话题作文实惠
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篇一:话题作文实惠
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黄金词汇However, nevertheless, in spite of,despite,Meanwhile, On the contrary, besides. what’s more, in addition,
moreover. Furthermore , to sum up, in conclusion, on the whole,all in all ,in a word, in short, At the beginning, afterwards, Before long, With time going by, Therefore, Consequently, Indeed, Unfortunately, What’s worse, Gradually, Eventually, As a consequence. from then on , in the meantime, at the same time, at present.
attach much importance to,be beneficial to, Despite the fact, shaped my life, be influential to, throughout one’s life, in deep despair, make full use of, treasure every moment, equipped/faced with, spare no effort to do.
As far as I'm concerned, When it comes to, It’s widely acknowledged that, Just as the saying goes, be of great significance. as a vital factor of life, be convinced that, there was a time when, Take … for example. Keep/bear this in mind.
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When it comes to this, it always reminds me of my experience.
What made matters worse was the fact that …….
Things were different from what I had expected.
It can give the courage to fight difficulties and motivate someone to move on.
Not only does reading good books broaden our horizons but also eiches our minds.
Not until I witnessed my uncle’s real life did I realize that health is of more importance.
Rich as he was, he could do nothing but lie in the hospital bed.
Only then did I start to appreciate the significance of forming a good habit.
Never will I forget the days when ……
So heavy was the fall that my right knee was black and blue.
Whether we are rich or not, we cannot ignore the importance of health.
Whatever/No matter what difficult situation I deal with, I always keep in mind that perseverance will carry us though.
I think however small our volunteer work might be, it counts.
I was on the point of losing my heart when my friends appeared.
As a teenager, I always manage to spare some time from my studies to do some volunteer work, which has benefited me a lot.
This world is filled with unselfish people, because of whom our world has become a lovely and beautiful place to stay.
It was with his help that I got out of the trouble, for which I have been grateful to him.
Seeing the bright smile on their face, we felt happy for what we did, though we were exhausted. Influenced by my teacher, I often help people in need.
Admitted into high school, I felt so lonely in the new environment, as a result of which I often missed my old classmates.
It was not long before I did succeed in creating my new image.
黄金开头Life is like a road, which is full of twists and turns. Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which sharing is the most significant for me.
Faced with the adversities, I tended to be at a loss, lacking motivation to go on.
……is what it takes to succeed.
Encouragements can serve as a ray of hope during difficult times.
As the saying goes, no one is an island. Only when we show concern to others and offer help to
people can we unite together and make a difference.
Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.
As middle school students, not only should we acquire knowledge but also we should have good qualities.
There is no denying that difficulties arise in the lives of us all.However, what really counts is how we deal with the difficulties to succeed.
黄金结尾From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future.
What I’ve learned from the experience is that ……
What an important part humor plays in our daily life!
What is of vital importance is that ……
Just as a saying goes, the fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose.
Indeed, a good habit is to me what water is to fish.
This experience has taught me that it’s so natural that anyone may feel lonely. To get this situation changed and be a popular student, we ought to make every effort to improve ourselves and show our concern for others.
If he had been the kind of person to give up without trying, he would have no chance of survival. It was hope and perseverance that made his survival possible.
It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go.
It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed or achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence。One of the most typical examples is that ……No one can deny the fact that persistence is the key point in accomplishing one' s task.Strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.
Being grateful to people who helped and supported us is what we are supposed to keep in mind forever.
One fact can’t be ignored that physical punishment in most cases will bring the kids either too much pressure or injuries.
It is sharing with others rather than keeping my worries to myself that has relieved me of trouble and made my studies more efficient.
It is not …but…that counts.
So don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.
From then on, I firmly believe that whatever difficulty we met with, we should take great courage to overcome them.
黄金事例一I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in the oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to say regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could avoid them in the future. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black. We just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes.
二Entering the high school, I took delight in having fast food and ate too much. Consequently, I was so heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. What made matters worse was the fact that my classmates played jokes on me at times. From then on, I made up my mind to avoid snacks and meanwhile to take up jogging to lose weight. Owing to the timely changes, it was not long before I did succeed in creating my new image. Only then did I start to appreciate the significance of forming a good habit.
三I still remember it was six years ago when I began to learn English, I found I had great trouble pronouncing the words correctly. Hard as I tried, I failed again and again, thus making me frustrated and losing confidence in myself. I was about to give up when my classmate David came to my help. He taught me how to pronounce correctly and advised me to imitate the tape. If possible, he would force me to communicate with him in English, correcting my mistakes. It was with his help that I got out of the trouble, for which I have been grateful to him. Now we have become close friends.
四When I first entered high school, I found everything was changed. Difficult lessons and excellent classmates threw me into a position where I had to struggle hard. Despite my hard work, the results would be discouraging. Gradually, life was beginning to stress me out. Challenging as it was, I didn’t give up, because every time I wanted to, the Old Man and the Sea would remind me that only with perseverance can I catch my big fish. I decided that I stick it out, following my teachers’ advice. Finally, I made it.
五Three years ago, when I began my senior high school study, I found it extremely difficult to learn English well because there were so many new words and grammar rules to keep in mind. Hard as I might try, I still did poorly in the English exams. It was the hardest time in my life and I nearly lost heart and decided to give up when my mother found my problem. She encouraged me that it took a strong person to deal with tough times and if I chose to keep on and I would be a strong person and on the way to success. In order to prove myself, I worked even harder than ever. Gradually I began to catch up with the other students in my class. At the end of term I got the highest mark in English.
六When I was admitted into high school, I felt so lonely as I didn’t know anyone in the new environment, as a result of which I often missed my old classmates and friends. Feeling left out in a crowd of classmates, I was pressed and disappointed. In this case, I turned my attention to my studies. Meanwhile, I learned to communicate actively with people around me, respecting them and giving them help when possible. I also spent time to develop my own interests, thus finding many friends sharing the same interests. Gradually, I became happy, cheerful and found the pleasure in my studies.
七When I grew up, I have met countless people who are always unselfish to me. In the middle of last term, just as I was busy with my lessons, I suddenly fell ill and had to stay away from school for a couple of weeks. Seeing this, our monitor Li Hua, together with some other classmates, offered to help me with my lessons. It was with their unselfish help that I managed to catch up in my lessons. Looking back on those days, I’m impressed by their help and feel gratitude. They have taught me the importance of being unselfish and offering help to those in need.
八In fact, I didn’t realize its significance until I failed the mid-term exam last October, during which time I studied less hard. At first, I was addicted to reading some science fictions in and outside class and didn’t do any homework. As a result, I was less active in class and felt less
depressed. Then my teacher and classmates talked about my studies with me and I told them about my worries. Thus my anxiety was beginning to be reduced with their help and I regained confidence.
九At the beginning of the new term, I ran into trouble. Some of my classmates were unfriendly to me. They laughed at my accent and joked about my clothes. Feeling unhappy and lonely, I burst out crying one day. When my English teacher knew about my bad situation, he gave me timely help and encouragement. With my teacher’s help, I’ve become happier and made great progress. Now I am getting on well with my classmates.
十 Devoted to his business, my uncle, a successful businessman, workded from morning till night every day, with no spare time to relax himself. He often said: “I must earn much money so that I can get whatever I want.” As a consequence, he was seriously ill. Rich as he was, he could do nothing but lie in the hospital bed.
黄金模板一Life is like a road, which is full of twists and turns. Years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which sharing is the most significant for me. As the saying goes, no one is an island. Only when we show concern to others and offer help to people can we unite together and make a difference.
When I first entered high school, I found everything was changed. Difficult lessons and excellent classmates threw me into a position where I had to struggle hard. Despite my hard work, the results would be discouraging. Gradually, life was beginning to stress me out. Challenging as it was, I didn’t give up, because every time I wanted to, the Old Man and the Sea would remind me that only with perseverance can I catch my big fish. I decided that I stick it out, following my teachers’ advice. Finally, I made it.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future. It is the" crack "that is reminding me all the time that I have a long way to go.
二There is no denying that difficulties arise in the lives of us all. But what really counts is how we deal with the difficulties to succeed.……is what it takes to succeed.
In fact, I didn’t realize its significance until I failed the mid-term exam last October, during which time I studied less hard. At first, I was addicted to reading some science fictions in and outside class and didn’t do any homework. As a result, I was less active in class and felt less depressed. Then my teacher and classmates talked about my studies with me and I told them about my worries. Thus my anxiety was beginning to be reduced with their help and I regained confidence.
Being grateful to people who helped and supported us is what we are supposed to keep in mind forever. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.
篇四:怎样写好话题作文
怎样写好话题作文
话题作文是近年常见的作文题型,它避开了命题作文的单一性和生硬性,旨在考查学生的多项思维能力和语言运用能力。如何写出“出彩”的好话题作文,就成了日常教学中需要研究的课题。虽然文无定法,但作文基本功的养成也是需要逐步积累的。
1.把握好提示语这条纽带
话题作文一般由材料、引导提示语、话题和要求四个方面构成。其中引导提示语的作用最为重要,它是对作文材料的阐释和对话题的引导,是材料与话题的纽带。话题作文中的提示语,有开启思维、抛砖引玉的作用。写好话题作文必须充分利用作文中的提示性语言,来获得写作灵感,瞬间理清写作思路。
对于引导提示语,应该仔细研读,并以此为切入点,顺着这些思路开启思维,既要让思维的风筝自由驰骋,又不可漫无边际,无法收回,以致离题万里。以2012浙江高考作文题“坐在路边鼓掌的人”为例,提示语就很明显:女儿说不想成为英雄,想成为坐在路边鼓掌的人。网友评论说路边奔跑者与鼓掌者都应该赞扬。我们如果能抓住关键的词语“英雄”和“鼓掌者”,并以此展开联想,肯定非常切题。
2.仔细分析材料,找准合适的文体
对于话题作文的材料,要仔细阅读,从中找出有用的信息。一方面,要选择合适的文体,比如有的话题作文适合写记叙文或散文,而有的宜于发表议论。选对文体很重要,虽然目前作文淡化了文体
要求,但是文体一定要鲜明,不能似是而非,让人无法琢磨,甚至出现四不像的文体。选对文体后,可以综合使用记叙、抒情、议论等多种方法,使作文有深度、有内涵。另一方面,要使自己的作文独树一帜,必须从大处着眼,小处落笔。“大”指的是作文的思路要开阔,“小”指的是要联系生活与社会实际。
3.打破思维定势,同一话题多角度选材
“冰冻三尺非一日之寒”,在日常的写作中要进行思维训练,开启多项思维的大门。在话题作文中要打破思维的定势,改变单一的思维方式,运用联想、想象、猜想、推想等拓宽思路,从问题的各个角度、各个方面、各个层次进行或逆向、或纵向、或横向的灵活而敏捷的思考,从而获得众多的方案或假设。思维发散得好,可供选择的东西就多,所选取的结果就新颖而富有创造性,所写的作文也就会在各个方面给人以耳目一新的感觉。
如作文《梯子不用时请横着放》,材料说的是有关安全的话题,但有的考生独辟蹊径,避开思维常态,展开联想,以一个丈夫爬梯隔墙看美女为引子,恰如其分地引出作文题目,之后再针砭社会利弊,巧妙地提醒当下的男女都要遵从道德的准则,适度追求美。因而这篇文章当之无愧地获得满分。
4.拟好鲜亮的题目
话题作文的题目一般都是自拟,作文题目中必须包含所给的话题,而且还不能直接以所给话题作为作文题目。但是如何拟好作文题目值得注意。比如以“第一”为话题的作文,如果写成第一次做饭、
第一次爬山等,就显得立意不高,可以选取其象征意义,比如“走好人生的第一步”,“照亮生命的第一缕阳光”等。醒目的标题可以为作文点亮色彩,吸引读者眼球,获得第一好印象。
5.重视作文的立意
立意是一篇文章的根本,它直接关系到文章的选材、布局以及文章的深度。所以,也有人说:“千古文章意为高。”可见一篇文章立意的重要性。立意高则境界远,作文的立意是写作的前提。文似看山不喜平,立意新颖就为作文提高了一个层次。而且作文立意要与生活接轨,才会有社会意义和现实感。
如2012年的高考作文,船主与漆工的故事,考场满分作文就是那些联系了社会现实的、有思想深度的文章。还有关于“水”的作文,如果只写珍惜水资源可能会落入俗套,毫无新意,但是给水赋予“大度”,以“水之大度”来告诫男女都要大度,作文的立意显然就略高一筹了。文章的立意应该正确、鲜明、深刻、新颖、集中。那些高考零分作文就是立意错误的典型。
6.要有个性化的语言表达
语言表达是作文考查的一项重要指标,除了平常要求的文从字顺以外,个性化的语言会使文章彰显文采。如2012年高考满分作文,《卑渺角落里的慷慨》中的语句:“我只愿放下步子,在一方静好无常的土地上,带着金砂般渺小而闪光的品质,为世界的前行慷慨解囊。风无偿助力,鹰得以搏击长空;土慷慨汇实,花得以纷繁绝艳;星默然成伍,银河得以广邈非常??”这段文字具有语句新鲜、
词语别致、意蕴深厚的特点。要实现语言的个性化,可以借助各类修辞、引用化用名言名句等来完成。
当然写好话题作文不是一蹴而就的事情,更没有捷径可走。我们只有踏踏实实地进行全面认真的写作实践练习,在学习之余注重生活素材的积累,积极关注生活,留意身边的大小事,养成会观察、能领悟的习惯,并且每天写日记,平时养成良好的课外阅读习惯,多练笔、多尝试,到了考场才会文思如泉涌,写出好作文。 (作者单位:西藏自治区贡嘎县实验中学)
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