encouragement英语作文

篇一：会考英语作文万能句

英语写作：

书信：

开头

How time flies!

I’m very glad to hear from you.

I’m very happy/pleased to receive your letter.

中间

I’m writing in response to your letter.

I’m writing to tell you that…

I’m very glad to hear/learn that…

*I’m so pleased to hear from you and now I’m writing to tell you something 结尾

I miss you very much and hope to meet you again.

I’m looking forward to your letter/reply.

Please write back soon.

议论文：

开头

I’d like to tell you the results of our discussion/survey in the class meeting. Nowadays, it is well known that… 中间

Some people are in favor of the idea. However, others don’t agree with it. On one hand,…on the other hand,…

结尾

In my opinion,…/in my view,…/As far as I am concerned,…

In conclusion,…/In a word,…/In a nutshell,…/In short,…

*Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw the conclusion that…

看图&图表：

开头

According to the pictures/form(表格), we can find that…

According to a recent survey, A recent statistics(数据) shows that…

中间和结尾参照议论文。

万能句：(不可变的)

1. Failure is the mother of success.

失败是成功之母。

2. Knowledge is power.

知识就是力量。

3. No pains, no gains.

没有付出就没有收获。

4. Every coin has two sides.

每个硬币都有两面。(比喻事物的两面性)

(可变的) 这些年来我们学校发生了巨大的变化。 自信是走向成功的第一步。 健康就是幸福。 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 你愈努力，你愈进步。 通过做运动，我们能够保持健康。 我们都知道知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 读书对心灵有益。 工作过度对健康有害。 我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。 因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。 That‘s the reason why I don't like it.

夏天很热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 只有用这种方法我们才能在学英语方面取得巨大进步。 过渡词:

首先：firstly, first of all, at first

其次：secondly, then, on the other hand

此外：what’s more, besides, moreover, in addition

最后：finally, at last, last but not least

篇二：英语作文例文点评88篇

借鉴和模仿是提高写作的基石。先借来再转为自用是巧学者之法。内容可适用于读写任务正文部分。

--Miss.Q

英语作文例文点评88篇 （收集于网络）

【要求】

英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言“No Pains, No Gains” （不劳则不获），并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。

人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。

“不劳则不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。

学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。

【范文】

No Pains, No Gains

People attempting a task may be discouraged in front of difficulties. They start with a great interest and passion. When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought, their interest diminishes and their passion wanes. At that time, they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor. The old saying “No pains, no gains” comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons. No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly. No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts.

We students shoulder the task of learning knowledge that calls for exertion. To improve our grades is what every student wants. We may envy those who have achieved excellence, and wonder what makes them succeed. In fact, their secret of success is no secret. It depends largely on their efforts. Good grades only belong to hardworking students.

Many thanks for the favor you did for me!

【评语】

该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。“interest diminishes and their passion wanes” 中词语搭配讲究，“reaping a good harvest without much labor” 用另一个习惯表达法点出了“No Pains, No Gains”的含义，同时又避免了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。

【要求】

根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。

没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。

事业成功须非凡的干劲。

有些人害怕困难，则一事无成。

【范文】

Where there is a Will, There is a Way

No man can win success without strong will. We hear some men have got good results, but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success.

Success requires an unusual amount of energy to overcome difficulties. So it is important for us to have great resolution.

Some men tend to be afraid of difficulties. If they meet with some difficulties, they will give in. So they get nothing eventually.

So let's make up our minds, stick to it and surely win success in our career.

Focus on the most important things to do to help your organization be successful. Don't focus on the easiest things.

【评语】

对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。

【要求】

很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。

【范文】

The way to success

Everyone tries to achieve success in his/her career. But some finally attain their aims while others fail. Why? Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.

Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Life is short and we have too much to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.

I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts.

Don't be afraid of life. Believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact.

【评语】

这是一篇议论文，作者首先提出问题，再提出自己观点：意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋，是成功的三大要素。作者在结尾，巧妙地运用了谚语“where there is a will there is a way”，使文章增色不少。

【要求】

坚强的意志(Man's Strong Will)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。

Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.

There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.

It is not easy to cultivate a strong will.

【范文】

Man's Strong Will

Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls. It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encouragement when we are frustrated. With this meritorious quality, no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacles can stand in our way. As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.

All pain helps to make us rise, how-ever much we may hate it at the time.

There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. During the Long March, the Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced. They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees. It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship. Helen Keller, a strong willed American blind woman, mastered the English language and became a well-known educator. Such instances abound, and suffice it just to enumerate the two.

Develop a high tolerance for ambiguity----you'll be more satisfied.

It is not easy to cultivate a strong will. First of all, we must set up a firm faith in our cause, namely, the cause

of communism, and be ready to devote our lives to it. Secondly, we must learn from strong-willed persons, especially, from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood. Finally, we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character.

【评语】

本文为议论文。首段的“neither?nor?”“It is strong will that?”，和“no enemy?no obstacles?”的运用，加强了文章的语气，突出了坚强意志的重要价值。段末的格言起到了画龙点睛的作用。第二段用了红军二万五千里长征和海伦?凯勒这两个例子，有力地证明了坚强的意志能使人获得成功这一主题。末段谈如何培养坚强的意志，层次清晰，观点正确，具有说服力。

【要求】

以“Don't Stop Halfway”为题写一篇议论文。

论证具体 结构完整 字数100—150

【范文】

Don't Stop Halfway

When a man is doing some work, he desires some benefit from it. In order to get this benefit, the must do the task to the end and completely finish it.

To finish a task, whether hard or not requires patience and firmness. Therefore when you have some work to do, you must do it faithfully, irrespective of the difficulty. Difficulties and obstacles are unavoidable; if you turn your back on meeting them, you will succeed in nothing, but if you can overcome them, you will accomplish something.

To stop halfway is very bad. Suppose that a precious stone is at a great distance from you and you want to obtain it; you must reach for it; you must not stop halfway. If you stop halfway, you will not only get nothing, but also lose something, because your time and strength will be wasted.

It is a good thing for one to do one thing at a time, and never stop halfway.

Cultivate a reputation for being reliable and hardworking, even if it means bucking peer pressure.

【评语】

作者对不要半途而废的论证具体而有说服力，告诉我们半途而废不仅无法达到目标而且浪费时间、精力。段落安排逐层深入，循循善诱。全文整体结构完整、自然。

【要求】

题目：Failure（失败）是一个人经常遇到的。失败不是好事，因为它使人的努力(efforts)付之东流。但是，失败也是好事，它可以教育我们使我们学到更多的东西。试写一短文就此谈谈你对失败的看法。

【范文】

Failure

Nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing. The efforts we have made seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed. Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one.

But failure can also benefit us. It can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced. Also, we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves. So when we start again, we can succeed more easily.

Therefore, failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us. When we fail, we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience. Then, we may succeed in the future.

Life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats----claim them all as victories!

【评语】

本文最大的优点是正反对照，条理清楚。高考作文时间很短，所以谋篇布局显得十分重要。本文脉络清楚，浅显易懂，应该说在考场中是容易取胜的。此外，本篇行文简练，显得干净利落。

要求】

每个人的生活中都有过失败的经历，失败对于我们来说，到底意味着什么？请你按如下提纲写一篇文章，谈谈你对失败的理解。

失败是生活中的常事。

人们对失败的态度各不相同。

就我而言，我认为失败?

【范文】

Is Failure a Bad Thing

Failure is quite a common thing in our life. As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties. Of course we should try our best to get over them, but in many cases, it is not so easy, or even impossible. Then how should we face failure?

Different people take different attitudes towards failure. When faced with failure, some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence. They refuse to make any further efforts. These people will probably never amount to anything in life. Some people just don't fear failure. They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success. As a result, not only can failure stop them, but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder. Such people are sure to succeed someday.

As for me, I don't think failure is a bad thing. Failure can never discourage me but only eich my experience and steel my will. With this positive attitude in mind, I will try hard in anything I'm determined to accomplish and attain success in the end.

【评语】

本文按题目所给纲要分为三段。首段简要地论述了失败是每个人都会遇到的，末句用了一句设问，起到了承上启下的作用。第二段谈到了人们对失败的两种典型态度，先写错误观点进行铺垫，而后再写正确观点。这种安排自然突出了作者所赞同的态度，同时为引出第三段做好的了准备。末段作者则阐明了自己的观点。全文层次清楚，段落间衔接紧密而自然，主题突出，语言流畅，用词准确。

【要求】

失败，是人人都不愿体验的结果。有人说失败使人消沉，有人说失败是成功之母。你对失败的态度怎样？写一篇短文。

字数150—200字，题目自拟。

【范文】

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common thing in our daily lives. As students, We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations. When we play game, we sometimes can't avoid losing to others. And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work. All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences.

However, there are different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart in failure, they think the world has come to an end. Some people don't take failure seriously and just ignore it, while some others learn much from it.

In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but what we think of failure and do after failure. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up, and in the mean time learn something from our failure, We'll certainly be successful in the end. So I'm never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad thing, but the mother of success.

看问题一定要看到正反两面，体现在文中，就往往是鲜明的对比。

【评语】

表达思想清楚，内容比较充实，文字流畅，句子结构多样。第一段、第二段主题句简练而贴切，句间衔接比较自然，用词造句有不少闪光点，如：the world has come to an end 等。

要求】

请以下面三句话分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇题为“诚实”的文章。

It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.

One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience.

Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation.

【范文】

honesty

We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty. So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.

It is usu

One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience. If a person tells lies, his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster. He will always live in fright.

Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation. All people consider what you've said true and trust you just because you are an honest man. Therefore, you can say what you like and do what you like without fear. You will feel very happy. Likewise, just because of your honesty, people respect you and love you. Gradually, you will gain a good reputation. To be honest will ensure you a happy life.

【评语】

该文内容切题，详略安排得当，重点放在诚实的益处，即第二段和第四段上。这两段的段末均有一句总结句与段首的主题句相呼应，使段落结构完整，同时强化了主题。文章语言略显单调，但比较顺畅，表达也较清楚。

【要求】

班会课上要求同学们为大家用英文讲述一个小哲理，要求条理清晰，有自己的见解。你的发言稿内容如下：

真诚是一种重要的思想方法。

应该弄清楚什么是真诚。

为什么有时人们难以做到真诚。

真诚，是一种人生态度。

【范文】

On the Truth

Truth is an attitude of the mind. It is important, if one does not wish to inconvenience and bore his or her friends. It means telling no lies and never backing out of one's word.

But it is more important to know what is the truth, and not to slide into those untruthful habits of thought which are so pleasant and so easy.

There is a word named “the victory habit of mind”. People who have this mind are unduly preoccupied by what was socially and morally convenient. One should have the courage to think uncomfortably, since it is only by rejecting the convenience that one can come to think the truth.

Truth, is an attitude of the life.

直线式思维，层层推进是英文的习惯。避免Chinglish不仅仅要防止出错，还要培养语感和思路。

【评语】

这篇短文首尾照应，用同一句式，只换了一个单词：“mind”、“life”，却把意思推进了一层，很符合英

篇三：英语作文

目前C楼剩2个位置

玲子 13:26:23

B楼剩7个位置

luo 13:26:59

不能包括请假的哦

玲子 13:27:51

A楼剩三个女生位置有人说想学英语,现教如下:一周七天英语怎么说

星期一 【 忙day】； 星期二 【求死day】； 星期三 【未死day】； 星期四 【受死day】； 星期五【福来day】； 星期六 【洒脱day】； 星期天【伤day】高考英语作文预测：疯狂押题第四篇

书信

在紧张的高三备考阶段,英语老师为了提高复习效率,广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华,请根据以下提示,给英语老师写封信,表达你们的需求和建议。

●适当放慢进度,留出思考时间 ●反复训练重要、易错知识点

●指导方法 ●减少作业量以保证质量 ●给予更多鼓励

注意:1.根据以上内容写一篇短文,不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points that also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we

forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

高考英语作文预测：疯狂押题第五篇

近来，越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大寝室。请根据下面提示，一分为二地用英语写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与坏处，并表明自己的观点。

1. 学习时间; 2. 安全; 3. 自由性; 4. 与同学交往; 5. 学习效果。

注意：可从其他角度阐述，但两方面的理由都至少要有两条;词数100左右。

Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and

cooperation between classmates. And of course it is safer. A dorm is more like a society, wich enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone, it’s better for study as you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others. As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside the school.

Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm

高考英语作文预测：疯狂押题第六篇

请根据下列中文提示，用英语向来访的贵宾介绍你校新建的网络学校。

(1.)使教和学更方便，更有趣，能在课堂上获取更多的信息，学到更多知识。

(2.)向师生开放，可向世界各地发送电子邮件，获取信息，等等。

(3.)只要家中有电脑，任何人都可以学习本校课程。

(4.)有助于改善学校的管理，满足现代化教育的需要。

(5.)作为重点学校(key school)，对于其他的新建中学起示范和帮助作用。

注意：

1.短文须包含上面提示，可以适当增减内容使文章连贯。

2.词数：120左右。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to our school. Now I would like to introduce our net-school.

Our net-school is very helpful in many ways. First, it makes both teaching and learning easier and more interesting. Students can get more knowledge in class. Whoever has a computer can

have the lesson we give at home. Second, we can make good use of the Internet, sending e-mails, searching for any information we need, etc. Third, the net also helps improve our school

management and meet the needs of modern education. Fourth, as a key school in our city, it sets a good example to the newly-built schools and may be of some help to them.

That’s all. Thank you.

高考英语作文预测：疯狂押题第七篇

最近，你校试行在课间播放音乐，同学们对此私下议论，看法不一。请你根据表格中所提供的信息，给你的班主任Mr. Brown 写封信，客观地介绍大家的看法。

大多数同学赞同，部分同学反对。

注意：词数100-120左右

赞同者: 反对者:

原因

播放音乐能活跃气氛。 课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果。

能使大脑得到放松，减轻学习的疲劳。 课间需要的是安静，而不是嘈杂的声音。能给大家带来欢乐和美的享受。 有时上课后还沉浸在课间听的音乐中。

Most of us agree that music should be played. As we know, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Besides, music provides us with relaxation after hard study, which reduces the tiredness. Listening to music also makes us feel happy.

On the other hand, some students have the opposite view. They don't think they can get the expected results by listening to music, as the break between classes is short. What's needed during the break is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. Besides, in class some students are still lost in the music they have just heard.

高考英语作文预测：疯狂押题第八篇

Respecting Our Parents

现在，很多学生迫于升学就业的压力，把自己的烦恼都宣泄在父母身上，对父母不是很尊敬，甚至和父母争吵动手。针对这种现象，写信给某报编辑，请提出一些具体的建议，让同学们树立尊敬长辈的意识，发扬中华民族的传统美德。

Dear editor,

Nowadays, there exists an increasingly severe phenomenon that teenagers don’t show respect to their parents. As we can read in newspaper or watch in TV, some teenagers quarrel with parents, some talk back and some even resort to violence. As to this problem, I’d like to offer several proposals as follows.

Initially(First), we should realize that it’s our parents who give us lives. Without parents, we can not live in this world. Therefore, the importance of respecting our parents can not be too overemphasized. What’s more, it goes without saying that we have to remember the birth day of our parents, when we can express our gratitude to them. None the less(Meanwhile), respecting our parents should be done from every detail. Just as a proverb goes, “Piety is above all.” (百善孝为先)