动笔)一行8-10个字

PS: 注意大小写,注意标点,不要用缩写如don't,书写工整

ARGUEMENT

一, 五段论式:

................Introduction............................

.......................Reasons (2-3)............................

.......................让步段.................................

.......................Conclusion..............................

小作文 ，是个看似困难实则简单的写作类型。很多同学觉得就像我们小时候的看图说话，但拿到图后却又不知道该如何写。本文将带你由繁入简用二十个小时彻底搞定小作文。 ??

第一阶段

第一个5小时：热身

无论是什么样的 英语作文，都离不开语法的支持。它就像修房子的地基一样，只有牢固的语法基础，作文这座摩天大楼才能拔地而起。就小作文而言，我们可以将语法复习分为两个部分。即时态和句型。众所周知，英语十二大时态乃语法之根本，然而雅思小作文仅需两个时态即可搞定！从考官的满分作文来看，除了首句用一般现在时，后面的句子都可以用一般现在时。当然有一种情况例外，就是如果给你的图表上面有对将来的预测即你当前时间以后的情况的话我们就用一般现在时加表预测的 词汇 来使用就可以了。句型方面要求也不是很高，在我们中学阶段所学的简单句和复杂句上面找寻最合适的就行了，原则上雅思小作文并不推荐大家使用太过于复杂的长难句。从满分范文上就能看出端倪，一篇好的小作文就是在它身上抠不出更多的东西。所以，小品词，插入语，非谓语动词等的用法尤为 关键 和重要，请大家在准备阶段的时候多加复习。

??第二个5小时：练习

此阶段的练习并非小作文的练习，而是在正式进入攻坚阶段前的准备性练习。请问你准备好了开始写作文了吗？相信大部分同学还没准备好！怎么办？拿出你的新概念英语，不要看原文，只看作者翻译的中文，尝试着再翻回到英文去。看看你的版本和英文原版还差多少。坚持一段时间后你会发现你的翻译水平上升了很多，至少是在句子翻译上面你会逐渐习惯原文的精炼和巧妙。此乃前期阶段练习写作的不二之法！！

第二阶段

第一个2.5小时：破冰

雅思官方规定了小作文写作时间20分钟最低字数150字，大作文写作时间40分钟最低字数180字。从这个层面就很好的印证了官方的那句话：”Writing Task 2 carries more weight.”小作文所占分值不如大作文高，但并不代表着它就不重要，往往小作文写得好坏足以影响后面大作文发挥的 心情 和状态。那么怎么样写好一篇小作文呢？首先我们要确定所谓小作文究竟有哪些？其实就是两大类：主流类（曲线图、饼状图、柱状图和表格图），非主流类（流程图、示意图和地图）。针对不同的类别我们又不同的写法，但无论怎样都是遵循着游戏规则来的，即官方的四大评分标准：TA（Task Achievement）(任务完成) C&C（Coherence and Cohesion）(连贯与衔接) LR（Lexical Resource）(词汇资源) GR&A（Grammatical Range and Accuracy）(语法范围与精确)。听起来很抽象是不是？我们换成 新航道 给你的捷径就是：三个六选一（选词汇，选句型和选连接）加上一个分段技巧（按内部逻辑关系分段、找最少属性分段和找对比和类比分段）的妙用就可以解决通杀大部分小作文了！再配合着五步解题法，那恭喜你，小作文方面可以独步江湖了！五步解题法，即：看、分、解、定、写。拿到图表以后先看图例和任务要求，再有一个清晰的分段，雅思考官非常注重文章的逻辑性，所以你要有脉络清楚的分段，这是得 高分 的先决条件。然后解构分段后的内容，确定该写和不该写的部分，一篇好的高分作文是非常精炼的，你抠不出来任何多余的部分。其次是定词汇句型和连接，词汇决定句型，再用不同的连接手段将其糅合成多样化的句型搭配。这一切在3分钟内完成，最后剩下15分钟写出字迹工整的一篇180字左右的小作文，并给后面的大作文留出足够的时间和空间。看到此，你是否觉得小作文就是用现成的句型词汇加连接的排列组合了呢？对，雅思官方没有说小作文不能用套用句，它本来就是客观性的描写，所以用上3个六选一何尝不可呢？那么大家是否开始觉得想要试着写写了呢？且看第二阶段。

第二个2.5小时：巩固

曲线图是所有小作文里面最简单和基础的类别，写好了曲线图基本也就掌握了小作文的要领。曲线图又分为一根曲线，两根曲线，三个曲线和四根曲线的模式，其中一根曲线不会考到，两根曲线若干年前考过，三根曲线和四根曲线是目前最容易考的，但无论怎样，曲线图的写法都脱离不了总体趋势描写、起始点、末尾点、最低点、最高点、交叉点和落差。做到这几步，TA部分的分数也就不会低了。剑7Test2的那道题相当具有代表性，请在不看范文的情况下用上面所讲的五部解题法并配合三个六选一的技巧写出第一篇属于自己的小作文。饼状图，顾名思义就是像饼一样的图形中给你不同的属性所占的不同部分，写此文章最关键就是不能写成流水账，任务要求我们要Make comparisons，那么我们就可以从这里入手用同等属性在不同饼里面的上升下降保持不变来定位分段加比较，请注意在选词上面要和曲线图区分开来。同样在剑7Test4里为我们提供了一篇非常好的四个饼的真题，此乃练习之绝佳材料。柱状图完全就是曲线图的变体，横坐标上若是时间或者数字的话我们直接将每根柱子顶端连接后按曲线图的写法写就行了，否则按饼状图的写法写即可。表格图相对来说写法较为综合，怎样在给出的那么多信息中找出最有代表性的写是关键，从横纵轴上入手，发现变量最为丰富的用曲线图和饼状图的混合词汇句型带出对比和描述即可，剩下的非关键信息点不写也罢。写完剑6Test2你会发现你收获很多的！

篇三：雅思小作文范文

IELTS套句式写作大全

第一部分：TASK1图表写作套句精选

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...

该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that...

该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...

该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)...

该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts (that)....

该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...

这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)...

数据（字）表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how...

该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9.the data/statistics show (that)...

该数据（字）可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...

这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table...

如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures...

根据这些表（数字）...

13.as is shown in the table...

如表格所示...

14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in...

从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...

从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到...

16.this is a graph which illustrates...

这个图表向我们展示了...

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...

该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...

该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing...

这是个柱型图，描述了...

20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of...

如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21.over the period from...to...the...remained level.

在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22.in the year between...and...

在...年到...期间...

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...

1995年至1998三年里...

24.from then on/from this time onwards...

从那时起...

25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).

...月(年)至...月（年)...的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to...

数字急剧上升至...

27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and...

...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year)

...的数目在...月（年）达到顶点，为...

29.the percentage remained steady at...

比率维持在...

30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of...

...的比例比...的比例略高（低）。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and...

...与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...

该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily.

...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%].

...的情况（局势）到达顶（高）点，为...百分点。

35.the figures/situation bottomed out in...

数字（情况）在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.

数字（情况）达到底部（低谷）。

37.a is ...times as much/many as b.

a是b的...倍。

38.a increased by...

a增长了...

39.a increased to...

a增长到...

40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.

比低高（低）

41.there is an upward trend in the number of...

...数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to...

...到...发生急剧上升。

43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down.

从...到...，下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the...,reaching a figure of...

从这年起，...逐渐下降至...

45.be similar to...

与...相似

46.be the same as...

与...相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and...

...与...之间有许多相似（不同）之处

48.a has something in common with b

a于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in...

a与b之间的差别在于...

50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in...

...年...急剧上升。

第二部分：Task1 写作常识

一、图形种类及概述法：

泛指一份数据图表：a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table

饼图：pie chart

直方图或柱形图：bar chart / histogram

趋势曲线图：line chart / curve diagram

表格图：table

流程图或过程图：flow chart / sequence diagram

程序图：processing/procedures diagram

以下是一些较常用的描述用法

The table/chart diagram/graph shows (that)

According to the table/chart diagram/graph

As (is) shown in the table/chart diagram/graph

As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,

figures/statistics shows (that)...

It can be seen from the figures/statistics

We can see from the figures/statistics

It is clear from the figures/statistics

It is apparent from the figures/statistics

table/chart/diagram/graph figures (that) ...

table/chart/diagram/graph shows/describes/illustrates how

......

阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的，因此文章必须逻辑清晰，如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data chart，这篇task1无疑会达到8分的水平。开篇的第一句话可以是一句高度概

括性的introduction（当然开门见山直接描述也是一种写法）；这样做不仅使文章更趋于完美，而且可以达到凑字数的目的（但不要照抄题目，除非时间相当紧迫）。接下来另起一段开始进行描述（根据实际情况1-2段），这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定于从句，从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。最后也可再另起一段进行简短的综述（并非必须）。上述的任何一个步骤都要遵循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则，任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不仅不会加分，而且还会成为扣分的因素。

二、data的具体表达法

data在某一个时间段固定不变：fixed in time

在一系列的时间段中转变：changes over time

持续变化的data在不同情况下:

增加：increase / raise / rise / go up ...

减少：decrease / grow down / drop / fall ...

波动：fluctuate / rebound / undulate / wave ...

稳定：remain stable / stabilize / level off ...

最常用的两种表达法：

动词 + 副词形式（Verb+Adverb form）

形容词 + 名词形式（Adjective+Noun form）

1. Verb+Adverb form

The number of XXX

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuate...

+insignificantly/significantly/slightly/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/steadily/gradually/slowly...

+from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

2. Adjective+Noun form

There was a (very) sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight +increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuation （注意：上述很多词不可用于修饰fluctuation）

+in the number of XXX from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

描述稳定的data：

The number of XXX remained steady/stable from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

The number of XXX stayed the same from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

There was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of XXX from from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

描述不同状态的data

Noun form:

steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp drop

Verbal form:

(to) bottom out / (to) reach the bottom / (to) increase gradually / (to) reach a plateau / (to) remain steady

描述the highest point以及the lowest point

高点极值：

The monthly profit / The figures / The situation ...

+peaked in (?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyuluzuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">路?年) <准确时间点用at XXX> at XXX% / XXX(极点data)

或者reached a peak / a high point at XXX% / XXX(极点data)

低点极值：

XXX bottomed out / reached

+rock / the bottom / a low point

或者hit a trough

此外，在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences，最常用的固定搭配如下： 并列： as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what's more, apart from ...

举例： for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially

事实： as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as ...

雷同/近似：similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally ...

转折： however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, in stead (of), in spite of, despite of ...

原因与结果

1. cause-suggestion (几乎不常用)

since / now that ...; I hope that...

because of/on account of/owing to/thanks to + (doing) sth, I hope that...

2. cause-effect (较常用)

XXX lead to / bring about / result in/ account for ...

(一个句子), therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently / (and) so ...

3. effect-cause (较常用)

XXX be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of ...

(一个句子), because ...

it is adj. that ...

it is unimaginable that ...

it is undeniable that ...

it is interesting to discover that ...

三、其它相关常用词（组）