请英语高手帮忙修改语法错误.Along with the computer application increasingly wide and deep,the height of the development of information technology,network is gradually into people's lives.So the network to our life benefits more or the ha

请英语高手帮忙修改语法错误.Along with the computer application increasingly wide and deep,the height of the development of information technology,network is gradually into people's lives.So the network to our life benefits more or the ha
请英语高手帮忙修改语法错误.
Along with the computer application increasingly wide and deep,the height of the development of information technology,network is gradually into people's lives.So the network to our life benefits more or the harm?

请英语高手帮忙修改语法错误.Along with the computer application increasingly wide and deep,the height of the development of information technology,network is gradually into people's lives.So the network to our life benefits more or the ha
你这里的语法错误很多啊.我尽量在你的基础上改吧.
Along with the computer application increasinged widely and deeply and the fast development
of information technology,the network is gradually intergrated into people's lives.So the network is good or harm to our life.
如果不知道为什么,

Along with the wide and deep application of computer and the high-speed development of information technology, the Internet is found "on every desk and in every home." So, is the Internet good or bad for our daily life?