帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错A Forever FriendI have a friend.She is my best friend.One day,I am said,I don't say anything.She sits next to me.She doesn't ask me why I am cry.She tell me a joke and she makes me laugh.I thank her very much

帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错A Forever FriendI have a friend.She is my best friend.One day,I am said,I don't say anything.She sits next to me.She doesn't ask me why I am cry.She tell me a joke and she makes me laugh.I thank her very much
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A Forever Friend
I have a friend.She is my best friend.One day,I am said,I don't say anything.She sits next to me.She doesn't ask me why I am cry.She tell me a joke and she makes me laugh.I thank her very much.Because her,I feel happy.She holds my hand,say"Don't said,I will follow you forever."This is my friend,my forever friened.
If you have got a friend,you feel happy.
If you haven't got a friend,you feel lonely.
If you have a friend,when you are said,she makes you laught.
When you are cry,she shaves your tears.
When you in trouble,she gives you a hand.
If you have got a friend,you must treasure them.
If you haven't got a friend,you must make friends soon.
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帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有错A Forever FriendI have a friend.She is my best friend.One day,I am said,I don't say anything.She sits next to me.She doesn't ask me why I am cry.She tell me a joke and she makes me laugh.I thank her very much
A Forever Friend
I have a friend.She is my best friend.One day,I was sad,I didn't say anything.She sat next to me.She didn't ask me why I was crying.She told me a joke and she made me laugh.I thanked her very much.Because of her,I felt happy.She held my hand,and said"Don't be sad,I will follow you forever."This is my friend,my forever friened.
If you have got a friend,you feel happy.
If you haven't got a friend,you feel lonely.
If you have a friend,when you are sad,she makes you laught.
When you are crying,she shaves your tears.
When you are in trouble,she gives you a hand.
If you have got a friend,you must treasure the friendship.
If you haven't got a friend,you need to make friends soon.