帮我检查英语作文【1】 TomorrowTomorrow,i will get up at 7:00.Then i will go to school.In the moring,i will have four lessons,and three lessons in the afternoon.After school,i will do my homework.At7:00,i will have dinner with my family.Then

帮我检查英语作文【1】 TomorrowTomorrow,i will get up at 7:00.Then i will go to school.In the moring,i will have four lessons,and three lessons in the afternoon.After school,i will do my homework.At7:00,i will have dinner with my family.Then
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【1】 Tomorrow
Tomorrow,i will get up at 7:00.Then i will go to school.In the moring,i will have four lessons,and three lessons in the afternoon.After school,i will do my homework.At7:00,i will have dinner with my family.Then i will watch the TV.At 9:00,i will have a bath.I will go to bed at 10:00.
I think tomorrow will be happy.
【2】 My favourite animal
My favourite animal is cat.They can catch the mouses.So the mouses is afraid the cat.They are very cute.I like cat very much.
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帮我检查英语作文【1】 TomorrowTomorrow,i will get up at 7:00.Then i will go to school.In the moring,i will have four lessons,and three lessons in the afternoon.After school,i will do my homework.At7:00,i will have dinner with my family.Then
第一个最后一句话应换为“tommorow will be a happy day"
第二个”so the mouses are afraid of the cat"
"i like cats very much"

Tomorrow
I will get up at 7:00 tomorrow.Then I will go to school.At school ,I will have four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon.After school,i will do my homework.At7:00,I...

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Tomorrow
I will get up at 7:00 tomorrow.Then I will go to school.At school ,I will have four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon.After school,i will do my homework.At7:00,I will have dinner with other families.Then i will watch TV.At 9:00,i will have a bath.I will go to bed at 10:00.
I think i will be happy tomorrow.

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So the mouses are afraid of the cats.
前后单复数要一致，且afraid得加of。
其他语法没有什么问题，顶多第一批的i will太多了感觉有些生硬而已。

1. 所有的i要大写
2. watch the TV改成 wacth TV
3. have a bath改为take a bath
4. the mouses改为 the mice

1.I will get up at 7:00 tomorrow moring that I want to go to school early.What's more,we have four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon.Besides,I should finish my homework before ...

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1.I will get up at 7:00 tomorrow moring that I want to go to school early.What's more,we have four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon.Besides,I should finish my homework before having dinner with my familly at 19:00.Then,I will watch the TV and have a bath at 21:00.Finally,I will go to bed at 22:00.I think
tomorrow will be better.

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