帮忙看看一个英语句子这么写对不对It also sent a clear message to the outside world about his aspirations这句话改写成It also sent a clear message about his aspirations to the outside world 行么?如果不行为什么?

帮忙看看一个英语句子这么写对不对It also sent a clear message to the outside world about his aspirations这句话改写成It also sent a clear message about his aspirations to the outside world 行么?如果不行为什么?
帮忙看看一个英语句子这么写对不对
It also sent a clear message to the outside world about his aspirations
这句话改写成
It also sent a clear message about his aspirations to the outside world
行么?如果不行为什么?

帮忙看看一个英语句子这么写对不对It also sent a clear message to the outside world about his aspirations这句话改写成It also sent a clear message about his aspirations to the outside world 行么?如果不行为什么?
这两句都可以的.
但个人认为,后者比前者更妥.因为,about his aspirations 介词短语应当紧跟被修饰的名词message.
It 作为无人称代词可以指任何说话人的所指意图,可以用的.

可以的，但是发消息的为什么是it,后面为什么用his,前后不呼应，应该是He also sent...

可以，请放心好了

都可以，状语的位置是灵活的