请帮忙修改一篇英语作文,My hobbyEvery one have many hobbies,of course,the same as me.My favorite sports is basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch

请帮忙修改一篇英语作文,My hobbyEvery one have many hobbies,of course,the same as me.My favorite sports is basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch
请帮忙修改一篇英语作文,
My hobby
Every one have many hobbies,of course,the same as me.
My favorite sports is basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch NBA basktball games.
Also,I like computer games like many children.My favorite compuer game is Cross Fire.This game like that very famous game called Counter-Skrike.
My hobby is here.How about you?

请帮忙修改一篇英语作文,My hobbyEvery one have many hobbies,of course,the same as me.My favorite sports is basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch
Everyone has many hobbies.Of course,me,too.
My favorite sport is playing basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch NBA basktball games.
Also,I like computer games like many children.My favorite compuer game is Cross Fire.This game likes the very famous game called Counter-Skrike.
My hobby is above.How about you?

My hobby(改为hobbies)
Every one have(改为has) many hobbies,of course,(添上it is)the same as me.
My favorite sports(改为sport) is (添上playing)basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,bu...

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My hobby(改为hobbies)
Every one have(改为has) many hobbies,of course,(添上it is)the same as me.
My favorite sports(改为sport) is (添上playing)basketball.Although my basketball skill isn't very good,but(去掉but) I still like basketball.I often play basketball with my friends,and watch NBA basktball(改为basketball) games.
Also,I like computer games like many children.My favorite compuer game is Cross Fire.This game(添上is) like that(最好改为the) very famous game called Counter-Skrike.
My hobby(改为hobbies) is(改为are) here.How about you?

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