Hello everyone!Today I will tell you a English story:The City Mouse and the Country Mouse Once :there were two mice.They were friends.One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city.After many years the Country mouse saw the City mo

Hello everyone!Today I will tell you a English story:The City Mouse and the Country Mouse Once :there were two mice.They were friends.One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city.After many years the Country mouse saw the City mo
Hello everyone!Today I will tell you a English story:The City Mouse and the Country Mouse Once :
there were two mice.They were friends.One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city.After many years the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said,"Do come and see me at my house in the country." So the City mouse went.The City mouse said,"This food is not good,and your house is not good.Why do you live in a hole in the field?You should come and live in the city.You would live in a nice house made of stone.You would have nice food to eat.You must come and see me at my house in the city."
The Country mouse went to the house of the City mouse.It was a very good house.Nice food was set ready for them to eat.But just as they began to eat they heard a great noise.The City mouse cried," Run!Run!The cat is coming!" They ran away quickly and hid.
After some time they came out.When they came out,the Country mouse said,"I do not like living in the city.I like living in my hole in the field.For it is nicer to be poor and happy,than to be rich and afraid."
this is my English story ,Isn't it very good?
你看这篇文章有没有语法错误,可不可以演讲?

Hello everyone!Today I will tell you a English story:The City Mouse and the Country Mouse Once :there were two mice.They were friends.One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city.After many years the Country mouse saw the City mo
Hi everyone!as you may know,my name is ______
and i'm here to tell you a wonderful story about:The City Mouse and the Country Mouse
once upon a time,there were two mice,and they were good friends.One mouse lived in the country; whereas the other mouse lived in the city.After many years,the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said,"you might want to come and visit my house in the country." So the City mouse went.The City mouse complained," the food here isn't good enough,your house too; and why do you live in a rat-hole under ground?You should definitely come and live in the city,just imagine your self living in a nice house made of stones and bricks; and delicious food on the table.why don't you visit my house and get a sense of what the city's like?"
So,the Country mouse visited the City mouse's house the next day.It was a very wealthy looking house.delicious food was set ready for them to eat.But just as they began to eat,they heard a scary noise.The City mouse cried," Run!Run!The cat is coming!" They ran away quickly and had to hide.
After they were safe,the Country mouse complained too,"I do not like living in the city.I like living in the rat-hole underground.For it is nicer to be poor and happy,than to be rich and scared at the time."
i appreciate for your listening,and hope you enjoyed the story!(:
整体改了一下,我一直在美国学校上学所以应该不会出语法错误:P

there were two mice. They were friends. One mouse lived in the country; the other lived in the city. After many years the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said, "Do you like to come and see my h...

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there were two mice. They were friends. One mouse lived in the country; the other lived in the city. After many years the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said, "Do you like to come and see my house in the country." So the City mouse went. The City mouse said, "This food is not good, and your house is not good. Why do you live in a hole in the field? You should come and live in the city. You would live in a nice house made of stone. You would have nice food to eat. You must come and see my house in the city."
The Country mouse went to the house of the City mouse. It was a very good house. Nice food was ready for them to eat. But just as they began to eat they heard a great noise. The City mouse cried, " Run! Run! The cat is coming!" They ran away quickly and hid.
After some time they came out. When they came out, the Country mouse said, "I do not like living in the city. I like living in my hole in the field. For it is nicer to be poor and happy, than to be rich and afraid."
this is my English story ,Isn't it very good?
你写的也挺不错 有几个不太好的地方 或者错的 我改过来了 呵呵 谢谢采纳

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There were two mice. They were friends. One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city. After many years the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said, "Would you like to come and s...

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There were two mice. They were friends. One mouse lived in the country; the other mouse lived in the city. After many years the Country mouse saw the City mouse; he said, "Would you like to come and see me at my house in the country?" So the City mouse went. The City mouse said, "the food is not good, and your house is also not good. Why do you live in a hole in the field? You should come and live in the city. You would live in a nice house made of stone. You would have nice food to eat. How about coming and seeing me at my house in the city."
The Country mouse went to the house of the City mouse. It was a very good house. Nice food was set ready for them to eat. But just as they began to eat they heard a great noise. The City mouse cried, " Run! Run! The cat is coming!" They ran away quickly and hid.
After a while, they came out. When they came out, the Country mouse said, "I do not like living in the city. I like living in my hole in the field. For it is nicer to be poor and happy, than to be rich and tscared at the time."
Thank you for you listening. And hope you enjoyed the story!

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