If you are tired,you can listen to music . Don't spend all your free time with computer or TV .这两句话对吗

If you are tired,you can listen to music . Don't spend all your free time with computer or TV .这两句话对吗
If you are tired,you can listen to music . Don't spend all your free time with computer or TV .
这两句话对吗

If you are tired,you can listen to music . Don't spend all your free time with computer or TV .这两句话对吗
If you are tired,you can listen to music .Don't spend all your free time on computer or TV .把with改成on

第一个对
第二个吧with 改为on

对

yes..